Great chapter. I really like how Maximus joked and teased with Celestia while bonding with Luna. I'm also glad that Maximus pointed out that the incident with AJ in the previous chapter was disproportionate and that her feeling guilty isn't enough to earn his forgiveness. Overall, I loved this chapter.

This is fuckin awesome. Please keep up with your amazing writing skills.

OMG is Luna hiring Max for a job!

phew good to know I was worried over nothing when it came to the whole almost murder issue.

Hey I just wanted to tell you that I'm really enjoying this story so far, its a shame you haven't gotten a lot of views out of it considering how much you put into to it, its a lot better done then some of the top rated stories on this site and you shouldn't feel bad about the cloppy bits either because there actually much more tastefully done then most of the cringgy shit you see in most top viewed mature stories that I usually skip through, so good job on that and keep up the awesome work your doing its not going un appreciated.

I’m not a noble and I doubt I’ll ever be one of those stuck up, vapid cock snots.

HAhahahaha That made me laugh so much.

While, the situation may feel unjustly or unsatisfying to the reader, as long as everything goes along with the established people then it works perfectly and can be as hair-tearing and dick-ripping as possible. Best to not go to extremes all the times, have characters find compromise, or so I found from the readers perspective.

Edit: I only just realised how long ago the story has begun, so I'mma hold these comments off until I get to newer times.

“Now that... That is a skill We could use. How wouldst thou feel about taking a job of sorts?”

I bet it's a prank

So, I am supposed to hate the main antagonist or like him?

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Why not a little of both?

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If I remember correctly before the edit...

It is not something so funny.