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So I finished this chapter and realized it was way too long. I cut it in half and made it two chapters instead. Here's the next one, which hasn't been fully proofed yet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Tfke0CdPYUlo9sZuPyarCeHdM-5VRsOVikOQGNfL_ZI/edit
Man I love this story so much
here's hoping that Nav'll figure out some sort of wooden puppet-golem so she can move around outside her grove once she becomes fully immobile.
Looking forward to the next half! Will it be out sometime this week? Or next week?
Good shit. Definitely gonna read your not yet fully proofed second half because this really does end abruptly, and not in a good way.
Finally. When's the next chapter
Hmmm soo almost AL the living beings on the plant is half fey?
Celestia was attract to nav because of the fey part and wanted him to depend on her? "stay with me and I can make all things better nav"
With the above and the mind control + vodoo made me think of hamilton - you'll be back
Nav was actually quite kind, cool, and competent when he spoke to Silver. I was genuinely impressed with how much he's grown as a person.
Then he immediately bollocksed it up when he spoke to Kat two minutes later.
Damn ... actually feel bad for the squirrel. Probably was crazy girls pet to. Just imagined her coming to pick it up later just to find out they fed it to spider.
"Ah, what a sight, tis Navarone, "The Zero Fucks Giving Tree"!
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This fic has it's ups and downs but it never ceases to entertain.
Calling it now, the second half of this chapter will start with Nav emerging from a cherry blossom in two weeks.
I'll read the next one once it's proofed.
Love this story.
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Thanks for being awesome!
Fucking, owned.
Can't wait for the second half.
Yeet
One of the good things about reading the gdocs ahead of time is that it allows you more time to think of a comment before the chapters official release.
First off, Athena and Hera's explaination on fae was horrifying. They want you because A) fae are attracted to humans and have more intense emotions and B) this synergizes with their hormonal animal instincts. At this point, I think it would be in Nav's best interest to stay away from all the
maresfae females wanting her lady parts.Second, I made a comment last chapter how seemingly insignificant characters seem to pop back up more important later. The weird mushroom lady from the changeling cave making a reappearance? Yeah, okay, I can see that. The biggest tree in the forest where he killed the fenghuang and help Eva/Poly/Ganger/Mimeo is actually a tree sister that was Luna's friend before her banishment and also corrupted the old Equestrian capital?
WTF, who else do you have planned to make a reappearance/be a whole lot more significant than we realized?!
OK, now this chapter managed to put off Nav going into the coma in a more interesting way.
The amount of world building and the introduction of Poira brought it back in the direction of how satisfying chapters felt ages ago. (As opposed to how so many recent chapters have felt more "stalling for time" than "satisfying".)
Thanos?
"He's right"
Clearly foreshadowing Nav's transformation back to a male
:D
D:
:DDDDD
Great chapter but are all faes attracted to Nav? I swear to god there has to be somefae who wasn't attracted to Nav. Fluttershy? Applejack? I mean Fluttershy saw Nav as an animal that needed help right? So she wouldn't be attracted to him necessarily.
Nav said he wanted his woody back.
just gonna say. how is aqua talking to nav in the book?
That poor squirrel, after all he went through just to be fed to spider
Athena and Hera are my last two brain cells.
I expect Nav would probably prefer becoming Eris over the fate of a tree sister if Discord wasn’t part of the deal. Of course there’s still option C of getting enough ppl to worship you and becoming a god.
Nav: "So Discord can't enter this book dimension to mess with my coma, right?"
Athena: "Why don't you ask him yourself?" *gestures off to the side*
*Nav turns to look but finds no one*
Athena: "As I'm sure you're already aware, Discord will never pass the opportunity for a dramatic entrance. You are safe here."
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I love it
I was about to be super sad i finished the new chapter, but then i remembered there was another! Today is a good day.
That's because you murder the fuck out of any threat thst comes within a kilometer of you.
It's people who say that that are the carziest of them all.
So... Trees.
This would have been nice to know 100 chapters ago
Using a squirrel as a weapon Does not approve
Killing squirrel Nooooo
Dont say muffins are evil within distance she will go pinkie level crazy
Hot dang, that left quite a bad taste in my mouth
This made me laugh
Wait so basically she's gonna be Pip from Fo:E?
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Eh spider needs to eat to and it not like it suffered