Twilight Sparkle invites a bunch of her friends over to a slumber party… No, not that group of friends… The ones who’ve maybe dabbled in some light conquering or wholesale destruction of planets.
Part of the MAD verse.
Thanks to Tired Old Man, Nova Quill/Firimil, and
Steel Resolvefor their edits and suggestions and xxMarkingxx for the adorable picture!
THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT
ACTUALLY DON'T ANSWER THAT QUESTION
THE ONLY THINGS I KNOW IS THAT IT'S FUNNY AND THAT I HAVE NOT SLEPT IN LONG ENOUGH TO REMEMBER HOW TO USE CAPS LOCK WELL
A great start to another fantastic story!
CONTINUE THE HOME AGAIN STORY ALREADY.
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How about you don't tell others when and how to do their hobby?
Christ you're rude.
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If he has time to make a new story he has time to finish one first.
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Because that's not how writing and muses work? Be polite or keep it to yourself.
He doesn't owe you a damn thing, if he dropped the story tonight and said he wasn't continuing there's not a thing you could do.
Either be happy with what he puts out, or shut the hell up. I'm sick of seeing you yell at him.
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I wasn't yelling.
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You started with caps lock, yes you were. Sod. Off. With your needy self-righteous bs.
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I was using it for emphasis. not to yell.
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I'm afraid that's not how the writing process works. If it were just a matter of setting aside time so that I could churn out the story of my choice I'd have pretty much no "incomplete" stories. But even if I have a fairly good idea of what the next chapter or a completed story looks like I can't just conjure up a level of writing quality I hold myself to at will. I'm still invested in the fic in question, but yeah, asking for a new chapter, especially on a different fic entirely isn't likely to get me to shift focus. Knowing there is continual interest in something IS helpful, but you'd probably be better off asking me on my user page than piling comments onto things.
This looks lile it'll be a lot of fun. And I do love Sunset's nicknames for Templepop Berryshade.
Also:
"You look good on her, but you'd look amazing on me."
"Sunset?"
"Yeah, Twilight?"
"You're trying to seduce my geode again."
"I know. I want your power inside me."
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Ok I understand its just hard for me to wait.
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A single word capped is using emphasis, your ENTIRE SENTENCE capped is you screeching like a petulant child who hasn't gotten their candy bar from mummy. Stop arguing. Either apologize and stop hounding Justice or fuck off.
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.....Read the comment below this one. also I'm not the one who's cursing so much.
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That wasn't an apology, it was an excuse. But I hope you keep Justices response in mind rather than badgering him from here on out.
Aww, it was just getting to the good part.
LET'S GO! Another classic in the making. I love these Madverse stories way too much. I really can't wait for more. Keep up the amazing work.
Pretty sure that's supposed to say 'dread'.
This looks fun. Always happy for more of your writing.
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Yep! Fixed!
Well played Tempest. Well played. Huh, I wonder if Spike's rampage will qualify for the evil story swappage. Anywho, favored and happily awaiting further writings and thanking muchly for such humor!
Edit: And yes, that picture is adorable!
This looks like fun. Let’s see where this goes!
Oh you. How do you come up with such gems?
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Oooo, ebil pones and their ebil ways. Got to see this one to the end!
I was about to say that that was a typo, then I realized that no, it wasn't.
A good start, I look forward to more.
Nice reference
Hah if continues I hope spike would tell them what he did when his greed took over and like to see the reactions of everyone else besides twilight.
Y'know, for all her complaining about it, Twilight has the potential to be pretty evil herself if she's in the right mood. I reference Lesson Zero, where she mind controlled an entire town just to create a problem she could solve.
Actually, on that note, this'd be a wonderful time for Twilight to explain why she never used any of her-OP-please-Nerf-it-because-it's-god-tier-magic on Tempest.
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Just add it to the growing number of plot holes the movie has...
i see that slice of life tag and wonder is this going to be random episodes of the girls or an over arching story of them just hanging...
i wouldn't mind either.
but no woona?
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When they all meet, is it happy land?
Okay, this is hilarious!
I'm so tracking this!
I won't try to understand how this came to be, it'll do things to my mind.
*Looks at Tempest's pajamas* I didn't know there was an H.P. Lovecraft clothing line.
Twilight, Spike has more right to be at this slumber party they you do, having tried to destroy ponyville and all. I mean really all you did was cause a riot, the CMC have caused more property damage then you have.
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Hey now, it's not the writer's fault so many details of the Storm War were redacted. They had to work with what was legal. National security doncha know...
Now THIS can ONLY be good...
To be fair, she didn't CHOOSE to become a Princess.
I was gonna say.
Ouch.
Not INcorrect.
HAH!
Probably the latter.
With more electrocuting and less guns.
Right...
She has a point.
HAH!
...
He has a point, he's dealt with seeing his LITERAL GREATEST FEAR courtesy of Sombra, a scary movie is nothing.
HAH!
Love Spike, he's great.
She has caused an apocalyptic future where EVERYTHING IS DEAD.
I love how Trixie is just trolling Twilight day and night.
HAH, nice.
I love puns.
Read it for the onesie, stayed for the Trixie shenanigans.
That's a powerfully cute cover.
Starlight: Oh, sure....Mention one little explosion and suddenly it must have been the crazy pony who did it. Bucking racists.
Is it just me or was anyone else waiting for Spike to just turn back around and say this:
But seriously, if the girls are going to be watching different genres of movies, please have them watch Deadpool for the comedy night.
Unlike Trixie I think Sunset might actually respect Tempest’s action. Or make go through the last 60 seconds or so of the wicker man. One of the two.
Ah, I get it. Tempest has PJ's with "open eyes". Funny
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While that did happen... it's not a sign of maturity to have had sex, it's a sign that Rarity's common sense fled the building and Twilight was too on edge at the time to do anything about it.
I'm not saying Rarity did anything illegal, because does Equestria even have laws for dragon pony relations? Probably not, I'm guessing that interaction usually ends with the dragon eating the pony in the nonsexual way. Spike is a special case, being more pony than dragon, but he's also less adult and more horny teenager. It not being illegal does not make what she did okay.
I will grant you though, your proposed response does make Spike sound like an entitled teen-ager, which is what he is physically by this point.
I saw sunset for the win follow by tempest then Trixie then ever liveing and non liveing thing in both world follow by starlight and if starlight has it her copy
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. Poor Luna, never gets invited to the slumber parties.
That comment plus that picture... is just
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Luna is the slumber party. But yes, night shift workers get shafted for normal people get togethers
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sad woona needs her exotic butters
Given this is, like, the umpteenth time I nearly missed a Justice story, you've have thought I would have remembered that the follow button is a thing before now...
But then the TRUE world wreckers show up: fanfic writers!
It's all over, man! IT'S ALL OVER!!
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no time like the present
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I actually remembered to do it as I was typing that post.
just barely...
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Well, it does come down to how old Spike is. I don’t think that they’ve ever really said what his age is, so I was going around the rough age of 16 or so. So, he is acting like a typical cocky teenager who brags about his conquest and thinks he’s more entitled than he actually is. I don’t know if it’s still the same, but when I was around that age, most guys liked to brag about who they had sex with. And I could see Spike still crowing about banging Rarity even now, regardless of whether she is still sleeping with him or not.
Plus.... I just wanted to throw that Degeneration X line in there.