A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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you want principle here.
huh neato.
i miss lupa :////
What you did to Spike was evil. Pure God damn evil. And then QT. Raid her Cupcake Castle, they said. It will be fun, they said. If I weren't reading it when I was working, I would have been laughing my ass off. That was brilliant, and thank you for sharing this. And good to know that chapters aren't short. I mean, what is 2-3k words, for someone who reads fast? A couple of minutes, at best.
Overall, great job. It will be a truly grand experience to read all of it again in future, when you end the story. Thank you again for sharing your story.
Great chapter, I'm happy to see that Max is trying to forgive Noir and I hope he succeeds. I miss their interactions.
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Glad to have your attention, and I try to keep things interesting enough to warrant reading it.
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Fixed
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I'll raid your Cupcake Castle for the lols.
Yea, I'm not fond of short chapters, though I'm trying it with some smut,
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It never left?
The moment I read the words “The Bee and Bard Inn” I couldn’t stop thinking about it and then I realized that it’s from Skyrim. I’m so proud of you.
Edit:
I just noticed the Pawned Prawn as well.
It's the little things. This is absolutely brilliant!
Fucking hell man. This is nice.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. It came at the right time since I'm really sick right now.
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Glad I could accidentally make your day a little better.
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I thought I already replied to your comment, but whatever. Point being is that I didn't introduce scrying into A Thief's Tale for like, twenty chapters after Max got lost. Shit just never really came across as an idea to me until a little later in the game, which can be evidenced by
1: Luna having to use Crimson to spy on Max
2: Celestia not outright scrying Max for the Adolph event
3: Twilight helping chase Max around Ponyville without magic
Like, I straight up forgot that scrying was a thing. It's hard to have all of your bases covered, but I could just as easily say that
1: Luna doesn't have time to watch over people all the time
2: Celestia's enchantments to the Warbling Blade were good enough.
3: Twilight wanted to have some fun with her friends
And as far as the Everfree goes, old reliable can be said and it's a helluva cop out, but it's not wrong. Saying that the Everfree's Chaos magic made it impossible to get a lock on ol' Maxxy makes sense.
Seriously though, swag on you for catching it.
This is Ponyville, not Riften dammit!
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I don't know what you're talking about.
Mate... I could hug you right now.
You should have made a reference to the marriage joke too. (Arrow to the knee)
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Have a hug anytime. You get the whipped cream, I'll get the chocolate syrup.
“Well, the best inn in Ponyville would have to be The Bee and Barb, just down the street from the Pawned Prawn."
Freaking Skyrim references, you now have my respect
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Oh my god I just died like cmon!