A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Noir? Did I miss something?
Why do you update so late, i needed to sleep damn it
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At the end of Chapter Fifty-Eight, Noir stabs Max in the back and the fallout is heavy. I'm sure that's what you're talking about.
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Fuck your sleep and read my shit. Read it once and reread it. Then read it again to pick up on whatever you might have missed.
I feel somewhat ashamed to admit this, but I can't help but like Kaid more than Max
He just seems to attune more to myself than Max (who is still in the top two, just not top one), and I can't help but agree with him on the arm. The whole fact that Max still is disgusted with that arm, even after what it has allowed him to do, just doesn't sit right with me as I couldn't imagine covering it up and I especially couldn't imagine dishonoring it by pretending it's not there more than half the time. The fact that Kaid seems just as enamored with the piece of tech given to Max BY A GOD just resonated with me on a deeper level, and that's not to mention that one of my favorite pastimes is to come up with random magical properties and slowly work back to make a connection between each that would be feasible under the right conditions and with the right variables (i.e. the amount of ambient magic in the air, the strength of the caster, and versatility of the magic being used as well as what/who it's being used on). I still respect the hell out of Max, but I can't help but like Kaid more.
honestly though, I'm not sure why I wrote this, I blame it on random spur of the moment ideas and a lack of control when it comes to inner emotional conflict.
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You deviant; how dare you have opinions on things!
I understand and appreciate your appreciation of Kaid. He was fun to write for since it let me get a little fast and loose with magical terminology.
As for the future, I encourage you to share your thoughts on chapters, dude. I like feedback. When the feeling strikes you, ring the bell and my eyes will wander.
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There's a reason that I write, and it is to let people know that my opinions may be different than their own. And my opinion is that I like Kaid MORE THAN MAX! *whispers* minus the coke addiction.
Seriously though, I know that you'll read my feed back ( I still remember your little troll about ending the story, as well as being one of the first people to respond to the blog post where I said 'fuck you' and called you 'fucking brilliant'). And I honestly appreciate your due diligence when it comes to comments, good on you and have a wonderful day/evening/night or what ever the fuck it is where you are.
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Ah, but the coke addiction is an interesting character trait that I'd like to play around with in the future. In fact, I might as well roll it in with the crap souffle I'm already preparing.
I do remember that little chat and it makes me smile. That was fucking golden.
I try to respond to the things that seem like they need a response, but I always feel like I should've answered some dude like a week ago. It is a glorious night filled with piracy, and I wish you a hearty helping of fine booty, m80
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Well in that case, buck sleep.
ah, that's about it i think- oh yeah that was a cute love triangle -so thanks for an amazing chapter.
Ah Ha! I knew Noir was being controlled. Now Max just needs to calm down enough to help her. Of course, I imagine that Noir is going to be plenty pissed at Max. She told him things with confidence and he used that pain against her. I don't blame either of them for lashing out at being hurt. I just hope they reconcile soon.
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My roller coaster is the girthiest around, bucko.
Glad to see that Kaid isn't universally hated.
Yes, Twilight was kidding you all along.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter, m80. Here's hoping that the next arc suits your fancy.
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I'd love to make a comment on that, but sometimes it's better to watch and smile instead of explain.
8697137
Did it already also fuck you, and thanks for the update. Keep up Feeding us more chapters i love you
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I'm not sure how to feel about your comment. Love you too?
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Just accept it and let it keep you from sleeping
I can't wait for the next arc where we get to see Max deal with Noir. You've been building this up and I'm hoping for the best.
I love the Others concept. We've seen Max and Prince and Primal modes before and a lot of Roxy, but I would like to see them actually in the driver's seat. (BTW, I'm also a fan of Kaid) What would it look like for Max's body to be driven around by Roxy. I'm sure halarity would ensue.
It was sad to see Blue suffering, but I'm glad that was resolved. I hope she gets her just desserts.
As always, thanks for posting.
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I think you were the thousandth comment, so congrats on that, and I had a lot of ideas for chapters being driven by the Others. My lists got pared down a bit, but oh well. Life moves on
Holy shit, I just finished the most recent chapter finally. Gods this was a slog from the start, but not in a bad way, just all-consuming.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
14:47_2/4/2018
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Glad I could catch your attention and keep it. Here's hoping I keep it a little longer.
I’d love to see Max and Twilight during one of their human world visits have actual Max surprise them by showing them S1E1+2 for their reactions to it
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jacked
Alt-J anybody?
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9007245
Go home fam, the drunk is real
So, I stopped visiting this site due to being busy with life for like, what? 4 months? And here I return to a completed sign on this story. I would've been very sad but, I saw that you made another thief's tale! I like the idea, granted I haven't read either this chapter or the next thief's tale... or frankly anything yet, but I understand why you did it. I'm assuming you wrap up the few loose ends in the chapters to come but with Max being as all-powerful as he is, it must be hard to write with. Excited to start reading again and hope all goes well. Good luck and keep writing, you're great at it!
Was actually like 6 months so... yeh my bad.
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Writing with an all-powerful protagonist is fun, but you're right that it was hard to work with. That being said, Redux and PTP are both sequels, as well as My Brother's Keeper, though that was cancelled. Cancelled yet canon.