A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Srry im still mad about the prank
Edit: i reread the entire thing 3 times and im still lost, did he lose his true theft?, and if so, how he did he teleport.
And why did god get mad?
Was it because of the fight with twilight???
WTf
I understand that Max doesn't exactly care for the new arm, but man, an arm that can jack off is still an arm worth having, especially if it comes with ability to make killing shit easier. Not to mention the fact that the arm is made out of metal that can actually hurt monsters with more ease than just about any other metals, so there is that.
(Man what I wouldn't give to have his left arm, especially since I'm already a righty)
What'd he do to piss god off that god was like go take his fuckin arm?...
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I know what you mean, and not only that Twilight asked him not to kill, it's bloody stupid bc there a freaking war.
Ok, can someone clarify this for me? Did God have the Greek smith-god take Max's arm because he swore to Twilight that he would not kill or what?
Wasn’t she there when max fought Blueblood?
Also did god take his arm
Because he teleported and stuck his hand through the bullet proof window in front of Laura Bodewig?
eh, fully neato.
He getting to be just like a Second Son?
Maybe he just needs a pet to keep him company.
Maybe a cute bunny that he can play Wheres Walter wiith.
Im sure Discord would get a real kick out of releasing SCP 524 on Equestria.
Im confused, I thought his True Theft was bound to his left arm, so thats still there or he lost it before he could really make use of it? Wonder just how complex, self sentient, intelligent Uncle Festus left arm, say call it Toolie, or T-X. If its that complex, he can bring it down, around to him, way of thinking, eventually get the equivalent of he isnt allowed to see how it itself is built, but it can give him a HUD, virtualisation enviroment that eh can use for researching its abilities, setting up sequence macros and notifications etc?
Then again, there are the next few chapters already written, so things like this are already considered and explained one way or the other?
If queen Griffon is too tight for D, how is she expected to push hordes of fat chicks, or even clutches like an ostrich? That could do with some help?
Seriously though, what'd Max do to get his arm chopped off? Laura shook his hand then looked at it in horror or something, and thats it. It doesn't explain what happened
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You gave me cancer. Thanks.
Yeah this is where I stop reading. Main character basically turns into a doormat.
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Why wouldn't I?
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Plot hole. Fuck.
Nah, Max's mistake gets revealed later on.
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STAHP before I hand you an arse-whooping
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It gets explained in a few chapters
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The matter gets addressed later, and it's mentioned a few times. It's n0ot just how things are going to be, in fairness.
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I feel it.
Sad thing about that It will be explained later deal? If it has such long-standing consequences as him losing his arm? That kinda thing needs to make sense right away to not make it look like something is stupidly wrong with the story structure.
i could go on a long rant of why i dont like how you made him promise to stop killing, but im not cause all it would do is make me madder and make this longer so i'll leave it at this: I really dislike how you had him promise not to kill in the future you've basically turned him into a pony have you forgotten that he's at WAR, beings will die it's either them or us, i hope he can take it back
856194 remember though he promised twilight that wouldn't kill anymore
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I ain't forget shit, fam.
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No
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you cant fight a war have no one die and he's a prince he will have to do this to protect his ponies leaving them alive just allows them to come back later besides how would he have handled mexicolt if he didnt destroy that city, the leader was planning on joining discord with or without his help so he had to die to rid discord of an ally as is a princes duty or soldiers and he's both but im waiting to see what he does
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God in that scene was actually Gary Coleman.
So are we going to find out why God wanted Max’s arm? That question asked I just want to say that I love TwilightxHuman shops where Twilight becomes more outgoing, daring, dirty, vulgar which so far of the stories I’ve read on Fimfiction I believe only your story and “The Perfect Mate; Twilight Saga” have done. On that note if anybody else knows of any stories like the one I described reply to this with the link please. I eagerly await your next chapter Revenant.
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Next chapter drops Sunday/Monday at midnight, so hold onto your trousers and get ready to snake the drain, because shit gets weird
I can't believe he lost his arm maybe I'll have some kind of missiles or gun in it be kind of cool for a new arm you might get a new sword. And what's going to happen with this old arm.
Having a real hard time with the characters, love the story but between every single hypocritical cunt and the doormat that just lets them walk over him it's getting more difficult to give half a shit about whats happens to any of them.
At this point I'd be willing to see discord win just to wipe the rest of them out.
wel i spotted a infinite stratos reference.
you picked my favorite character from that anime.
#ISseason3
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Lol, i remember that show. I really wish a lot of those shows would at least finish off properly. I didn't realise what the reference was since it's been a minute since i watched it, but yeah. Too bad im too lazy to go find it lol
Twilight is so gonna have to kill a lot of people, isn't she? I guess she shouldn't been a dumbass.
Mom said it's my turn with the brain
I’m confused ...
So Twilight force him with guilt to make a promise he knew he couldn’t keep, Then bullshit magic made him sing his feeling, Then god ripped his arm out because he was force to stop simping over Twilight, and now he : has to simp Twilight with the fear of mutilation, can’t kill because he promise it.
You just tamed and whipped the fucked out of your protagonist, honestly I don’t like this chapter at all but I guess you have a reason.
Could you please tell me from now if he’s gonna keep that promise.
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He is not gonna keep that promise, fam. Fuck that shit.
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I love you so god damn much, as soon as I finish the original I will read the rewrite
of cause it isn't natural, it's made by Hephaestus, god of the Smiths,