A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Well Shit.
I think we can all agree that shit just went sideways. It is going to be interesting seeing how this develops
boo no sex or any relation with the gryphon queen maybe twilight is up for a threesome i know she said he would break her but wouldnt that just mean it would be more pleasurable and never be able to bed a gryphon since she'd be a size queen by then
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This better be an Austin Powers reference. Cuz if it's not, it hits Fat Bastard on the head.
Yes! The War is finally starting. I've been hyped for it for a while. Needles to say, this is my favourite fic on this sight right now. Can't wait for the next installment.
wait, wait everybody. Can he use his left hand to steal his left hand? I mean just think about it. He can steal anything, so wouldn't that fall within the realms of possibility. And for that matter. He could just steal Discord's divine spark. I'm just putting thoughts out there
I had better see some Carpet Ride later
Fucking kill me
Called the end. Knew it was going to happen
As a side note, do you need an editor? Or a second one?
Really wanted to see a fight between celestia and noir with magic... Also
8394275 Don't know how the didn't get closed before, but it's closed now.
It is an Austin Powers reference
8395732 I'm taking a swing and saying you didn't get the Gracile Chimp reference. Honestly, I still don't expect anyone to get it.
I wouldn't mind one. I edit all of my shit myself, and although I enjoy going over my work, I know I'm not the most thorough when it comes to self editing.
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I did not, no. Looks like ya hit it out of the park.
Next time you need anything edited and feel like askin for help, shoot me a message. I noticed quite a few errors in this one
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I'm trying to shove money into my screen, but I don't think it's working.
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Donate that money to the survivors of the Ronald McDonald Massacre
8398615 That son of a fucking cunt. Das my shit
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Dude, be realistic. Max being better at hand to hand combat than a multi-millenia old former warmonger is ludicrous, so unwad your panties and check that hostility. It don't fly here.
Not every chapter is going to be a mission, filled with sex, involve combat, or apparently be packed full of whatever you find interesting. I would actually rather have you stop reading my shit and fuck off if you leave hateful comments because you can't civilly discuss what you don't like. Like, read your comment, and check and see how constructive that criticism is. Short story turned into two words; it's not. It's not helpful at all.
It's been a hot minute since I've had someone come at me sideways like, so I'll warn you now; Next comment I get like this is getting screenshotted and I'll report your ass for toxicity. I have no patience for assholes who aren't funny.
A Perfect Sphere, is this based off of A Perfect Circle? If so your one of my favorite's, if not you still are.
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Don't take no shit from nobody, I like that.
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A Perfect Spere is the reference in which you seek and I'm thrilled that you got it. I meant to slip a Tool allusion in there too, but I had to settle for sound garden I think.
Man, it's just that I put a lot of time and effort into RTR for someone to insult it straight out with no intention of pointing out what was wrong. I like criticism. It helps me write better. I don't like glorified hatemail/trollmail. It just pusses me off
God, creepy as fuck
Ok... I'm not even a quarter through the chapter of the story and I'm making this comment. I do not understand why Roxie is a part of the story. Seriously I genuinely enjoy the story but Roxy is this bizarre fetishes sore thumb that shouldn't be here. She does not match the story she does not match the characters I don't know why she's here other than being pure fetish.
WEEELLLLLL since the last time we all really left night light i honestly wonder if he even could get it back up after what happened
not bein a dick but curious is all
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she is there for the shits and giggles we get wen max is turned against his wishes yet doesnt complain (much) because he honestly doesnt mind
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Gonna need flex seal just to take a piss
Dude I need this wedding with Twi like for yesterday, I can’t believe I’m saying this but his lack of action is giving ME blue balls. Dude just let him fuck Twi ‘cause the wedding thing doesn’t make much sense in the first place.
PD: loving the story BUT DAMN DO I SHIP HIM WITH NOIR