A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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This won't end well.
Ok, now I see the point of the lessons. But was it still necessary to lie about the extra week?
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No one lied about the extra week. They just sprung it on him at the last moment.
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But why? Was the progress not good enough?
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Celestia needed more time to teach Max. Twilight learned everything she had to give her in the allotted amount of time, but Max needed a little extra and Luna capitalized on it. I'm pretty sure that it was in the chapter while Luna and Celestia were playing the blame game at the mini-party
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Pardon my slow mind.
how tall are they
i think u mentioned it somewhere in a previous chapter
but your chapters are too damn long for me to go and look
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How tall are who exactly. You're being incredibly vague
awwww man i wanted to see the mayors and receptionists reactions to max being a prince
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eh
main six and the alicorns
and max
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Max is 5'9-5'11 depending on the state of his boots
Pinkie is 4'9 or so
Rainbow is about 5'0
Twilight is about 5'3
Rarity is 5'3 1/2
Applejack is 5'6
Fluttershy is 5'5
Celestia is about 6'5
Luna is about 5'10
Cadance is the same height as Max
Noir is a fucking giant at 7'0 flat
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hmm
thx
idk why i even asked that honestly xD
Fuckmothering vampires?
Also, damn you update fast.
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I fucked the fear turkey.
I actually slowed down a bit to keep the pressure off. Maybe your week passed quickly.
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No, it didn't. It's just I've never had a writer who writes as much as you update within a week. I love it though, so don't you dare stop.
Also, feel free on making amazing references. I had the urge to rewatch Hellsing Abridged when I read this yesterday, but it was 2 AM.
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I'll keep the same pace up for as long as I can, but until I get a job, writing is pretty much the only thing I do to fill my time.
I'll keep it up with the references since I like to put in little easter eggs. I'm currently writing Chapter Forty-Nine and I've dropped a few in there for your reading pleasure, some more obvious than others.
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Nice, man. I'll be sure to be on the lookout when you release it. I might not get them all, a lot like Pony Anthology, but I'll sure try.
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The sad thing is that I've actually gone back and reread that very same chapter. I didn't catch that at all, but if you care to point them out and let me know which chapter it's from, I'll take care of it
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I'll try to make an assortment as I go through n read from now on. Thank ya for caring bout the little things
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Thank you for caring enough to point that shit out. Perfecshonism runs deep in my blood when it comes to writing.
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I just dunno what constitutes as a correction that really matters. There's little things like a missing "s" after a word here, an "a" or "the" there, but they're not that distracting
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Whatever you think is distracting would be a great help. I want my story to flow like molasses on a particularly warm day, straight into the cup of coffee that is the reader's mind.
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You got it boss man. Comments on shit that don't make a lick o sense comin right up!
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Glad you did catch it
That is such a weird thing to imagine. Rounded shoes of hooves. Shit's strange
I've been going to the same hair salon that my grandmother went to every three weeks for the last 14 years. I was only 4-5 when I started going there. I keep going there because of the memories and the owners know me pretty well.
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I gone to a salon of my own free accord exactly twice, and they didn't know how to cut my hair properly. Damn Caucasus mountain muhfuckers.
Is that a reference to this.
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The fear turkey has been sufficiently f**k'd
I'm not gonna lie. I'd of lost my shit too. XD Ah who am I kidding I damn near lost my shit reading it!