The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie2,107 stories ·1,674 members
Crystal Empire492 stories ·317 members
I'm Gonna Rec It!1,201 stories ·113 members
Royal Canterlot Library638 stories ·995 members
Scribble's Archives1,642 stories ·171 members
Stories on Goodreads28,545 stories ·504 members
Crème de la crème1,153 stories ·157 members
Starlight Glimmer. Trixie Lulamoon. Tempest Shadow. Three ponies that are definitely really great with foals. But there's no way they'll mess this up, right? They just have to keep Flurry Heart out of trouble for one night - what could happen in a couple hours?
Just a quick comedy bit I wrote for fun. Remember to like subscribe and send dominos pizza points for exclusive pictures of me eating pizza.
Page generated in 0.182 seconds
Total duration
980 users online
1,321,087 hits today, 1,411,265 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2025
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2025 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Tempest answer to the door riddle was amazing.
For the record: the "correct" answer is to ask one door what the other one would say. That way, no matter which is which, there's exactly one lie involved.
I'd blame Tempest for trying to solve every problem with violence, but she's darn good at it. Also loved Cadance's remark about Twilight collecting villains and Trixie dealing with the three bridge goats.
Yes...Yes...Fucking genius! More edgy Tempest Shadow please!! I wanna see her interact with the EG world...that would be hilarious. Like Starlight is invited to the human world and Tempest wants to go because she wants to see if this other world is a threat and then may or may not develop a crush on Sunset Shimmer lol. Great story.
The lesson is: Flurry Heart is the toughest SOB in all of Equestria.
I fucking love Starlight, and all that it entails; best story, thus far.
this amused me :)
And you'll be BEGGING to get back to that by the end of the night.
And THIS is why Tempest is liked, she gets it DONE!
Aren't all the best ones like that?
And this , dear former villains, is the CORRECT time to monologue, RIGHT after the Filly of the Apocalypse has struck
To translate into simpler and fewer words, you're turning into a sit on your ass bitch like tia.
This got a Fave and a thumbs up just for description and concept, than I read it and now I'm sad that I don't can't fave or thumbs up again.
Poor grogar I bet he liked that head
There were so many lines and scenes that I liked in this story. You got the like early for Tempest’s forth wall break. The favorite was for everything else.
That was my favorite exchange - I love that Tempest held on to that from her time with the Storm King.
The only “critique” I can think of was Tempest saying “anypony” by default, rather than “anyone.” But maybe she naturalized quickly.
Attracted here via the story's title in the "Popular Stories" box, and oh, my. This was hilarious start to finish, to the point where I had to awkwardly explain to my boss why I was grinning at my desk. You've got a master's touch with the running gag. I can tell I've got some formidable competition in Aragon's comedy contest! (Ought to go read your entry for that next, since if that's half as fun as this it'll be time well spent.)
… And I'm belatedly realizing you're also the "Witch of the Everfree" author. I also loved that one, and really should have been following you long ago. Fortunately, this is a mistake that's easy to rectify!
That was fantastic. What an excellent fic.
8725788
I prefer http://www.giantitp.com/comics/oots0327.html this solution.
Oh this is too cool for words. Love the way you have worked Tempest into the pony world. Kudos! Hmm, three billy goats on a bridge, I'm surprised the ponies didn't end up rescuing a poor defenseless troll while they were there. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
8731728
Oh, they got trolled. By the great and powerful Trollsie- er, Trixie.
It better not be about necromancy!
LOL
Poor Grogar.
I hope Starlight doesn't feel bad about her skeleton servant giving away the secret mission. Does anyone really believe Trixie wouldn't have told everyone about their trip to Tambelon within a day?
This story got a fav and thumbs' up for its quality and keeping in character for all the narrative.
I'm saving it!
Tremendous fun and fantastic character work. Thank you for it.
This was a fun story.
I haven't laughed this hard at a fanfic in a long time. XD
8761262
And I know which one!
But this one is just like Bolt’s haircut: The better of the two.
Is this in any way related to H.P. Lovecraft's "The Doom That Came to Sarnath"?
That was funny!
MORE (please?) (sorry, I don't know where to get the mlp emojis)
BAHAHAHAHAHA! Glorious! Absolutely glorious! Poor Grogar. Bastard didn't know what he was dealing with.
Okay, that was absolutely glorious. Just one question: if ALL pony magic was suppressed, why did Flurry's magic still work?
8814919
Because Alicorns are Hax.
I made it as far as "see what those giant flap flaps can do" before I lost my shit. Well done.
8814919
It was apocalypse magic obviously
8784990
The title is a reference - I'm a big Lovecraft fan, though I try not to write like him too much.
Oh this was good and the end was just the funniest. Looks like Starlight forgot about something.
8815263
It's a good reference.
Flurry Heart is Best Alicorn.
Please, please, please tell me where you got that cover art.
Okay. This was absolutely amazing, from start to finish.
The addition of tempest was a fantastic idea, and now I can't help but want more of that trio's adventures
Wonderfully funny!
I love how you tied it together at the end. Great story.
Starlight and Sunset are doing pretty good on their collections as well.
This was fun.
Ludicrous. Hilarious. A+ work, and a fine focus on our more sociopathic heroes.
Came for the comedy, stayed for a ride that really went places :)
That oddly gave me a random idea. like a unicorn uses her magic to Freeze villains in a life sized action figure state. Like they are collectables. starlifhr with her her equal sign cute mark
This was a lot of fun.
This was hilarious. Thank you for writing.
Fuller review here, but in brief: this is a whole lot of fun, with some great, snappy dialogue. Really enjoyed it -- have a fave.
And then Trixie tells the story on stage, Twilight is not impressed.
8814739
In the toolbar above where you write your comments, there should be a smiley face. Click that.
Whoa. Season 9 is happening here bois! This is great! XD
Total crack up, great story :-)