A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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OK my respect for celestia was already low but now its gone
your mind and body are yours and only yours nobody not evin little miss god empress herself has any right to mess with those things
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In fairness, it's said multiple times that Celestia's not what she pretends to be
Max is really getting hit here, and Celestia is showing the weight of trying not to go Daybreaker, by breaking pretty much everything else?
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Sunbutt sux and so does Max's life lol
This whole gender swap was just unpleasant. I really felt for Max on the consent thing about it and then it spiraled down from there... I mean....the sex scene towards the beginning feels disturbingly close to something that would bring up his history with rape. Fuck Cely......
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Rhetorical question?
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Yeah, Cels is not a good person and Max has damage. At least the story is moving though, that's what I kinda aim for
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I hope im not misunderstood in any way im 100% enamoured with this story. Ended up doin an all nighter to read it, please keep up the amazing work! But man, i just really felt that last chapter...
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I'm glad you felt it, sorry for making you feel bad. I'm sure you understand, at least to a point. However, making people feel things is why I write things the way I do
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Oh no i understand 100% its one reason why i Dm 2 different dnd groups. Making sure the players are connected to their characters is my passion!
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Right? It's nice to know that someone's invested in your work and looks forward to the next piece of the pie. Kinda makes a fella feel cooler than lukewarm tomato soup
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Believe me I understand that, shamefully I’ve experience something similar, I don’t judge nor critic the victims, but I also don’t glorify them, In Max specific example I personally think that he didn’t do what was best for his son, but instead, he was dangling to a non existence hope that he would get the woman he once loved.
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Yeah, Kinkaid didn't do what he could have, but it would've been likely that Babs got Max anyway since she's a woman. Leave and potentially abandon his son, or stick it out and try to do the best you can to protect him
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Before I say anything, I’m loving the bantering we’re having, lol.
You would be completely right if not for her addiction, drugs is kind of a deal breaker when it comes to child custody.
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Mm, not quite, my man. At least not in the states. My Aunt is a stepmom to her husbands kid, and her husband only got custody after they; 1: Proved the Bio Mom's family was abusive 2: She was still on drugs and 3: She never spent time with her kid anyway. IT took a good year or two for my aunt and uncle to get custody, and even then the Biomom fails drug tests regularly (from last I heard) and still has visitation rights
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Sorry to hear that mate, you’re right in the sense that it varies from states and that the women almost always get the kids.
In a separate Note I’m loving the Story so far, right now I’m on the Relationship with Applejack , I do consider that he’s changing partners as fast as Twitch thots change panties but probably there’s a point to all of it. You are really talented my friend.
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It's a damn shame, but it won't change anytime soon unless 3rd/4th wave feminism is exposed for what it truly is; Elitist toxicity through 'faultless' ''''''''''logic''''''''''
As for Max changing partners so often, it's going to be revealed as to why he does soonish, I do believe. In the teen chapters, I think I'm building up to it before cooling off
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In that my friend we agree
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Oof, you replied so fast I didn't finish editing my comment. Maybe you should try writing or some kind of desk job where your skills will be most useful cx
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Hahaha, I will take that into consideration.
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Yeez
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Lmao Ringo hates people confirmed
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I know mate I ain’t saying you copy anything, I just compare it due to the journals, and the overall grim piece of shit protagonist that somehow we all love. I honestly can say you took a concept and made it your own.
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I'm not complaining per se, but it still hurts my pride to a point, lmao
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There are new relationships and different developments in the new story, as well as everything being slowed down quite a bit. There's patch notes for most of the rewrites, I think.
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I meant it as a complement, Your Fic is simply amazing in my book.
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Lol, Max's lack of action giving someone else blueballs. That's hilarious. The wedding happens soon from where your last comment left off. Glad you've been enjoying the story though
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Sombra's power pertains to crystals, not Dark Magic per se, and he could steal a gun if he really wanted to, as long as he knew what he was stealing.
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Lmao, even to the point of doing rewrites
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As far as the rewrites go, it's n=mostly more introspective, you see more of how Max feels and it's more along the lines of what I'd call logical. Also, everything after chapter 50 has been completely scrapped and I'm now working on chapter 53