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I hope some situation occurs where Jessica gets punched- Nothing too bad, just like, knock a few teeth out. She really is going beyond the standards of the cold shoulder or anything that should be applied. If she had been through pretty much anything Nav had, She'd probably be a lot less of a bitch
Throw her into the VR!
Once again, a literary piece that has made me laugh my ass off. KEEP IT UP
Yes! A few days longer wait than I wanted to wait but it's HERE! Oh I can't wait for him to get back to equestria and get into a pissing contest with Celestia or something to get the details for more tech!
This was good. We need more please.
That was a good solid chapter, lots of fun to read. Despite the fact that Nav felt so bad about the whole no longer being human thing, he seemed to have a good day or two. I also really like the awesome moments of friendship between he and Dash, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Dash is so cute... Cool new gun for Nav, that's always a plus. Hope they can give him a bad ass combat suit, and some awesome tactical gear bags. Then he can get them enchanted so they are super light and durable maybe even fireproof spells or something. He should get some two way comm devices too, that would be great for black ops work with flyers... I can't wait to see them all get out into the town, especially Nav and Dash, I wanna see some co-op shenanigans from them!
This is gonna be so awesome!
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He got a radio set, actually.
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Cool, something tells me that non magical communication will come in very handy sometime.
Oh, and that poor VR guy got ahold of the wrong memory...
Nav has aqquired "Shiny new weapon!". Not as future tech as he had hoped for, but better than what he's got.
Heh, funny to see how the 'Observers' reacted to his memories. I had to laugh at the horn comment.
Hm, and Nav is finally getting some therapy. Let's see if it will help in the end.
Btw, regarding the Observers, I can imagine one of them suddenly one day seeing Rarity walk down the hall, and then try to assault her for what she did in the past. Would be interesting to see her confronted about it from someone else besides Nav.
Anyway, informative chapter, and good progression as always. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Damn this story, it makes me read even if I want to or not.
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That's exactly what I was going to say!!!
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Same here, I stopped playing Xbox as soon as I got the update email, and read the chapter as fast as I could.
Cool chapter, though I'm wonderi- eh... nevermind, cool chapter, nothing else.
If in the distant future google was this successful I will give them a better name than googleplex, because that name was just sad.
2104291 Boom, headshot XD
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Wave goodbye to your head wanker!
Did you misuse 'clip'?
clips are things which make it easier to load bullets into magazines.
Magazines are the things you put on guns to load the bullets in.
Just FYI.
Yay!!! it was really good.
I can't wait for another chapter.
I hope there's a new chapter soon, this shit is like drugs very very funny drugs. that you cant stop reading.
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I'm studiying for a 1st period test of general fisics 3 (even tho it's all in spanish).
But noooooooo, this updated and I can't stop myself from reading it....
I'm so weak
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I was trying to ask one of my friends the difference but he never logged in to answer.
The longer Navi stays here the more depressed he is going to be. RD keeps trying to encourage him, but keeps falling flat. At least she makes a good sleep buddy.
Navi you may have just dug your own grave introducing Rarity to that show. She sees you in a whole new light now.
Observers are traumatized now. To be expected.
Things are way too... Peaceful...
So, when's he getting raped?
Wait... Oh. You wouldn't be that messed up...
Whatever. This was a good chapter, and I'm sure the next one will be good too.
2104816 Prepare yourself
well i got my fix of the story for the day, and as i continue to think its awsome, also i have corrupted the inocent minds of 5 other bronies by linking this to them
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do not give it but one chapter give it but a meer 74 and you shall see also power though the dark parts they are made up for
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its ok im supossed to be reading and taking extensive notes on the first ten chapters of frankenstein this is better
Where oh where have I seen a Pneumatic weapons before? I'm sure they've been in a lot of games but the one that pops into my head is the one in Metro 2033. Also, I feel for Nav since any sane man would lose it if he saw the life he could have had. Since Nav already has a few nuts loose, it just registers as pain.
I have to ask, what made you choose the bioshock reference? Not that you really need a reason, but i've played the games and just thinking of that made me ask.
When I read the part about Rainbow heading to the firing range, I envisioned her being given a fully automatic assault rifle to fire with her wings. Of course, given how sensitive pegasus wings are, the recoil could have very well led to her passing out in a puddle.
As always, good chapter. Although most of the complements are already used and all this of would just serve as an ego boost. In my opinion, Navs mental condition is past the point of emotion attachment and care. Would he really still care about how humanity would judge him? And would he really care enough about humanity to actually bring it into the future? They died after like a thousand or something years and over time, not at a moments notice or something. Would it not be rather funny in a way if all those things that Nav wants to bring back cannot travel with him? It would be an ironic turn of events and it would not overpower him with a gun and tech.
Is that really the only way you could have told us the difference?
I swear.. Nav needs to tell Rainbow those three words all mares want to here..
We'll bang, OK?
Another solid chapter- I'm assuming it's at most going to be 2-3 chapters more of this before they go back to Equestria- with way more stuff, that time.
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Of course not. That was just the easiest way.
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Don't you worry.
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It just occurred to me. "No gods or kings, only man."
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Metro 2033 is where I got the idea, aye.
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He usually has other things to occupy his mind, too. Right now he's kind of stuck. No Taya to take care of, not very many friends to mess around with, and no Flo to keep his mind on straight.
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He has a computer with three decades worth of movies, music and games. How much more occupied can someone be? You do not really need anyone to watch a movie with, so it does not matter if he is alone.
