• Published 6th Oct 2017
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Never the Final Word (Vol. 2) - FanOfMostEverything



The continuation of an open anthology of continuations of other authors' stories.

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Jake The Army Guy's Mac Support (GaPJaxie's "Family Matters")

Author's Note:

[Romance][Slice of Life]

The following is a continuation of GaPJaxie's "Family Matters" (312 of 5,817 words in its anthology, [Romance][Comedy])

FAMILY SPOILERS: Between Sugar Belle's demonstrations of sensibility and baking, the extended Apple family welcomes her with open arms. Big Mac is less than pleased.

(Note: I wouldn't normally add something that's less than a hundred words without bulking it out, but this works too well in dialogue-only form.)

"You're upset they accepted me so easily?"

"Eeyup."

"You were looking forward to being a stallion and defending the mare you love?"

"Eeyup."

"You had a long, impassioned speech memorized about how love knows no bounds, and your parents had to fight for their love, and you were willing to fight for ours, and how any Apple who doubted our deep love could step up and take a buck to the face?"

"...mmaybe?"

"Would a kiss make you feel better?"

"... eeyup."

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