A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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I heard that Twilight is the f****** worst in here? Why is that?! And I don't care about spoilers to learn about it.
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In the story in general or this particular chapter? Either way, she's an absuive lover in deceptively casual ways
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...................... Welp, that's one reason not to read this! Sorry, but having the MC ( Especially a Thief that probably went though some tough and dark shit. ) to not doing anything to defend himself, or break off the toxic "relationship"?! This is a major turn off for me in reading this.
Plus, why is she a "Element Bearer" or even the Princess of "Friendship/Harmony" if she is acting like this??!! And it seems that her friends or even Celestia/Luna didn't do something about it, to talked down on her heartless behaviour??!!
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All of the Elements are shitty people in this story, and apparently you've gotten a synopsis from someone who read the original. I'm doing rewrites
I'm really not trying to be snide, but I literally fucking address what you're asking about in this chapter... As in the current one.
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Crap! It's one of those type of Alternate Equestrias that is just a OOC, dark version of having the Ponies being shitty beings?! Hope karma will bite their asses hard!!!!!
Geez, I never even read this rewrite! I only remember parts of the original, and some rumors by the other commenters in this "rewrite" story.
And the whole time, I was addressing on the entire story as a whole.
Don't know why this comment is "saved" in the current chapter, instead of the first one?!
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Thats the funniest shit I’ve read in months
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I personally started at the Re-Write chapters and never read the old ones. From that perspective, I think it's a good story, but it is heavily angled toward the protag's romances and interpersonal relationships. The chapters and paragraphs are really bulky and long-winded at times. I'd have personally wanted a bit more action, but it still managed to drag my attention along all the way to the end of the completed chapters. The writing from a technical standpoint is pretty good, but there are a FEW parts where it's hard to follow the train of thought for a few paragraphs but not many.
Also, this is an Anthro story, meaning ponies are anthro-ponies. As someone who's read almost no anthro and several millions of words of non-anthro, it took me a few hundred thou words in to beat in into my skull that they were, in fact, humanoid, and even still I forget all the time and picture them in my mind's eye as quadrupeds.