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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA awesome!
Dried faces in one drawer, turns around and finds the owner XD Asks him to join panty raid and doesnt care but joins anyways. That man is a god.
And everything went better than expected. Granted his lack of fighting skills against a skilled opponent almost ended him.
I would say that he plays with females a little too much, but at this point it is mostly the result of females abusing him. Still could get him killed.
Poor Pinkie. It's like she is walking around with her greatest failure and can't do a thing to fix it. He might have forgiven her, but he really isn't going to change. Though she is persistent and has a hard time giving up.
Blackberry was funny.
Dried faces? or Dried Feces?
Also was a great chapter once again.
Heh, I actually laughed at pinkie's joke. Great chapter, nice to see some progress with the pinkie x oc (not that I support it) setup.
lol
god yes
Oh dear God that is creepy as fuck.
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Dried faces. Miguel is a serial killer that keeps the faces of his victims with him at all times. There's a reason he was enslaved.
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The abuse is definitely part of why he's so flirtatious. It's a way of compensating mentally for the abuse he's been through. Some people, when raped, will become super promiscuous, attempting to justify their rape in their mind by calling on the fact that they are having so much sex anyway that it's to be given that one time--or a few times--weren't that enjoyable to them. Or something like that.
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I have heard of that. Which is pretty tragic that the one time he puts heart out for someone else (which would have helped him mentally) he ends up getting raped...again.
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Yeah, he doesn't really have much in the way of luck. There's a reason he's fucking pretty much anything that moves now.
So Flo acted out her part as Nav's conscience. He said that he forgave Pinkie but he probably didn't mean it. Navs flirtatious behavior is going to bite him in the ass. How many panty raids has Nav done before?
1416200 That is some seriously dark feces right there. My good chapter comment stands though.
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He's done one. It doesn't matter if he forgave her or not; she just needed to hear that he did.
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Forgiveness is often one of the major steps in recovery from such traumatic events. He could himself by moving on mentally and finding some form of inner peace. Flo's guilt trip had helped solved the Pinkie situation and make a realization about what kind of person he had become. Flo could fill the position of the psychiatrist he needs.
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Given she knows literally everything about him and she can read his mind as he thinks things, she would be a pretty good psychiatrist. That just begs the question of what her goals are. Remember, she wants to be freed as well. She has to make sure Nav survives long enough to help her. If he can't do that when he's mentally well, it is within her best interests to keep him damaged. But if he burns all the bridges he'll need to get the resources together to break her out, he also can't help her. She has to balance the mental well-being of someone that has been so brutally damaged that his mood swings go from murderous to icy calm to flirtatious almost instantly.
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I assume that her thought process is similar to humans in order for her to be disgusted by how he treated Pinkie and yet calm at his means of work. Would she not be guilt ridden herself for not helping him? She feels love and has some feelings for Nav, an ancient living being has to have some form of pity if not care for those she is connected to. She could help enough for him to find peace and be good at his work.
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She is not a human and you shouldn't make the mistake of giving her any kind of living thought process. She can purportedly feel emotions and seemingly enjoys the good ones, but that doesn't mean she'll feel bad enough for Nav to help him above herself. She might be willing to help him a lot more once she gets free, but if he can't break her out when he's fixed then fixing him is against what she wants and she will do her best to avoid letting it happen. She wants to be free above all. She'll help him if it doesn't interfere with her goal. If it does, she won't help him until it doesn't interfere any longer.
Oh please let shit hit the fan during Nav's and Pinkie's date.
Heh, I see a shitstorm incoming between Celestia and Cadance, since Shiny most likely is going to tell her everything.
Can't wait to see that happen.
Also, interesting development between Pinkie and Navarone. Wonder how the date will turn out. Heh, most likely it will crash and burn, with a lot of collateral damage.
Btw, was this the last chapter for a whilem, or is that the next one? Just wondering when I should start rereading the whole story so far
Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter, for this whole story got me coming back for more!
