A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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"you could call yourself a Revenant reject of sorts.”
....
She said the thing
Oh drek.
8151935 Shrek is Love, Shrek is Life
AMAZING PLEASE CONTINUE PLEEEAAASSSSEE
I like the things done here, and can't help looking forward to his meeting Chryssie!
8152303 I have no plans to end the story before I hit 1,000,000 words.
8152307 Anything you liked in particular?
8152739 Well, the set up for next time had me reeling, hysterical, in anticipation, and I particularly enjoyed Twilight and Max advancing as Spike's guardians. I found myself on the edge of my choice place of rest upon reading the changes, contemplating what may come from it. I couldn't help the chuckle at your name drop, like I couldn't help the joy from character drama AJ induced with Sparkle, leggings us know just how thin the ice is that she treads to casually upon. I'm still processing how to feel about Niue's situation with Max, and Crimson was an unfortunate, albeit important, character development for Max. I see both of their points of view, and can't help enjoying the debate that sparks, in regards to the comparisons implied by the setting.
8152848 As always, thanks for the feedback.
I thought that developing Spike a little more was something I needed to do for awhile.
I was psyched about the opportunity to add my name in there, even if it was unplanned.
Hopefully there'll be a better time to explore Noir's little arc.
Celestia's style of leadership is something even I have my doubts about, and I wrote it. I felt like using Crimson and Max to set up the polar positions was perfect in a depressing way. I took inspiration from stories of brothers fighting on opposite sides of the U.S. Civil War.
Quick question. How far along the line will you take the shows canon or are you going to change things at season 3? Will alicorn Twilight come to be?
8152876 but are you really gonna have her kill him by her own words she said he was one of the best they had and we already know she's willing to erase memories so all she had to do was teleport him somewhere secret or the dungeon and erase his memories up to the point of defying her then send him back into the field you could or could not tell max
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I feel like Celestia hinted at alicorn twilight in the last chapter
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You are a bad person for making me remember that
8154007 After Celestia fucked up hardcore with Max, she stopped wiping memories because he told her to knock her shit off. Besides sending him to Tartarus, killing Crimson was pretty much her only option and he straight up just knew too much about Equestrian Ops to keep living.
8153859 I take some things from the show. Stuff I feel like working with and whatnot. For the most part, Max just doesn't like dealing with bullshit, and a lot of things just don't happen because he has too much common sense most of the time
8154465 I'm a bad person for a lot of things
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Yeah I saw that, I just want to see what kind of reaction does Max have when Twilight becomes an alicorn. I'm thinking a split second of happiness followed by a crippling depression of realizing that he will watch Twilight become like him.
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Nope it will happen and he will look at her and say "u want sum fuk?"
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8154697 but isnt she also a liar i dont think she would get rid of such a valuable tool just because of max's opinion yea she may care a little bit about it but what max doesnt know wont hurt her
8155121 Like Noir said, Celestia is trying to be less of a total piece of shit. Rather than raping someone's mind, she'd rather just kill them, which is still fucked up in its own right. That, and she didn't kill Crimson because of Max anyways.
I woud really like a story with spikes peppning adventure.
Hehe
Everytime Twilight says amour I know why Max cringed at Spike's "mate" usage
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I was wondering if anyone else caught that diaries reference
Dammit women, you can fucking swing. Unless what you typed was supposed to be a question then add the question mark, but if he is pointing out she hits hard then use, you can fucking swing. Yay criticism, other than that error everything else in this chapter is fine.
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I've heard 'oh boy can you ever _____' multiple times throughout my life. I meant what I said.
Really..... Quoting Diaries of a Madman now? XD But its gold so yeah! lolz
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Celestias style of leadership reminds me of Franco and any european dictator in the 20s. I guess you made it since most of those actually thought they were doing good for their country
Max and Twilight are planning on getting engaged and we're only at The Canterlot Wedding?
Man, there's going to be a lot of things Max and Twilight will deal with in the coming years. Tirek is going to be horrible.
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I say this now: The rewrites change a lot of things about Max and Twilight's relationship both in the story and as percieved by the reader. They're only to 21 right now, but I started at 36 and had to backtrack for this site starting from the beginning. I very much prefer the rewrites myself.