A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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honestly didn't see that split persona thing happening, then again i'm starting to lose my ongoing battle with mental fatigue.
will reread 2morrow. otherwise very nice ending to this arc, really hoping to see more of kaid, mainly the sweet kaid x roxy action.
ok no sleep time. k thx bye.
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I was hoping that I channeled the good side of M Knight Shyamalan there.
you never know what the future holds.
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That's a curse in one of the Terry Pratchett's books. May you live during interesting times, I believe it was.
Besides, yay! A new chapter! I haven't thought it would've gone this way, but hey, if it's not broken, don't try to repair it. Good work as always, keep it up!
To be honest I fucking loved this, though that might only be because I'm crazy enough to want split personalities, I'm honestly not sure why (it might just be due to the way some of the stories on this site portray it, but I would love to have another personality or two in my head). Though I personally love the idea of seeing Kaid again, as well as the others. I also got one hell of a laugh out of learning that a part of Max it gay, I definitely wasn't expecting that for damn sure.
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Two words: Sixth Sense. He doesn't always make silly shit.
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I enjoyed writing the twist, but I never could get into the multiple personalities thing myself.
Max is technically even more gay since Prince is bisexual.
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I fucking love the multiple personality thing (though you already know that ), it's just something that I find interesting when done right, though it honestly can be a bit of a detriment when done wrong as well. I personally like the way you did it as it doesn't feel like each personality is just Max with minor differences, but that they're actually their own people as well, truly amazing.
I will admit I am curious though, why write the mini-arc if you could never get into the whole multiple personality thing?
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I mean that I couldn't get into the idea of having more voices in my head, but writing about it is fun.
Glad you enjoyed the mini-arc, though.
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Ohhhhh, I get that, I'm personally just the right kind of crazy that the idea sounds appealing (so long as it's not the voice of Pinkie Pie from smileHD and cupcakesHD)
Holy shit. Don't tell me they're going to keep that secret hatred bottled up forever. That'll just make it FUBAR. It's got to come out at some point.
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As someone with schizophrenia, Imma go ahead and warn you that having random vpices chime in and say shit that's not important to anything is just annoying, especially if it sounds like they're calling your name when you know someone else is in the house, so you go and see what the other person wanted, but no, BAM! IT was the fucking voice, screwing with you.
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Imma stop you right there, cause I already have that shit too. I'm not exactly bad per say, but I can't watch youtube or listen to music without hearing quiet voices calling my name constantly (shit even happens clear as day sometimes when I'm sleeping, that's annoying). I also constantly hear little back thoughts in my head that respond to literally everything I see, resulting at me yelling at myself in my own head for the random shit. The reason that I find the whole multiple personalities thing interesting is because it wouldn't just be 'random' voices, but would basically be another real person in my head.
FYI, not that you had anyway to know this, but hardcore schizophrenia runs in my family, with both my mom and one of her sisters being hit fucking HARD with it, as well as them being bipolar at the same time was not fun. my own mother would literally say that she was getting messages from the fucking ether, and would sit in her room talking to people that weren't there as though she was talking on the phone (even though she wasn't using a phone). Also, I know it is a bit romanticized, but I'm talking about the type of multiple personalities that you would find in this story, or even in diaries of a mad man, as much as that is not possible it just seems rather enjoyable to someone who has a hard time keeping close friends as it would be like having someone close that I can tell how I truly feel without fear of judgment (It would also be like having a sibling that's less likely to bitch at me or stab me in the back first chance they got).
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I just don't see how they would get along in your head, and sharing the space with someone sketches me out. I mean, like, ow are ou supposed to fap in peace wen someone's watching you stroke? Seeing you get into the Neto-Futa-Loli-Foot-Dwarf porn that makes every red blooded man cum in seconds wold scar both of you. I just don't like the idea of having someone monitor me at all times since I already feel like I'm constantly under surveillance, y'know?
I wish you the best of luck with your personal plate of bullshit. I added a little salt to mine by way of medication, but the seasonings only make it a little more palatable.
Don’t tell Twilight we all secretly hate her, Twilight reads the journal, masterful way to get around the don’t tell Twilight Kaid
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Thanks for clearing that up
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Same that used to happen to me a ton
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I try to clear up misconceptions as they come along. It just helps things make sense, and talking to readers is dope.
Holy shite, what a great chapter. The emotions were conveyed masterfully and you actually made my eyeballs sweaty.
I enjoyed the multiple personality reveal and think it works well with Max as a character.
As always, thanks for posting.
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and sweat harder.
Wow, fantastic chapter! Loving this series more and more. I just finished reading this and the last chapter, it seems that when Kaid went full blown researcher you did some research! Whever or not you were bullsh*ting your way through it sounded like actual science. Good job. :)
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I'm a being made of science and bullshit, baby. Every atom is a waterfall of life.
So much drama, I felt so sorry for Kaid at the end. Was hoping it's be memories coming back and still one person. But damn if this isn't some sort of masterstroke of dramatic ingenuity.
Also, digging researcher Kaid. The science of magic stuff he was doing stuck out as really neat.