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So, is this the end of Trixie´s role in this story?
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Maybe. Maybe not. Discord has a plan, after all.
Another wonderfully written chapter! Thank you for this.
This is one of my favorite chapters, certainly among the funnier of them.
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The Fire Elemental Discord is talking about probably would like a host. And why waste time in searching a new host when there is one already close by? And it sounds like Trixie still trusts Discord (why? I have no idea).
FIRST!!!
.... Or not. Dang it. Anyway, keep going! Very good book so far!
For a god of chaos, Discord sure makes a lot of plans.
First Grogar, now Lavan? I don't suppose there's any chance of me ending up in this fic, is there?
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I have no idea who Lavan is. I did consider putting in the Smooze, but I probably won't.
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Nigga you what
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Organized chaos is the best kind of chaos. And besides, he's the god of discord, not the god of chaos. I mean, it's his fucking name. Discord just usually involves chaos.
no she is the catalyst
Holy hell this chapter was meaty. Twenty-two thousand and two words? God, I love you, whatmustido. Pretty cool chapter. I was sort of hoping for some alphyn loving, but what are you going to do? Who does not love a Twilight plushie? I know I love mine.
KBO.
Yay, Trixe is finally fucked.
Oh lookie! A chapter :D
*raises hand*
I love how you made discord in this world basically Zinch form Warhammer 40k.
Can't say I feel bad for Trixie. She was an idiot with the IQ of a block of cheese that made a deal with Discord for petty revenge. The alphyn is someone that I hope will make a reappearance. Looking forward to the next chapter
When youve gone so long through things totally screwing up, its disturbing to have a plan which appears to actually work, and successfully as well.
So, Trixie is now in a position to come back even crazier thane before, with the voices talking in her head, so she becomes Lavagirl?
So, Alphyns are millions of years evolved dogs? Weird, reminds me of an old short story somewhere.
So, next Nav has to avoid a Glad You Got Back From Being A Stuffed Toy And Maid Party?
That's too much awesome for one sentence!!
“True. Hm. Miss Grey. Miss Shady Grey. I could probably think of at least fifty things to put in there, after all that we’ve done and talked about!”
Diaries of a Madman doesn't usually make pop-culture references, but when it does...
Also I'm really hoping for some nice friendshipping with Nav and Fluttershy. Kind of what he had with Pinkie Pie at that Gala thing, where they work out all their problems and stuff. I mean, Fluttershy really got the short-end of the stick in her interactions with Nav, and deserves some recompense.
Awesome chapter. I was also kind of wondering when the fire elementals were going to be mentioned again.
Side note: I didn't get an email update for this and I was expecting a lot more comments.
Wow, Navarone is absolutely 100% fucking right about anger fueling everything. I want to get something done, I just go on a motherfucking rampage. Also, fuck Trixie.
5070933 twighlight plushies for life.
Welp, I have got to say I've read a lot of words in my day, and that chapter was probably my favorite sequence of words to come together and make a story EVER! Love you, whatmustido, and i'm glad you exist to make my day better.
Discord, an evil motherfucker who truly is living up to his name
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Blame your overlord.
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Pleb
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I really wanted to write Nav taking the knot, but couldn't justify it.
Yet.
5071644 yet? Oh my.
So very delicious a read. Loving it.
To whomever recommended I read this. Thank you.
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It seems weird to me that a few people said this was their favorite chapter. It didn't really seem like much to me, especially since about half of it was spent on the alphyn.
5071701 people probably found it enjoyable because it had many of the key components that make your wrighting so great. This part was; long, had some action, had a story plot of some sort, and much more. Can't say it's my number 1 favorite chapter (loved the first nightmare night, and in the 'shelter' in the arctic, those chapters were amazing) but, it was still great.
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I guess LunarSlayer meant something along the lines of sassy black Nav. You know, this neighborhood women who is like "Yo ma nigga, not with me. Nu uh. Ain't no shit like this happenin in ma neighborhood." All with the pointer swinging and the like.
Gotta say that'd be hilarious.
Anwhowlzes. Great chapter again. Twilight's book idea...no words just laughter and belly clutching.
And Trixie is really fucking stupid. Like really really dumb. Maybe brain should fall from the sky to help her.
As always keep up the awesome work and smack those bitches around.
Dragon
is it just me, or does anyone else get the chaotic good vibe for discord? like everything hes doing is for a greater purpose?
Ok, I knew from early when they were starting to talk about Tartarus he'd end up there at some point. At least now he has an ally when the great war Discord has plan for there happens.
Make a deal with the devil... Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
5071842 Only sort of. My current theory is that his "Greater Purpose" is his own suicide, and that he's so hard to kill that he has to engage in several levels of self-deception in order to get it to happen. Remember that the reason you can't just will someone dead with True Magic is because their will to live is always stronger than your will that they die, no matter who they are or how much power you have. For someone like Discord, he can't just will himself dead or jump off a cliff, he's got to find a way to bypass both his own instinctual will to live, and his crazy power levels. Essentially, he has to get someone else to kill him. Hence the complicated plots, and the actions that seem almost designed to get every other living being to seek his death.
An update to my favourite story on my B-day... WIN!!!!!!!
Phinny is best bro. Man I was silently hoping for him to join up with Nav. Maybe next time. As always this chapter is pure beastmode. Keep on being awesome man.
I can't help but think Navarone is going to be the catalyst when Discord finally makes his grand entrance to the world. Right now, our favorite draconequus is just setting his pieces and moving a little bit on the board, perhaps even doing so with his eyes closed while throwing a dart at a board behind his head.
Navarone's his queen in this game, whether he likes it or not.
Well... that certainly ended well, I suppose. Great chapter man, congrats on this being a featured story again.
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Exactly, I hope we meet more of their kind in future updates.
5071050 *also raises hand*
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I can't imagine writing that in any way that wouldn't make me sound racist. I don't imagine any of the people that read my story would care about that, though.
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Is an OC race really that interesting? I figured people wouldn't really care that much. Hell, that's one of the main reasons the main six ended up on the boat with Nav; it didn't feel right to take my story completely away from the canon characters.
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Nav definitely doesn't want to be a queen, that's for sure. In either of the contexts of the word.
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Casual.
For some reason I see Taya singing this, Navarone is the Dad, not sure about the Mother or Brother (Spike?)
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Hmmm... Then not. Would've been making a cliche joke they use in films. Since we have the comedy tag on our side we could do that. And AJ is one big cliche herself.
But I guess it was just a spur of the moment idea with Nav trapped with Trixie and being her maid.
Well...
Am already giddy for the next chapter of yours.
Oh and congrats for 1.7 million written words. That's freaking impressive.
Dragon
Oh shit, a perfect fit around her clit. I laughed pretty hard.
HAHAAAAAA!! AUSTRALIA WILL BE THE LORDS OF THE WORLD!! ALL HAIL THE AUSTRALIAN FIRE!!
Been awake for 37 hours, came home from school just a minute ago, finally going to get some sleep. Some part of my brain thinks "hey, better check your feed for updates", saw this.
Fuck it, sleep is for the weak!
5072718 That's a pretty big clit.
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Horse anatomy is very different. That's why it worked.
5070700 5070663 He is the god chaos AND disharmony. His ultimate goal/being, is to drive ponies, and other races, apart. Sadly he's doing a bad part of that so far. Everyone is grouping up to take care of him, he isn't trying to drive the many races to hate eachother. Yet it seems.