A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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XD i LOVE this Twilight
How do you become more like yourself? Unless I'm reading this wrong.
Yay, accidental spacing!
Love this new Twilight. It was only a matter of time before she became more like Max. I'm also glad the hitting is going to stop, and that they're literally closer together now.
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I fixed the syntax error and the spacing issue. If the indentation worked, then it would have been even further apart.
On another note, I'm glad that new Twilight is going over well.
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This whole chapter made me feel sad at times, then super fluffy.
Actually, this whole story has been like that.
It's great.
Your on the front page on the longest story category. Good job mate!
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Had me a looksie. I'm on the second page, but that's still dope as fuck.
How?! How do you make these chapters so quickly?! How did you write over 1mil words in half a year?! How is this story so amazing?! How does it not have atleast 1,000 likes?! HOW?!?!?!
I have to say, I absolutely love the direction you are going with the story. I always wondered how the hitting was going to be addressed, and I think you did it wonderfully!
Will tirek make an appearance?
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In order: I like to write. I like to write. Apparently I don't suck at writing. I'm guessing Anthro just isn't all that popular.
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Glad to hear you're liking the story and thank you.
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He shall.
Best story ever dude just keep up the good work and more then a million words this quick?keep this up and you may take over the title of longest story on the site.Not much further because it currently belongs to diaries of a madman with almost 2.3 million words and he only updates that story once a month on average now so keep up this rate and you'll pass him for sure
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Thank you, glad you like the story. I'm most likely not going to hit two million words, but I do plan on making it into the top ten longest stories. I'm sitting at 20th right now
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I pretty much do what I want these days. That being said, I do understand that suicide is a touchy subject for people that aren't like us.
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As an American, I feel like most of us could be taken down a peg.
You're good on your grammar, m80
Will Celestia tell Velvet Breeze what really happened? Or has she and I missed it?
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Celestia already explained everything to Velvet, she just did it at the wrong time.
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Spot on, champ. I'd give you a cookie, but I'm fat af
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They were looking for a group of people to play American Football with, hence why Max said 'soccer'.
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Agreed I love stories where Twilight or Fluttershy act more like this type of protagonist
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Hey imo if it has clop that I’ll read it needs to be AT LEAST anthro
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No love for
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That and distancing myself from something that I see as pure and finally there’s no parts on a pony that excite me
So, basically he learned Noir's form of the Kaioken?
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Jess
you did not just pull that argument from the grave, @.@
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Oh, c'mon man! The chapters from 2017! It was relevant at the time!
a little mistake near the exact middle of the story. Just wanted to let you know. It's supposed to be noir not Luna because it's talking about the fight at the end of the equestria games.
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Not gonna lie, I was gonna correct it, but this is the OG. Thanks tho