A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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What's life without a little self depreciation?
Great chapter, I like that you captured that no relationship is perfect no matter how good the people are individually, but I'm a little disappointed that there was no mention of Noir or Rainbow at all. I hope we can get some closure on those two. And I really don't want to see Max and Noir's relationship end like that. Rainbow is a meh, but I would like to see her reaction to being booted from the group.
Fucking loved the chapter, though I kinda wanted to skin Twilight for what she was doing (I hate cheaters with a burning passion so hot that it makes the suns own flames seem arctic in comparison) so that was an interesting feeling. Can't wait for the next chapter where I hopefully won't feel a blood boiling rage towards one of my favorite unicorns in the show.
First Rainbow, then Noir now Twiliight? oh! maybe Will and Bea as well?
(maybe not FIRST Rainbow, we ARE 59 chapters in)
but things are getting a bit TOO emotional and touchy feely. i feel like we're being led somewhere
and i dont know if i should be nervous or excited sooo nervouscited it is!
This version of Care isnt an Operative?
Looks like Max has a long ride to train her up to spec then.
A diety, infertile? Whats Max trying to do, make up for Zeus?
all in all, 10/11.
A bit mad, that Noir wasn't even mentioned in this chapter... (Their fight, I mean).
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Keks
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A slut that doesn't get everyone pregnant. Ha!
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Max really just tries not to dwell on it, and I know that gets brought up in the coming chapters.
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So, he's repressing the memory? That's not healthy, even for a god.
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I wouldn't say that he's repressing it per se, but he certainly doesn't like the way it hurts.
Taco lettuce cheese
Literally every chapter shite goes down
TY F’ing ty for that entire part
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You're welcome. I believe I'll be taking more shots at the fanbase in the future.
i cant wait to see rainbows reaction to being kicked out of the group and how will celestia take it when the elements dont work anymore though technically she doesnt need them as max is a god
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It has a gore tag are you daft?
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I mean, like, I wanted to point that out, but the shot was just too easy.
After 4 years I have finally found what that acronym means. Finally. Some say curiosity killed the cat but they forget the cat has nine lives.
Anyways awesome chapter as usual and on a side-note where the f*ck have I been? Mostly installing and customizing my GPU tbh..... Also Christmas and family all that jazz. But I'm back now! So I can read more stories! Yaaaaay. Regardless keep up the good work. ;)
Who here thinks Queen Chrysalis has something to do with this.
Divorce would be the best option after the BS she just pulled, but apparently doormat just can't get enough of being mistreated and taken for granted.
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Dude, Max is bound by the Covenant. He couldn't leave Twilight if he wanted to, and if he did, he'd get killed/sealed/imprisoned because3 he would, without a doubt, turn completely evil. He's a 'doormat' for the people he loves because of severe abandonment issues, co-dependency, and there are chapters where I just wanted to drive that home. Max is a badass at different points in the story, a decent guy, a terrible guy, and a weak guy, but it all culminates into him being damaged.
While I'm glad you've noticed that Max gets mistreated (because that's the point of writing it in in the first place), I'm sorry you're salty about it. It's just how the Equus world works. It's supposed to make your heart ache/piss you off on the guy's behalf.
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Nobody should be mad at Max, Twilight should be taking all the blame for drinking as much bleach as she apparently does. Honestly, it's basically a running gag that she can so casually hurt him at this point in the story. Lay off the chemicals Twatlight, the brain damage is becoming too severe.
Did Son Goku approve of this?