A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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This story is bloody amazing. The characters are really fleshed out and the main protagonist is a likeable smartass.
Keep up the good work and can not wait for the next chapter.
Like the long chapter. You could split it into slightly smaller stuff so you have extra to put out if you find yourself busy with something. For example, splitting up a big chapter like this and putting out the chapters at different times of your choice. That would = more upupdates for people who like the story, and less waiting for updates. On top of that, more time for you to write or do whatever you want without worrying about having to rush to finish a big chapter.
7911861 I would prefer to keep the chapters longer because I like to give people something to sit down and enjoy rather than glance over for three or so minutes like some of my favorite authors do. I rarely find myself able to enjoy a story with smaller chapters. I know it's basically up to personal preference, but I do appreciate the input.
7912470 yeah same fam wasnt talking about that 3000 word chapter then update in two months shit some people do. Its so irritating. But i do love them long chapters. Lets me sit there and get immersed in the story. Thanks for that.
Weed for the win!!!
And to set the mood, encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQyjSYyjGmMeuZkVAr3NcH4o_dTNQHg4HhKU13HCNV56M8tJrJG7_4rdaWt
bon appetite!!!
7913177 No problem. Small, infrequent updates bother me as well. If one is going to write small chapters, at least pump them out weekly. Otherwise, it's just a tease and nothing really happens or too much happens.
This chapter got me immersed really good.
Longest... chapter... ever...
Felt like I was running a marathon, but good job.
7913508 I understand because I'm the same way
I thought I read long chapters before. I stand wrong.
OK so so far this is the chapter I'm up to and no I'm not re-reading the story I just decided to give it another shot cause I found it,read to chapter 4 I thing,then left it but found it again later.Also you got the American statement right as well.I never realised it but that is how I think cause I'm American,I've never left the country,but I have always thought,hey the Canadians,the British,the Indians,the Australians,they are all pretty good guys with pretty good countries,but at the same time,America is the fucking best you fucking motherfuckers.Not exactly that harsh but I feel that's the best way to get the point across....meh.Im not going to do shit to change but hey at least I know right?My opinion will probably change when I actually do go to another country.
As far as story wise I think you are doing tremendously good so far with what you are doing so no problems there as far as I'm concerned.Cant say the same for others though.
Also sorry if I sound like a dick with the america is best part,I'm not trying to,and sorry if my Grammer was absolutely horrendous with this comment,i have never been good at Grammer period,nor spelling.Anyway that's where I stand so far so keep up the good work.
Ah yeah...I remember my first time having sex. One of the wildest ones I have been through. Do I regret it.....fuck no
too depressing makes it boring 0 out of 5 bombstars
All you need is a bow of weed laced brownies and your good
You know, I can think of another N-word other than Nag that has very similar circumstances...
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Great, now I've gotta play the song for my stoner coworker
las relaciones son creíbles sin el típico amor a primera vista.
God, these long chapters just give you do much to comment about!
...but I'll just say that I thought the stoned "guess that mare's taste" session was one of my favorite silly-sexy interactions
Also this story has been a real good read so far! Thank ya!
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Thanks my dude, and glad you've been enjoying the... story. Yes, the sequence of words. The dribble-drabble dibble-dabble. Have fun with that.
Brilliant chapter.
What a roller coaster of emotions and events!
Very well written, especially with the introduction of pot.
You fucking fucker had me smiling through and through and almost made me shed a legit fucking tear.
Clap and a half.
P.S: I can see how you think events out with resolutions to them and that helps me as a reader be more calm about the sudden prospect of a harem which has been horribly overused and abused by many others. Not only can he lose partners, not everything is straight forward and simple with everyone! Very nice.
To quote a Soviet Badger...."It Don't go down, it DO go down."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-_yOt5NfcMA
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I can't remember the context of your comment in this particular moment (Blame the rewrites and 2m words cx), but yeah, Max isn't that choosy with his partners, but everyone has the inalienable, undeniable right to say 'no'
Also, hope you're still enjoying the story. Wish you would've started with the rewrites, but c'est la vie, non?
Ok, Story aside (which is really good by the way), I don’t understand the mentality of Max’s father. What exactly is noble of staying with someone who’s not only hurting you but your son ? What extacly is noble of submitting yourself and your beloved son to such cruelty, pain and torture ? In my opinion his Father was a good man but and imbecile and a bad father. Based only in the information given his mother brought less than nothing to the table, I would even go as far as to say she quite literally took from it.
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It's not an unusual situation for one parent to be abusive and worthless while the other parent is so downtrodden, they don't think they can leave. Look the hashtag #whyistayed and you'll have a better idea of what might have been going through Kinkaid's head while he was protecting his son from the only woman he ever truly loved