A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Do I read chapter 1 or the re chapter 1
You know, that's a solid question. I feel like Chapter One is inferior to Rewrite:1, so it's more up to you than me.
Chapter One:
Pros:
Authentic
Original MC
Original timeline/parts of the story
Cool... Typos maybe?
Already a rewrite and canon-ish
Cons:
There are 25+ rewritten chapters I need to re-rewrite and edit
Kinda edgy
Kinda shitty (By my standards)
Not a true longboi
Re:1
Pros
Longer boi
More detail
Better, more well-reasoned dialogue
Toned down from edgefest
More detail, less fluff
Better in general (By my standards)
Better version of Main Character guy
Cons:
Bigger read
Nerf or nothing
Less intense
Sadboi time
More to remember?
Changes the canon a little until the rest of Rewrites are posted
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IDK about you two folks... but I'm reading BOTH! because that is how I roll~
OG chapter: too bad he met the most stereotypicaly gay river dragon, I am almost afraid to ask what's going to happen next. I guess, I am going to see it soon enough.
I love it.
Rainbow Dash WATCH WHERE YA GOING
Wanted to like this story but just to much backstory. scrolled through most of first chapter couldn’t get into any of it. Sorry