A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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broken bold closing tag.
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Pretty sure I got it, thanks for the heads up.
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Ha! European goober!
I couldn't be bothered to read back at Max pulling himself into the heavens. What did he do to piss off Kali so much that he'd make a chosen a slave?
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*She'd, and it's Max's state as a Chosen that made her take him. Most of the gods and goddess tend not to like Demi-Gods/Chosen because they're cocky and arrogant, much like they themselves. It also gets elaborated upon a little bit in the next chapter, but from what I remember, it wasn't exactly a multi-paragraph reason, but this is talking about something I wrote months ago, so fuck. Fuckity.
What did Max do all of he sudden to just shit up everything, it feels like he is just suffering to suffer right now without any reason.
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IT's something that I've had in play since before The War. Shit clears up.
Never seen your name in the comments before. Welcome to the Extra Words Section, friend.
This chapter, oh boy, this chapter.
that part about night light just, uh.
i have no realistic reaction that is capable of being displayed in words, and at this point i believe i've become a masochist through continued reading of this story.
help.
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I think the comment section is the Help Circle, my mans.
Shit went dark, very dark, practically with the speed of light. I can't say that this isn't good chapter, but morally... That here? Is evil on paper, so to say. Pure fucking evil. And now Max got himself sooo fucked. Seriously FUBAR. What will happen, we'll see in a couple of weeks.
Escalation is real
The magic was back for but a moment untill Kali dispelled that pretty quick. Too much man, too much. Might as well turn this into a tradgety if you dislike Max this much.
Also why is Max not on-top of how to hack time with his true theft, if not Max then at least Kaid would have been all over that.
WTF was going on in your life when you made this chapter and how many chapters before you got out of it cause like Max I want Twilight not Bruce back. Also, where was Celestial during all this you said you were expecting her in the chapter but she never showed up
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Been reading since the first chapter, this is the only time I've been confused, but I plan on sticking around till the end.
Dude shit did not Just hit the fan, its more like a tornado Just formed on top of a fecal pond the size of a lake
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It's one of the plans he was working on as far as the Pastel Skies went. IT was supposed to be a tricky dicky little spell that Kaid and Celestia could wip up, but words.
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I have no fucking clue about what I was thinking for most of this little hellish Arc, my mans. I'm pretty sure I just wanted to get it done and have it over with as soon as possible, as shitty as that sounds for an author to say about his own shit. It just made me not want to write for weeks, man.
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So how much longer do we have to deal with it
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It's ended in the next chapter, if I'm not being an actual fucktard right now
Ehhh, its good so far, not really my cup of tea since the character is a complete fucking degeneratebut I can see you worked alot with this so credit when its due
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He does non-degenerate things from time to time, like... Uh...
Ur mum ghey.
I'm out... I just there are no words to express my disgust in what happened in this chapter. Don't even care if it gets resolved at this point I'm not reading any further.
I stuck with it as far as I could go but the Mutagen scene... That pushed it waaaaaay to far.
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>He does nom degenerate things
I know that but that is not very often. He smokes pot, gets turned into a woman and God knows what else. Forgive me if I find him just a little bit disgusting and freakish
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Which now that I realise being a degenerate and having a drug addiction is what got his best friend killed in the first place, you would think he would know better but hey details. That doesnt mean your story is horrible though.
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What chapter are you talking about
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The latest one #70
Ok, so having stuck through 1.7 million words here, I feel I finally have enough skin in the game to comment here.
These last few chapters have actually managed to piss me off heavily. Congrats I guess... From finding out about Twilights past, to having Twilight change from insanity, to having Max be made a slave with his tongue cut out, has really gotten me riled up. This had better have a happy ending or imma be pissed. I still could dislike this I swear. Dont do us dirty.
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Dear God...
This... This... This
What in the whole of HEAVEN did just happen, did I just witness Cthulhu give birth to himself. Did Max just get turned into a slave... Poor Twilight man I knew this story was fucked but come on. The only thing saving this is Brume returning back to being Twilight
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I think Celly is dead by now, or sealed away
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Seriously though by this time if I was Max/Kaid I would have pulled suicide by god at this time
To quote from a story i think I would have said something along the lines of
"Kill me, fucking end it I have seen everything I loved and cared for destroyed and I am the reason for that. Fucking end my suffering"
Then I remember he is literally not allowed to die which is an even worse destiny
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Spoilers; It gets worse, but Max always fights until the end. Happy? No. Good? Depends on your definition. Better than being a slave?Defs. On some real.
Welcome to the comments though. Little salty it took you so long to say hi, but thank you for voicing your opinion.
Besides, Max tends to fuck up the people that draw blood on him, Applejack excluded. And fuckin' yeah: It's because she got the honky-tonk-badonkadonk. Wood smash; splinters everywhere.
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*opens mouth*
*realize Chapter Seventy-One is deer god pls*
*rethink words*
*close mouth*
Uhm... I got nothin'. The suffering 'ends' as it always must, tho
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I would be severly angry if it didnt, Max/Kaid might be a degenerate but he doesnt deserve what he is going through
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If there is a songs to Max/Kaids resistance it would be these with some modifications of course to fit the story
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4-L7l4GZ9lo
And this
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JA4baP70tVc
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Max's thoughts
Max's comfort
Max was never enough of a history buff to know old war songs, but you do you, fam.
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The first one was about the Hungarian anti communist revolution in 1956 and the second one about the Finnish civil war in 1917
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Hell yeah to both tho. Fight for your rights and freedoms, after all.
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So will Brume tear heaven apart and thus prove she DOES love Max/Kaid , or will she do nothing
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fukkin' how about I just edit the chapter and post that shit
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Wait you are nearly done? Your average chapter is 20000 AT LEAST
Wait let me guess you have been doing them months before you posted them... if its that case then i will entertain you no longer. Take as much time as you need
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Man, A Thief's Tale has been done since before I posted anything for QTW, RTP, and the last few chapters of MBK before the hiatus. I'm pretty sure CIS was done after RTR (Road to Redemption) as well.
I'll pray for you