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Chrissy's so sweet with people she likes.
yay!
i can't wait for that reunion.
I missed the inuendo between nav and ames, cracks me up everytime
XD yet another lovely chapter!
Well then, want to show me your moist, dark cave?
I'm going to LOL for days on that piece of innuendo.
Or would that be double entendre? Either or LOLS will be had.
*gulp* "dats one hell of a mountain, whelp better get started"
but no in all seriousness i like long storys but my god dats a lot of chapters my scroll bar has a scroll bar for christ sake!
1) is navarone gonna go to the mintotaur home lands.(im guessing it will be like erebor or something)
2) is navorone gonna go to the dragon home lands. (guessing thats where the fire elemental i, probs in a volcano or something stupid like that)
3) is navarone getting serious with celestia. i dont think that is a good idea because from his experience sticking your dick in crazy is crazy.
4) is navarone gonna get raped again or is he gonna actually gonna get better
5) no number 5
6) how good of a fighter is nav now from the training, also how strong/skinny is he.
p.s you better keep producing chapters as fast as possible without them being shit pls thx
wot. Nav already knows about Discord's involvement in the creation of the Changelings.
Chrysalis may be a bit touched in the head, but she's written very well as a counter to Celestia. She's evil with charm.
you know it acured to me how he can become a male again. why doesn't he just go back into the past where he was not around and the stones where in the library. touch the blue one and piss off again.. butta bing butta bomb.
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In the words of someone who cold be Anounomus's spiritual father..... Giggity!!
Glad as always to read another chapter of this epic story. Thank you.
This is a seriously awesome series!
Please keep up the great work!
Believing
Either: You might want to ask Kat; Or, You should ask Kat
Space between 'ship.' And 'The'.
Loving the story
Something makes me think that Nav will be fully bisexual and quite willing when he makes it back to being male again.
I look forward to it.
I love this angle on the Changelings (perhaps that should be plural). Don't think we've all forgotten about Chryssi's little meeting with Discord way back when.
Hm. Down in the lower section, ruminating on history. Big and imposing but more refined than you'd assume from just looking at him. Involved in the artificial creation and perfection of life. Yep. Jak is some wonderful combination of Okeer and Grunt. The farewell merely made me realize the connection I was unconciously drawing.
There are two ways to interpret that and both of them make me smile.
Could anyone please remind me about the whole water elementals attempting to kill one of Nav's friends? Thanks in advance.
5688601 Limit on control of the time spell I think, he has to go back on the order of at least a few decades or maybe centuries. That is unless the oneshot spell for the show is still an option
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Actually, "might should" is a colloquialism. It's not grammatically correct, but it's entirely feasible that Nav would say it.
Navarone is becoming a Nihilist I see.
I approve!
5688804 One of elementals threatened to kill Spike. (Episode in jungle, when Nav become monkey princess)
Oh fuck yeah! We're back on the road! Absolutely a great start for the road, good job guy! I almost can't contain my excitement over Nav hitting the road again. :)
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This comment is like a slow, painful cancer.
Well Nav just went and tempted fate yet again. I wonder how long it'll be until she finds something that can get her knocked up or for her body to change and everything can then do the deed.
Yay, backstory!
This chapter needs a bit more description when talking to the elementals. I got confused at the banter and forgot who was speaking.
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Just calling them as I see them at this point, because of that actually. Can't tell sometimes with dialogue when it's intended or not. Thanks for giving me a face to the crime though.
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Maybe, probably, maybe, unlikely, fuck you, pretty decent.
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He does know that, but he wants to know more. He's fishing for details.
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Fixed, not a mistake, fixed.
5689469 Yeah, I've been having that problem whenever he really gets into a dialog with someone. I find myself actively looking for clues for who's saying which lines.
Ohhh, so Anonymous isn't another nickname, but a placement for the actual name of whatever Nav's actual name is... Hey, I'm kinda stupid like that sometimes.
What do you mean by "stallions once"? Do you mean in a particular time frame or some recorded instance? I can take a good guess as to what happened to the stallions in question (*sigh* One of the only double-edged swords of Japan: while they can make fairly good porn, the other half of it is bullshit... sometimes literally.), I just don't know what you mean with your provided context.
So, let me take a crack at what happens next chapter: It seems like it's going to be an easy op, but then something happens that causes things to be significantly more difficult, like spiders, ants, or Spy-Durants. Of course, things could always be easy... but I have no idea since I'm not the author.
5688601 ... That actually makes sense... but, it may or may not be used, if you factor in whether or not Nav can think of that, if there's even a thing planned out to fix the mess, and so on.
Elementals should be worrying that if Twilight gets her act together and uses research and magical abilities, she could work out how elemntals work, especially in hacking them to code etc. Flos little seperate of a small piece for survival is a good start, but even nastier when combined with grey goop.
I propose we send Smiles into the breeding chambers, to see what all the fuss is about? I suspect it will make a real mare out of him.
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This stones created and controlled by Discord. I don't think that he let them change Nav gender in past.
5689443 read naga as n*gga thx spit out my tea
5689537 (sarcasm) oh well that answers my questions...horsedick face
most people on HIE fics base their characters personality and body around theirs, so are you just writing how you would likely respond to these things if you were in those circumstances. or is just good writing
i also imagine navorone to be like danny sexbang is this somewhat accurate or is navorone a 3ft black guy with a tattoo on his c*ck?
5688601 He got turned back into a boy before, Discord changed him back immediately. He's not changing back until either he learns magic, or Discord want's him to be a he again.
Can we get a side chapter all about this? Without the Guards popping in and disrupting it?
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I've already said in-story how that won't work.
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Why would I write gay horses fucking? That's weird. You're weird.
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It means that they only use the stallions to hold eggs once. Then they get rid of them or move them somewhere else.
5690149 ... Yup, that's exactly what I thought the ovipositor was used for. Though, I have to wonder: Don't dudes usually die when they have eggs placed (and eventually hatched)... there?... Right, these are ponies, life doesn't have to make sense... at least, life according to bad hentai.
Man. The more I read this work of art, which surpasses pretty much everything I ever read in my life (and believe me that was a lot) in a heartbeat, the more I want to go and make it a hard cover copy for my private collection. This is probably the first and only story I'll ever reread in my entire life time.
Dragon san
Bullshit. The types of nerves in testicles are wired to cause as much pain as possible when too much pressure and force is applied. Getting kicked in the cunt would most likely hurt just as much as getting kicked in the dick, but getting kicked in the balls is a different story.
Well, thank ya kindly for uploading this today. Makes for a lovely birthday present.
5690238 I imagine the birthing process from stallions is similar to this:
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You now have the mental image of all the Changlings being Xenomorphs. Have fun!
It's alive!
Man, shot down hard.
When they get to the hive, it's going to be lit up like times square. Electric marvels will shock Nav as the changeling 's ruthless exploitation of his tech (and their own ideas to humble Tesla "using magic to fill in the gaps"). I expect mechanical and electronic wonders both fantastic and terrible.
The ponies ponies will be so terrified they will forget they are potty trained.
Calling right now that his name actually is Anon and he's just saying that in the records to throw Celestia or whoever else off.
5690920 Heh, nice try. That wasn't anywhere NEAR the creepitude I've seen.
5690149 Which chapter did you explain why the time-travel gender stones wouldn't work?