A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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So it's basically him not talking to the Princesses for what they put him through.
Is that it?
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He's found a certain aversion to their touch and their voices. It's not that he hates them, it's just that he's tired of being around them for the time being, though he's willing to deal with the bullshit
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You know that makes a lot of sense
Once more, with feeling: fucking mazel tov.
Gonna finish my decompression, and get back to writing.
Hail Hydra.
If there's anything I dislike about journal-type stories, it's the constant omission of things.
This was a nice chapter, though.
I don't know about you but I have a feeling something is about to go down. Also, Max changing like that is just weird, interesting--it also makes sense--but weird.
Amazing chapter really did brighten up my day unlike Chapter 152 of Diaries of a Madman (A lot of deep and depressing topics in that chapter).
8295358 The different modes can be weird, I suppose, but I figured that they'd be the best way to show that Max's sanity itself is splintering. I'm sure I could just get drunk or something and write a chapter like that to get my point across, but that just seems like a waste of time.
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That and he was somewhat sane. I think I missed the point of what the training was.
You could write it when you're bored.
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Oh yeah, I definitely understand that that would be a simple way to show Max's sanity going down the drain. To be honest, I think it would be quite difficult to show in your writing that Max is losing his sanity without something as concrete as the three Paths.
I am absolutely ecstatic about Max going into the Everfree and the character re-shaping that will occur. Good luck, even though I know you are going to do swimmingly at it.
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Thanks for the compliments. The Everfree chapter is going to be after the next one, and I think the events in that one might be particularly interesting. Waffles.
Curiosity killed the cat, so it's a good thing I'm not a cat