A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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A very nice job of avoiding the Escalation Problem.
If I hadn't already thumbed the fic, you'd have another.
fixes:
and when we got their
*there
Someone who's good at art should draw Max as he is now
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Dodged like the draft
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Not when he was firing te person he was talking to
Don't'cha just love reading a 36,000 word chapter and then, when you're 10,000 words in accidentally hitting refresh on your phone and losing your place because you scroll with your left index finger and refresh is on the bottom left of your browser? Happens more often than you might think :P.
Anyways loved this chapter and especially loved the part in which Max find out the guards have been slacking and calls them all over complete with lightning and glowing eyes!
Also the salute thing made me chuckle unexpectedly as in GTA V Online my crew (known as The Hyde Corporation or HydeCorp for short) uses the same salute.
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We'll try to use a different browser, duh. I'd recommend Firefox. It became all cool again with their project quantum. It doesn't even have a refresh button on the panel because it really isn't that important and you have to tap menu button first. It also returns to exactly the same place after the refresh. And it also have extensions there which is just awesome when you like to use adblocking and custom scripts and styles. And everything still runs fast with all that!
What really annoys me in Mobile version of this site is a sidebar which I open on accident from time to time but in some cases it doesn't go away either at all or partially and overlaps text so I have to refresh a page to get rid of it. That pissed me off to no end when I used Google Crome because that particular browser didn't saved position on the page properly. With Firefox it became less awful, but it still annoys me from time to time by the sheer fact that it does stuck on the screen at all.
Also: Casper Magic, you are awesome and your story is great even though you literally replaced Discord with your own character and dropped a few things from the official story, but you have all the rights to do so anyway and you did it in the way that didn't suck as much as it could. Well, the fact that you yourself lost interest to The War shtick means that build up part was a few thousand words too long to keep carrying it even though it was fun to read on it's own.
It would be hilarious if your version of Twilight will end up introduced to actual MLP, thought, when Max finally give Twi her own laptop with Internet connection to Earth because he can and he knows Twi loves books and looks like interested in our science at least a little. Even though she might not like our history.
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Ah, fuck.
I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but A Thief's Tale has been completed and Twilight didn't get her own laptop in the main story. I might do a few scrap chapters of fling-ideas that will include Twilight becoming a complete hikkikomori/otaku/NEET beyond all comparison, but for now, she is as she do.
This story is amazing! It's so well-written, and the characters have an incredible amount of depth! Also, the building of the characters-and so many, at that-is phenomenal! This is, by far, my favorite story that I've had the pleasure of reading. Also, every time Max turns into Roxy, I imagine him/her as Naruko (Naruto's Sexy Jutsu form) with brown hair.
Mmmmf. Button's mom is bestmilf. It was awesome that you introduced her like this and nicely surprising. I thought she was original for a while then bam! Button's mom! Care is wonderful! And Age-play is such a fun kink to indulge in.
The best way for the sub to actually keep their pride in tact is knowing their every word, their every act, seriously pleases and arouses the partner. If you get off on giving other people pleasure/arousal, it makes it even more fun.
Also looking forward to dealing with the whole Noir issue. Clearly its big. And has been nicely delayed. Still love this story and love how addicting it is.
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She honestly is. Lord forbid a chesty, milfy brunette with those beautiful blue eyes look my way twice in the same minute. If sjhe asks for my credit card number, I'm prolly gonna give it to her. I knew I wanted to work her in at some point, but the phone I originally started my notes with is dead and broken, and my notes for the story are lost to a reformat. Life is tough, thus smoke stuff.
The problem with the age-play thing is that Max
And finally, he has a bit of a Oedipus complex with other people's mothers. Not teachers. Sexy librarians though. Mmm.
A backstabbing of such magnitude would definitely encourage bad blood, so it felt natural to hold off on handling the Noir thing for a few chapters. I just wish I remembered what I did.
Lotsa stuff! Haven't commented in a bit since pre-wedding roundabouts.
Still digging the story, enjoying the castle life pace so far. TLC sounds nice and delicious, and Kaid is a great bloke! From (preventing) bullying to rape, he's grea....pe? Fuck.
Anyway, loving it! Now kinda wondering what's up with Diamond Tiara since we saw her last. Been a while and bullies reminded me of it.
Alllllso, glad Twilight and Kaid worked some (nonsexy) kinks out in their relationship.
She who must not be named kinda irks me, guessing it's Noir and that they still haven't made up at this point...here's hoping? -shrugs and goes to the next chapter eagerly-