A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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I can already tell Celestia is going to be livid/overjoyed when he comes back and I imagine that Luna will also be happy
A whole friggin month! Dude that's insane. Betcha his mares are gonna be right thrilled to have him back. Who knows they probably thought that not inviting him caused him to go missing.
i hope he gets to keep the sword and battle ax
7987772 I find it perfect that this comes from you. Viva Pizza
7989208 Thanks for the advice. I prefer to keep things moving since getting bogged down in little details was a problem for me, but I'll try to even out the pacing.
Didnt know this was updated again until an hour ago. Cant wait for the next one
7991910 Art imitates life. Max is brilliant at times, completely retarded as others. It's something I struggle with as well
More please
8004385 I actually start addressing that issue in the next chapter. I wrote my mane 6 so that they would be flawed because that's just how people are, and I think that ponies that are only a few points away from being human should have human flaws.
I'm glad you're paying attention to the story, though.
Ahora parece que empieza algo más interesante y esos poderes se parecen más al anillo de linterna verde
About trip chapters (and several years) too late, but I host realized thanks to Cunties snooping that we didn't get to read the Max-Apple-Shy threesome! CURSE YOU PINKIE!
u wot m8? When did that happen? Did we know this already?
Edit: nm. When he died, yeah?
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, what's this reference that i'm on? hmmmmm could it be
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Pretty sure it’s just a turn of phrase mate.
I have a question that’s been bothering me for a while, He’s not friends with Pinkie, or at least he simply shouldn’t. You’re not force to be friends with your friends friends (lol) and he has a terrible relation with her and he simply dislikes her, I don’t get why you’re pushing their friendship. In another note I simply don’t know how he’s improving at all, indeed he has receive some help but in most cases he’s been hurt way more than help by the ponies, if he already was fucked in the head and quite cold in the heart it makes no sense that he would change for any of them, excluding Celestia and his Ex.
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Dude, It seems they have the worst qualities of humans, I mean I’ve never meet people as hatable and annoying as them.
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MAx has no reason to be friends with Pinkie other than staying friends with the rest of the girls
Ay yo Granny, tell me more!