A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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A true human feelings right there.
And I wholeheartedly agree with this.
We are not ponies.
Well, this chapter was a big whirlwind of talky talks with a slice of crazy death drug fruit juice
The way God was shown here, was an oddly pleasant depiction of God though
God is Morgan Freeman.
I know those cat books, I used to love them.Warriors was a great series, in truth I would find that as a great little side plot at fluttershy's with her cats.
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7964117 It would make for an interesting Mini-Arch
I was a little disturbed with the yarrow since I remembered reading somewhere that it induced vomiting. Maybe that was just from some cat related book I read. OI MATE! YE THOUGHT I WOULDNT SEE THE WARRIORS EASTEREGG! I love ye for that!
This started playing at the beginning of the gore section, and by god was it beautiful to read with it playing
https://youtu.be/dokv7QynBqQ
Maybe that was just from some cat related book I read as a child I fucking love you and i love the Warrior books as well
Yarrow to induce vomiting, Greenleaf to help with both Greencough and Whitecough, Poppy seeds to aid in sleeping, cobwebs to help stop bleeding... I always preferred the Medicine Cats to their warrior brethren.
Morgan Freeman isn't really short, but at least you described his voice accurately.
When I first started this story, I was on the fence about the main character. However, some of my favorite stories have involved despicable characters who I eventually grow to enjoy.
Having said that: I've crossed the line into genuine curiosity about how Max will continue to develop, and I think this is one I'll be keeping on my reading list
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Glad you're interested enough to keep on reading. I've heard tell from birds aplenty that it's not a bad way to spend your time.
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Agreed
Al fin empieza a salir otros personajes y ese Dios es el de al Diablo con el Diablo
I thought your description of gods personality was accurate.
Your description of god is perfectly in line with the belief system known as deism.
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Nice to know that I've been calling myself the right thing.
Your depiction of God was hilarious, don't know if it was supposed to be funny but that shit had me on the floor.
Okay my dudes, meeting God deus ex machina Style was complete nonsense?... yes... what did I care?... no not a single fuck was given.
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Your name says 'tinman' but that message was as mixed as 'poly-alloy-man'
I honestly expected this. It's how it usually goes, meet some powerful entity, talk to them, they drop the human back in. BUT. What God did to Max actually affects your writing beyond simple storytelling and I love that very much. Clap and a half.
I also enjoyed how you foreshadowed the Pinkie coin toss by having Max refer to her as that during his convo with Rare's.
Honestly makes me want to keep reading more while I can't come up with anything solid for my own story.
Sidenote: for some reason my mind instantly went to Kevin Hart when you introduced God.
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Party on, glad the wordstack is good for something.
God was Gary Coleman. Kevin Hart is short, but he know what Willis be talkin' bout
That portrayal of the asshat in the clouds was a refreshing change of pace.
“I don’t even get me, but the few friends I have left because of your bullshit pinkie, have a better understanding than I do,”
maybe you can add that in? it was her that was the catalyst after all,
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The phrase in and of itself was the jab with the same meaning c:
Hahahaha, I can’t believe this, I love it
Btw I dunno how could you say he’s not a good person, I would go as far as to say he’s almost fucking angelic, ‘cause I can tell you right know, no one I’ve ever meet would let ANY of the shit he went through pass by.
Loving it so far, I have my disagreement here and there but for the most part your story is amazing.