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Jesus fucking Christ, how long is this thing going to be?
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It is one of the longest fan-fictions, that's for sure. I Enjoy it very much, even if I have to reread parts of it.
..................................what the fuck
3860180 Thanx for the gift I appreciate it
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Of course s/he is.
It's alright, I didn't feel like sleeping anyway.
Well, that was....... something. Huh.
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i found a longer one on the site it is made of several stories starting here clocking at a total of 4,436,935 words... nearly three times as long as this story...
3860429 Correction it IS the longest fanfic in this site.
Don't you dare end this anytime soon. This is the greatest thing ever written. If you end it....
Ivan? Ivan Serov, perhaps? Keep in mind, I just got to the part where he was giving the couple the extra meat.
I...I want to start to read....but...over a million words. Sweet jesus.
3860692 Hey, it's worth it, even if your just reading a chapter per day, it's worth it in the end. c:
Apparently it fell on whatever I landed on, and my foot slammed down on it when I landed. It sounds a bit better like that to me
The size of a pony
BTW, great chapter. I know what his mindset was back with the dream machine and how he was willing to kill everything because it was not real, but it is still a nice touch to have him react like that to possibly killing taya.
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Considering he's still working on the waters, needs to get the fires, the earth and the air elementals, has only 1 piece of 6 for the elements of harmony, I'm putting my money on 2.5 million words.
Edit: I also forgot to mention 2 more curses.
fire elemental?
So many Metro reverences...
Sleep? Who needs sleep? I'm perfectly fine here in my bed in a fetal position rocking back and forth.
Seriously though. That is possibly your darkest chapter by far. I applaud you.
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I stopped somewhere around chapter 50. What the hell are you talking about?
"One thing I quickly learned about that shaft is that it was way too narrow "
Innuendo right from the start. I like it. (Probably just me being a pervert though)
Good
Flashbacks to Metro 2033 here. Might just be because of the name Artyom. Then again, daaaamn, you had me by the seat of my pants (or whatever it is), for the entire thing.
It must have been hell, heh, for her to put it on paper. To have to relive that. I'd be unable to sleep without a light, wait, floodlight, on for the rest of my life after that.
He's been through some shit, but if THIS doesn't scar her for life then I don't know what will.
If you just end it with 'When I woke up in Zecora's room on the ship I was damned confused. The bandage and ice-pack on my head felt somewhat fresh. They told me that they had found me unconscious and bleeding at the bottom of the elevator shaft, where ice had blocked off the entrance to the rest of the bunker.' Well, I'll just have to write... a CadanceXNavarone story and flood your inbox or something.
Fucking awesome chapter, now get another one up!
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Ya the plot has gotten weird. He's basically going on a worldwide quest to free fire, earth, water, and air elementals which were previously created by the humans as aggregate nano-machines in order to stop Discord who has been discovered to be free. During this time Discord stole the elements and hid them on his journey. The plot has basically gone everywhere. If you got to the items he found while visiting the Everfree, they are cursed if used too much, he's already suffered permanent gender change from gender changing stones he found. Personally I'm just reading this because some of the areas created or small arcs are interesting along the way.
this totally reminded me of metro 2033/last light, both the book and the games. The russians seem to be one of the few cultures who have problems with underground bunkers and post apocalyptic hauntings.
I was not expecting this. Did he find an insane fire elemental?
Out of mild curiosity, was the pool of blood portion at least partially inspired from the sleeping walking scene from Disney's Anastasia?
So... anybody else feel like there was a big Metro 2033 reference here? I only assume so cause, you know, underground, Russian, and a ghost by the name of Artyom.
Interesting none the less. I feel like Nav is going to have a lot of trouble coping withe everything he sees down there.
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I really wish I could tell you... It's getting ridiculous.
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Fixed those and several others.
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Who? I just picked a random Russian name.
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Not on purpose. I completely forgot the dude from Metro's name was Artyom as well.
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That won't happen, but I'd be okay with a Cadance x Nav story.
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No. Just the dancing scene at the beginning.
3861007 There was also a ghost chapter in Metro
do you mean size instead of side?
either way enjoyed the chapter. Im a little disappointed that he didn't escape in this chapter but eh, thats just a minor complaint.
keep up the good work,
-dust
Dammit Nav. Don't incur Murphy's wrath!
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Well, I kinda need something random to break down the writers block... So maybe? Most likely not.
I have a feeling he'd have to say something along the lines of "Well... shit. This is awkward. Now I'm dating the pony equivalent of my sister.." Then again, he'd probably just shrug it off as kinky down the line.
At least I think I remember him saying something along the lines of her reminding him of his sister somewhere around when they invited him to a threesome.
Also, wooh. Not a dream.
3860726 Alright, I'll start.
Thanks for the push
Was thinking of Pudge while reading that.
Also the tension really hooked me in (no pun intended). What a messed up place. Loved it.
Someone down there HAD to have messed with necromancy... maybe Discord decided that it's time that Nav should meet Grogar, or whatever his name is.
Well, that was creepy and thrilling. I'm curious just how much longer you can make this section of the story. And if Navarone will actually get anything good out of this almost-literal hellhole.
3861110 Agreed, there's no way this may ghosts, ghouls, and other necrotic entities could have occurred naturally. No matter how many people died here. Maybe it has something to do with those demons and other creatures fighting in that vision Navarone saw. It sounded like some of the participants were Fire Elementals. Which begs the question of why the hell Fire Elementals would be down there.
I think you accidentally a hand. A free hand, to be specific.
3860395 4294294820984903284821940581032498590821 chapters long c:
This gives me 7th Guest flashbacks, only if 7th Guest took place in a Fallout vault...and without the stupid puzzles.
I tried looking up what he said to the girl on google translate but they couldn't figure it out. It said it was solvec but what does it mean?
And my god man this chapter was different. That fire elemental is defaintly going to hell to deal with, though. And if it is a fire elemental did she do all that to the humans? Or was it Discord? Perhaps the butcher? I don't know, but this chapter was very grusome and very entertaining.
Hand free hand?
3860831 He's telling you things that need to get done before the story even can end. It's been racking up things for a while now.
Elementals are beings that he needs to release. There are a bunch of water, a few fires, I think a couple air and only one earth.
The Elements of Harmony are scattered along his quest's path.
He got a few items a while back that he only recently found out had curses. Only 1 of 3 have been activated (Ch.110 POV)
And then there is his MAJOR quest which is more spoilers than I would be willing to give
*Looks at amount of chapters* Well, not gonna read
Well... i wasn't planning to sleep anyway.
World War Z happened, Nav.
3860831 Read it, Sapir-Whorf