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Why no comments?
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Because you commented on chapter thirty one and you're looking at chapter thirty. My chapters and FIM's chapters are one apart.
1270363 I'm actually talking about why there no comments on this chapter. I didn't even realize there was a chapter I missed. I didn't get a update email about it ether, phone I'm disappointed in you.
So Pinkie Pie is playing matchmaker, but also desires Navi. He really likes making Twilight uncomfortable.
Also that ending...wha?
he's probably the chosen one. now isn't he?
1272238 I bet
.....well shit now Taya will be sad which will make Nav sad...once he wakes up and the cycle will DESTROY US ALL!!, DESTROY US ALL!!, DESTROY US ALL!!,
Wait... Luna, Fluttershy, Kat (to a point), Pinkie and I have a feeling that there might be something there for Twi... Seriously, consider that romance tag.
It took me reading the entire story from beginning to end, but finally I realized. Did you base Taya off...
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Lavender filly, purple hair and white hair and purple eyes. No Cutie Mark of course.
Yep.
Finally I have an image of Taya to put in my mind while i read, i can now die happily, after reading of course.
That was some masterful tag team trolling. I laughed my ass off.
I know how Taya was described, but for some reason I see her as a light orange (Lighter than applebloom.) almost brown filly with a dark orange mane, I think it has something to do with her magical aura in the later chapters.
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It also helps that her original description was light orange with green eyes.
-Early draft of Chapter Twenty-Five—A chance meeting of a lifetime, around May 2012.
Her mane color was never specified, and we can only assume some hue along the orange spectrum, possibly blonde but unlikely to be red due to all subsequent rough descriptions being of an orange furry mass.
Later descriptions change the color of her coat and eyes, as well as detailing her mane color
-Chapter Twenty-Five—A chance meeting of a lifetime, current as of September 29, 2013
It becomes easier to associate Taya with orange, because orange is the color used to describe her aura when using magic, compared to the color of her mane, her coat, or her eyes, which are described less frequently because these are descriptors of identity. Why use a description of a filly when you already have her Name? Describing the aura used, however, describes identity and action, WHO is doing WHAT (magic) in this case.
That moment when you start counting your old comments to see how many you put on the story.
Yeah...us guys can never, never seem to say the right thing we had in mind, do we?
You don't say?
So, are we ever going to find the chosen one? Or zombies. I'd love zombies. :3
What.
Meaning to ask her about what? In your rush to edit I think you neglected Spikes line :P
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Spike never had a line. Look at the previous paragraph.
This takes on an interesting image after "Twilight Time" If she is better than most I would hate to see how most are.
When your report said it was big… I never expected this! THAT`S WHAT SHE SAID...damn capitalism...
3913116 zombies are here.
It's kinda late for this but why does pinkie have nightmares when ponies can't dream without that dream machine thingy?
I'm probably missing something important it's doubtful that it was a mistake
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Pinkie's... special. I believe Luna sort of explains it later on. Someone else adds a little more explanation as well.
Did Navi just absorb a fuck ton of unrestrained magic from Taya?
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Probably... IDK
>The only reason they let you in at all is because is that you bear the steel of a wanderer atoning for his past mistakes
He had some treble speaking, I see
6468793 I'm pretty sure i heard his voice quaver
Gender-bender?
Wait. No. Discord.
I can imagine the sex ed class Twilight is going through right now
"So, pony, is THIS what you wanted to learn about?"
The Naga below the leader moans.
Twilights blush turns so hot that it incinerated the two, and then spike.
"Oh no."
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Discord?
Now if I remember correctly, Discord dragged Nav from his timeline using Twilight.
And isn't he still teaching Trixie?
7622011 huh, I thought Nav was a Discord instance, retelling how he came to be, again In an ironic way: Making the princesses accept a bet that he knew the outcome of. Princeses, and experiences in equestria having created him in the past. But without having memory of it. Bound to make the same mistakes..... me thunks
Coming back around on the re-read! I forgot how perfect Taya is for Nav, what with knowing him better than he does himself after only knowing him for a day and all. And I can't wait for the naga jokes to really start!
Hmm I wonder why?
A few things. You've said paper several times before this and I've never really thought about it until now but I'm pretty sure that in the show they say parchment. At this point it would be hell to go back and change every time you say paper and you could pass it off as a habit from earth that's just easier not to change (which may or may not be what you were already going with). However, I know that he hasn't 'invented' pens yet. He would have to grab a quill. You also may have intended this as another habit. Idk. This is one that I'm really not sure on.
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They may call it parchment in the show, but I honestly doubt the ponies are writing on leather. That doesn't really seem like them. The quill thing is right, though.
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Good to know. I'll keep my eyes out for other instances where you say pen instead of quill before he makes them.
Spike said "Women." Nav said "Mares."
Ok. I take it back. He didn't had balls. He had lack of brains. He didn't realized that the were three options on how Shy would react, with two most likely ones. I unconditionally agree with Pinkie's assesment: Nav, you're an idiot.
Three variants, all hurtful, starting from less hurtful to most one.
1. She would be traumatized by what he done. She would desengage, but part of her heart would regret this loss. She might hide it and lie, that she is all right.
Been there myself. I mean, in real life. As the dissuading side.
Not an unlikely outcome for Bearer.
2. She would ignore it and accept him as he is. Love is blind. She would be hurt every time he is being horrible. She would not stop him in most cases. Eventually it would lead to corruption.
3. Just what happened. Most likely outcome for Bearer. And most hurtful one for her, if he is some kind of that charcter. As he isn't , it would devolve into (1), (2) or more or less normal, if strained, relations.
C'est la vie. Life sucks.
Fucking unicorns.
HAHAHA, Nav's fucking dad is savage
Nah, women in general are crazy
Why is she always called Nav "daddy" can she call me dad or something. Don't know why, she's always repeating daddy makes me feel uncomfortable
Well I guess everypony wants to fuck Nav. Wonder if we'll meet someone who doesn't
Dang it! Just when I decided to take a break and read another story...
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I have a similar experience which make me able to empathize with your emotional stat
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Why did you feel the need to post that
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What did he say?
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Something dumb, probably
Ah the nail in Nav's marginally normal life is set.
Welcome to your forever.