A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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what he doesnt know his Dick is magic
Only took me a fucking hour but finally finished it.
8105764 But was it worth it?
if i hadnt been at work when i read that part i would have died laughing in this case i just myself look crazy to my co workers trying to hold in my snickering
8105809 yes.
You for someone who claims he is not a slut max sure sleeps with a lot of mares. 7 and counting Big Mac called it.
8107227 The rule of thumb at my old highschool was that if you keep it under double digits, you're golden.
(Looks at the word count of Chapter 25)
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I'm gonna need plenty of...
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...if I'm ever going to finish reading this.
8108534 Good luck, bookmarks are your friend.
This chapter took Me 4 days to read Holy hell its so long! But i loved everyfing about it.
Fleur is so pretty i Love here can't wait to read more. stay cool.
8108579 In the time it took you to finish that chapter, I wrote another one. That makes me proud.
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Why do that if my tablet can allow me to read it offline as long as I have it open in a tab?
8108805 Even better. You could always try printing the story too, but that sounds like too much work
Awfully rude to shake another person's head
Man, I like this story a lot, but the length of this chapter almost made me quit a couple times. I'm so used to cycling through a few stories at once, alternating by chapters. It's been awhile since I've read 50k words of the same characters all in a row!
That being said, I still like the characters, and am staying onboard. Cheers!
"Aaaaaahhhhhhhmmmm Hereri tha eighth, ah am...."
Whew boy! From sexy fun buzzers to Rarity drama, with naughty nobles everywhere! This chapter had a LOT, though I'm expecting it at this point.
Loving it too! Have to admit, a chapter or two ago I was totally expecting Max to pull some shit with his tentacle addition when I read he was going to twilight's parents for hearthswarming. Didn't happen, but it was still fun. I love his interactions with folks!
Interesting chapter, much shenanigans, much sex, amazed he trusts Fleur so easily after finding out she's an operative.
Actually, I think in this chapter in particular I can see a reason why this is being compared to DOAM. You know. The Fancy is Gayyyyyy thing. I like the extra depth, although I felt like there were too many chunks describing him smoking. Sure, smoking is what he does and often, but not needed to be written down by him each time he does it. I just don't feel like it would be something he would do unless it's during a memorable moment.
All in all, nice chapter, though parts seemed repetitive, gave me some courage to try an idea I've been tossing around.
ALSO: Important Note: He seems to constantly find people that he enjoys interacting with or those that enjoy interacting with him. Like, sure, he might meet those kinds of people but the dialogue isn't there, so we don't know how he interacts with someone who doesn't appreciate him, maybe not hate, but not appreciate. Got to check the Ego once in a while.
Sucky sucky!!
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No relation, but amusing all the same
There’s a comic around that depicts Fleur is a secret agent from Celestia’s supposedly closed down “Canterlot organization” as Bon-B- i mean “agent Sweetie Drops” says doing the 100th Episode,
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Celestia Utopian dictator confirmed