A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Man, oh man.......where to start..... I love the chapter. I love the story as a whole and, of course, plan to keep reading. But I just feel the need to let you know how much I relate to Max, especially in chapters like this. I have felt the melancholy of the lighter side of depression plenty of times and this really brings it back, so job well done. I would be lieing if I didnt say I almost hated you for the feeling. Please.... just keep going. Too many of these stories end far too soon.
The rewrites are pretty far ahead, I'm just still working on bridging the gap between 25-36. After that, pretty much everything is as I'd like it, but I'll have to reread after that. I just have to say that I'm working on a new Chapter Fifty-Four and it seems to be going well. No spoilers since everything after 50 from the OG got scrapped, but I like how the tale's going.
Glad that I was able to relay Max's emotions in a way that could make you feel, and I relish in your potential hatred the longer you read. Feel, exist, and breathe. It's how you know you're alive.