A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Small question, how many chapters are you planning for this arc? I can't say that I like it very much, mostly because it just came out of nowhere, at least that's how I feel about it, even when you explained from where that amnesia came from. I just don't get it.
May you have the best new year's (I hope I wrote it the right way) parties
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sleep for the wear tonight, might bitch about it in a blog post to vent
like, three? The last bit is technically a wrap , so two?
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Thanks, have a good day.
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Have a good one
Ok, the fuck? I have this story in three libraries that all have "track unread chapters" on them and still chapter 61 did not show up on my bookshelf, my divinity list and neither did it show up on "The top" list... I'm all kinds of confused right now.
The proof is in the pudding: Image to all the libraries this book is in.
Released Dec 12? Are you telling me I have missed this chapter for nearly the past fucking month?!
I have to say, the amnesia thing? It really took me out of my comfort zone when I'm reading and that's not easy to accomplish. It felt like something was off throughout the whole chapter. Sure I can see why you did this since this will give everyone else more insight into Max's feeling and it might help Max cope with the things that have happened to him among other things but, it still is probably my least favorite arc in this book.
Still, this is amazing and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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I forget the exact reason, but Chapter Sixty-One shows up as being published Dec. !2th is because I think I got confused when there was no save button on the FiMFiction chapter editor. I ma or ma not ave been lit, so- Nah, still my fault. I'm assuming it's why the chapter didn't show p on your feed.
Sucks to your assmar, Ralph. Seriously though, the strangeness of the chapter and some of its aspects were discussed, like the feeling of separation from the main character that's taken you along the journey. If that's what you're feeling, then that's what I was going for. If it's a bad thing, then .... Well, there's a light at the end of the tunnel. It's not exactly a long arc.
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Yeah, you nailed that. I was feeling like I was slightly less invested into this story than I usually am. Yeah, the seperation from Max was probably what made me feel this way. The off feeling also came from when Kaid was babied throughout the chapter. Yes, he is 16, but he is probably more mature than any pony that is under 25.
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Ayy, I'm better at getting feelings and emotions across! Fuck, I'm excited!
But yes, the next chapter absolutely addresses the issue.
woah, was that a double 'stay cool'? that's like, rarer than a shiny ekans.
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Huh, I just thought back to all my feelings--ugh, feelings--about this story and realized that this was a heavy ride. Usually, each chapter you posted would change my mood, I mean, I already hated Rainbow Cunt, before you started to focus on her but now, you made me hate her to the very core of my being with no chance at redemption. To tell you the truth, I would not have read Xenophilia if I read this story before that one.
And before that there was Cuntie. You made me despise her and just laugh at her misfortunes. Now I like her even more than before. The way you portray characters is just beautiful and perfect and the feelings were always there.
But, yes, chapter 61 nailed everything just perfectly.
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I'm glad that my wordsmithing has crafted something that can take a fella on a ride, and it's great to have your feedback once more.
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There will be more of tis tasty word sandwich Sunday night/Monday morning at midnight.
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With Chapter Sixty-One? Yeah, the publish date is wrong
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Not knowing what Milf meant must have been... lacking, in a spiritual sense. I'm glad that I could offer you this piece of wisdom.
Glad to have you back. Happy to keep pumping out things for you to read.
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Oh, I knew what it meant just not what it stood for, it had been bugging me for so long since it had always been in all-caps meaning it WAS an acronym. :P I'd been trying to make guesses such as Mature In Love Form or somesuch but now it's all cleared up.
Man I Love Fishing? Make It Last Forever? What on earth could it be? *reads chapter* Ooooh... Makes sense now.
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Ah, I see the disconnect now.
Jesus Blueberry. Did you have to try and make him swallow it?