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It was a really good story :)
Good work my dude <3

Thanks for the favorite on "Pretty Laces for Good Little Fillies"!

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked them all :D

So I pretty much binge read your Discovery series this week and absolutely loved it.

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Hey there. So, as for the Crystal Empire thing, in A Place To Call Home, Sky and Midnight were never in the Crystal empire before No Man Left Behind. That was just part of the lie Sky was telling Tempest to help keep up with why he didn't know her. He just kinda made that up on the spot. They were in Las Pegasus for their honeymoon though.

I have heard of boats flipping and righting themselves again, as long as they're sealed up properly and the water doesn't flood the entire ship. The ship they were in had magic enhancements to keep water out of the majority of the ship. The reason it didn't sink was because the only rooms to get flooded were the bridge and the crew quarters.

Personally, I think that all of the clop scenes were very necessary. I wanted to show a true loving relationship among several characters, and for just about everyone, love manifests into sex. I didn't want to shy away from that too much.

Regardless, thank you for reading my work and your thoughts. I do appreciate the criticism and I'll try to make my future stories more clear in certain areas.