A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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D'aww.
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I understand where you're coming from, but the reason I addressed this is because it actually did bother me, plus it brought bad memories from when I was a teenager in school.
Rape is a bad thing, yes, but it doesn't involve anything that would take a person's life. Plus, many people never knew this and happens often, but if an author starts writing a story that involves lots of murder and suicide, they would assume the author is mentally ill because they think the author is in their story, despite the author's claim they're not.
Even if it's not in the rules of the site not to write anything that involves harming killing people or ponies in their stories, it's pretty much common sense that no sane writer would write as such.
While it's true my story, Beautiful Creatures, involve rape, I have my limits and morals on what I wanted to write, and suicide or serial killing isn't one of them.
That's why I brought my concerns up with 8193328.
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That's the point of writing sometimes, you want to let out all of that. Even if society has made believe that all these things are wrong, it's sometimes nice to just break moral rules. It's exciting and the thrill you get about saying horrible things is just wonderful.
IRL we have to hold our tounges and make sure we don't say everything that comes to mind. No matter where you are, no matter what you are doing, you always have to hold back. But here, we are free.
In the end, write what you want and other are going to do the same.
The only rule that I know of on FIMFiction is that you are not allowed to write human kids into sex scenes, foals, fillies, and colts, anthro or pony, are all OK to be written in though.
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Honestly, I don't see the thrill. Even if I tried writing something so horrific that it would sicken not just me, but the readers to the stomach, I'd cancel it then and there.
Major spoilers for chapter 37 ahead, read at your own risk.
The chase was nice. I thought it was going to be cliche and it started off in a cliche way but that disappeared pretty quickly when Max started talking in his whimsical ways.
Good, finally some time with Noir. She just has this wise vibe to her that I really enjoy.
I don't know if you took my advice about Max wanting to learn the shadow teleport or if you already had it done before I even mentioned that Max would like that... Probably it's the latter. So I'm just going to say, called it.
"I told him that men aged forty to sixty often have the very same problem" I feel so bad that it took me a whole minute of reading after that and thinking of it to finally get it. And then I felt worse when I read the line before. It's quite great you managed to fit that in so perfectly. It was so smooth until it hit me. These small moments just get me.
Hmm, the party was interesting but I feel like it was a bit drawn out, then again that was a nobles party so that was pretty much expected. I was as disappointed as Max that he couldn't talk to Fleur and Fancy longer, they always have something interesting to discuss.
The end was so cutesy and absolutely adorable, now I'm just waiting for his proposal. That is going to be great.
Not much else I can say about this chapter, but it was still wonderful.
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To each their own, I guess.
8203876 The chase really wasn't supposed to be as long as it is. I only meant it to be a quick little aside.
The fucking trippiest thing is that I was writing it in as I read your comment I was tempted to take it out because I hate being predictable, but I needed it to happen.
Gotta be slippery sometimes. If all the jokes were easy to spot, they wouldn't be as funny, in my opinion.
Things with Fleur and Fancy are developing as I want them to be. It's a little on the wonky side, but they're going how I want them to.
I'm waiting for the proposal too. It was supposed to have happened already, but then I keep writing.
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Wow, that is weird as all fuck. Dont worry about being predictable, I have a habit of knowing what is going to happen in every story, I guess when you read everyday for 3-6 hours things become easy to spot especially when the story is as intereating as yours.
Also do you happen to know where Max describes depression? I quite enjoyed the description and I want to read it again.
im curious i remember it said that if twilight died then he would go full revenant and the sisters would have to kill him but what happens if he were to go full revo with her still alive would she be in control of his actions like a weapon or would they still have to kill him im wondering this now because of him saying her mercy is his mercy so would that still apply in that situation
8204050 I have absolutely no idea. I never made a note of it, but I think it was after the first Gryphonia mission. Then again, I don't remember seeing it in any of my rereads so far.
Stop being psychic, you bastard!
8204072 Twilight would basically have him as the penultimate weapon. He would still be largely autonomous if Twilight wasn't around, but if she was, he'd never leave her side unless she asked him to, if that tells you anything of his level of devotion. The Royal Sisters wouldn't really have anything to fear from Max as long as Twilight could keep an eye on him
8204211 through my mind process of that situation is her pointing at something and saying kill it and he does because she said so i was curious to if that transcended the revanation process cause he'd do that now as a half human you know kinda like a alucard and integra thing she says kill and he says yes master
8204329 The main problem with Max being a weapon in Twilight's hands is that killing is against her very nature as a Pony. Sure, she could tell him to make someone disappear, but as we saw with Rainbow, Twilight's mercy is his mercy. He's not going to be capable of killing unless Twilight dies or if someone wounds her to the point where she can't tell him not to.
8205264 I'm hoping that with enough time with max he will start to rub off on her she's already getting used to his violent streak with blueblood maybe somewhere down the line she will see the need to kill she may not like it but she will understand why she has to tell him to do it if necessary
8209807 Raped and tortured.
i get that and it is so damn funny
Please tell me this is a reference to what I think it is.
Ayyy, been awhile since I heard that
Correction time
Made them do what?
i thank you for the doctor who reference
Its chapters like this that make this story impossible to put down and make me love Max and Twilight's relationship completely. The harshness of the story and grim reality of it only make the moments of pure love and happiness all the sweeter.
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I find that the moments of levity make the story feel better to read. That's probably why there are so many of them.
awww but i like kicking names and taking ass more :P
Max: because fuck you that’s why,