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Anon E Moose


Sweet & Smoky · 2:52am May 26th, 2019

Man, there's a lot going on in this ep

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Thanks for the fave, fella! :trollestia:

Thanks for the watch.

Thanks. I'm going to work on that to improve my fanfic. If you have anymore suggestions, I'm all ears.

I do think the emojis mess up the flow of the reading. It would be better if your described the expressions the characters are making.

As for "being repetitive", I don't think it is.

Anon E Moose? Someone by the name, SilverDiamond, says that I should edit my story a bit by removing the emojis and making it sound less repetitive. I don't know what they are talking about when they say that my fanfic is a little repetitive, do you? And should I remove the emojis and save that for the comments? What do you think?

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