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I have to say it.... This is the longest fic I have ever seen. Looking at the list of longest novels (by word count) this fic is almost 3000 pages roughly around 2nd place in the top four list of longest novels and that is from an international listing! I hope it is good. How will I ever catch up on this and read the other fics too?
However it turns out for me kudos on the dedication!
I've gotta say, great story. Discord aside, the story of Navarone slowly losing his sanity and compassion to become what most would consider to be a monster is very interesting. I like the size of the book, because it truly is an epic story, right up there with The Iliad. You have taken a show for little girls and fleshed it out so thoroughly, given it such a unique history that I would rank it among stories like Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, Star Wars...
You have basically created your own complete mythology. What started out as your standard human in Equestria fic has become so much more. A reluctant antihero is exactly what the audiences of today want. Someone they can relate to. We are not all superheroes, our morals are not so adamant, and things DON'T always work out for the best. You have captured the essence of real life so well in a fantasy story that sometimes, when I am deep into it, I begin to believe it myself.
Now, onto Discord. Personally, I LIKE that aspect of the story. He doesn't interfere too much with the flow of the story, and manages to still get across a sense of foreboding. What is he doing? Who knows. Why is he doing it? Your guess is good as mine. We know it will all come crashing down on our hero's head at some point, but we just don't know WHEN. It gets my mind going, asking those questions. It makes me think. And that is something precious few stories can do. The lines between protagonist and the evil he seems to be fighting against have blurred to an indistinguishable grey area.
So thank you. This has ben an amazing story so far, and I can't wait to see where it takes us.
Just wondering Is the humans technology here superior, about even or inferior to magic?
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All depends on how you use it, of course. I mean, the humans in this world could very easily kill every single pony before the ponies knew they were being attacked. A SEAL team could assassinate Celestia before she knew she was under attack, since a bullet travels faster than sound. Set up a mile away and shoot her. One dead princess. And I'm sure Shining Armor's shield could not stop a nuke. So in terms of weapons, humans are vastly superior. Humans today are superior in terms of weapons. In terms of computers and shit like that, we're obviously on top. The ponies have some computer-looking stuff in their hospitals, but I'm willing to put money on us being better than them in that regard. I've never seen a pony with a TV, though I think I have seen a screenshot of a phone. We also have cars that can presumably go faster than any pony on foot and planes that can go faster than anything in the air. And we have computers that can track seagulls, so I'm sure we could easily use missiles to take down even Dash at her full speed. Teleportation and healing magic are, of course, better than the things we have, but those take a lot of skill to use and you don't see most ponies using that stuff.
So to answer your question, our technology is vastly superior to the average, everyday magic. In any kind of war set in any time period in the past forty years to now, humanity would wipe the floor with ponies, and I wouldn't be surprised if you could extend that time period to one or two thousand years in the past as well.
In that case it doesn't sound like they have much to worry about once they come to make a nation in the future, but about diesese and dragons?
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That's if they have all of their tech with them. If they go to the future they have to be able to make ammo. They'd need satellites. They'd need all sorts of stuff they couldn't just take with them through a small portal. They'd bring what they could, but it wouldn't be enough to take over the world.
And a dragon wouldn't be a problem for our world, since I'm pretty sure a missile would tear one to shreds, but without a missile you'd have to get an eye shot or something to bring one down. Diseases would be a much bigger problem, but the nanobots in their system should let them survive long enough to synthesize vaccines or cures.
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It's probably because I removed it due to it taking up too much space. You can find the new link here.
I've been going through this story off and on since February third, and I do not regret a single minute of it. Yeah, I'd read as much a I could before my eyesight would derp, but it was worth it. Navarone is one of the most interesting 'human' characters I've ever had the pleasure of reading about, regardless of his many sexual
misadventures.If you asked me to point out my favorite stretch in this story, I honestly don't think I could give you an answer. There are so many instance of brilliance, and many more that are so incredibly enjoyable. Even that whole infantilism encounter a few chapters back—which I was fully expecting to start reading before going "Nope, nope, nope," and filing it under weird shit is weird—was enjoyable; I'm not just saying that because the mental image of baby Navarone killing those two ponies gave me the mental image of homicidal cupid, either.
I recall you mentioning that there were two or three major arcs a few chapters back, so I have to wonder: is this the third last or second-last story arc here? Regardless of how much time is left in this amazingly entertaining story, I'll wait with bated breath for the next chapter.
I don't usually read Dark fics, but the description seems interesting. I'm going to give it a go
"In nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti", Here we go!
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This is one of the ones before we get to the end games, yes. As of now I have plans for two or three chapters after the earth arc and before the next Europe party.
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If you have the patience of a god, sludge through the slower early chapters. It starts picking up around chapter twenty-six, from what I've been told.
2151662 Acromantula? By the way, this is going to be one hell of a read
I have to say that this is one of my favorite fics along side Man of War and Project Horizons. The current arc is so much fun and Nav has me cracking up right and left with his snark. Keep up the great work!
This Fic is longer than War and Peace. Holy crap.
Actually... way longer. Almost impossibly longer.
The most words ever recorded in a published book was estimated at 1,200,000 in 'In Search Of Lost Time' by Marcel Proust.
The second longest is 'Kelider' by Mahmoud Dowlatabadi at an estimated 950,000 words.
The third longest is 'Clarissa, or the History of a Young Lady' by Samuel Richardson at an estimated 984,870 words.
Fillies and Gentlecolts... I can't believe I just said that... We may be reading one of the longest novels ever written. And I intend to finish it.
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There are longer fanfics. One called Project Horizons is a pony fanfic over a million. Another called Latias' Journey or something is also over a million, but it's pokemon. One called Brave New World is over two million. Either way, good luck reading.