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Probably the one after the next one. I got more writing done than I thought.
“Why would I want to sit on your in private? .. I think its "you" instead of "your".
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I don't know how the hell I missed that one; I read over this section a ton of times. Fixed, either way.
... Well Miguel. You're fucked. Only reason Nav isn't is because... Well, he's kind of awesome.
Wait, isn't Miguel a part of that group of psycho Discord supporters?
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I wouldn't say that he's a supporter, but he is one of the people Discord got to work for him.
Miguel is fucking terrifying.
So, one question for the author. What happened to make Nav treat pinkie like that? When this whole party came about he was trying to be nice to pinkie by inviting her to an event he thought she would like. However, somewhere along the way he started feeling all butt hurt about all his pony friends... and rightly so, he was raped, lied to, cheated, and nearly killed multiple times. That being said why did he wait til now to take it all out on pinkie? I guess I'll just have to keep reading and see what's next.
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A few reasons. She's being extra annoying. She has an entire party to deal with but she's choosing to bother him. She's alone and thus more vulnerable, and Nav perhaps picked up on that subconsciously. He's going through a lot of stress and wants to take it out on someone. She's trying to treat him like a special somehuman when he wants nothing to do with her. He went out of his way to be nice to her by inviting her and he figures the least she can do is be nice enough to stay away from him while they're there.
im now afriad of mig
shouldn't 'trotted at the door' be 'trotted out the door'?
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Fixed it.
oh shit.... that last paragraph was fucking CREEPY!!!
>The banks closed
Do you mean "bank's"?
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Fixed.
2601109 Danke
you need to edit this to the Rarity rape no longer happend
I've been meaning to ask you something... Why did you ret-con Rarity raping Nav during pony week?
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Two reasons. First, Nav's reaction was inhuman. Eighteen or so year old kid that is being told to play nice so she can come back and rape him. What would you do? Second, the fact that Rarity did it at all was fucked up. Sure, she has a reason for doing it in the first place, but once she learned how much she hurt him she wouldn't have done it.
when i read a fic and a original character appears i envision what they look and sound like in my head when i read a section with kat i keep thinking she looks and sounds like a khajit from skyrim
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Well, given that the khajiit were my inspiration for that, I think it's fair.
Omg yes! That was hilarious!
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No wonder I hear their accent in my mind when I read Cat dialogue, or why I often hear "what can Jocasta do for you" when she's mentioned. If we find out Jocasta had a job at a bookstore or library before the revolts I'll be so very, very happy.
At the dried faces, I could think of only one thing.
Caaaaaaaaaarrrrrrlllllllll!
2601261 I was gonna say that your profile pick looked like how I imagined a female hitler to look, but I have a feeling that might or might not be you and you'd take great offense.
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All you have to do now is introduce some nords to a bomber plane and there'll be a dead kingdom!
3032454 I want to look as beautiful as the Bieber Hitler pic ;_;
Dried faces...reminds me of Lamas with Hats.
3099051 Caaaaaarrrrrl
is this foreshadowing anything? considering how the "chosen one" legend is definitely nav, noting this, THIS early in the story is sorta bad. considering nav was called the sphinx in Egypt and that the real sphinx has a head of a cat, body of a human male, and wings of a (was it a pegasus or eagle? I can't remember what it was).
when i first read this story, reading that line made me immediately think back to the naga and their chosen one legend. after thinking it through a bit, i realized he was just talking about a mustache that was growing in.
either way, you should consider changing that. i don't know if you've made it to this chapter in editing or not, but be sure to consider what i said.
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You're complaining about this foreshadowing, but not the foreshadowing given when Nav first meets the naga that claim this? This isn't even foreshadowing. I guess using 'whiskers' to describe facial hair isn't common outside of the south. Either way, not changing it.
"I had mustard gas in one of those canisters." Didn't you change that to pepper-spray bombs instead in an earlier chapter?