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Comatize me, Captain!
First.
That was quick you get a Fluttershy
Bacon.
Athena spraying Hera like you would a cat is just the best thing ever
Shit far, you've been doing this thing for 7 years now?!
Athena got such comforting last words.
Can't wait for more!
Please more
whoa what is this a double chapter??
Hmmm what are the minotaurs doing, surely they wanna join in on the academy of their great patron human, and her great crusade to tartaros.
Wob Wob foreshadow strip to Asia.
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yes
Still love this story. But now I wonder what type of coma we will have on our hands....hooves?....claws...our feelers
2 chaps... thanks for them all!
Can we keep her
Oh shit so they're still alive. Also China no. 1
So basically Saddam Hussein?
Where were the donuts for Athena and Hera? Wonder how long the coma "arc" will be. It cant just be like 2 chapters right? (In before WMID pranks us and it ends next chapter because the coma failed)
I really want to know how Nav will turn out. I hope it's a re-do of his edgy personality.
Hoooooooooly shit, finally. This coma arc has been lead up to for what, the past million words? We’re finally seeing this payoff, and it makes me damn happy. Also that was a fuckin fast upload.
Can’t wait to see what you’re gunna do next.
I just realized this is the longest piece of literature I've ever read. This shit makes me love reading!
Keep on writing dood
"My".
I wonder what the coma is going to be like. Will there be a whole chapter or two dedicated to it, or just a few sentences or paragraphs and the rest of the chapter dealing with the aftermath and the rest of the main storyline?
I suppose there is only one way to find out.
~KBO.
I got a sneaking suspicion that Celestia has/had a plan for her brainwashing. She's too wiley to be caught flat footed as it were.
Oh boi coma time..
Excited. Tis a bit annoying you spent 2 chapters building up to this cause I thought it would happen sonner and now we have to wait maybe a month to see the outcome, or at least some adventure 😥
But deffinately thanks for two really good chapters so fast. Deffinately a surprise and awesome work. Just really can't wait to see what this comma will be.
Is it just a plot device to reset a characters story arch just a cheap writing trick, or is it going to be awesome
...and he wakes up at Bronycon. The end.
I don't know why. Maybe it bugs me, but I hope Nav won't be such a slut when she wakes up again.
Is anyone else just waiting for shit to hit the fan again?
Coma coma coma coma comatizing time!
Will Nav respawn, or experience a whack spiritual adventure? Find out next time on Dragon Ball Z!
Maaan, i get the feeling, that Celestia is going to eff things up. That was too good to be true, after all the shit, that happened to Nav.
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You beat me to it, was going to make that same comment. XD
100% expecting it to be Silent Hill in his head where all his fears and trauma's are represented as horrifying monstrosities. I can only imagine what some of them would look like given what he's been through. Like, one of them could basically be Legion from Castlevania only instead being made of human corpses it's flaming naga corpses.
...I wonder if he'll encounter Ava and the two of them work together to fix Nav's mind?
Been waiting for this to finally happen for a long time.
...you're going to just have the next chapter start with her resurrecting, aren't you? You're definitely enough of a bastard to do that.
I just want to point out how funny it is to listen to the auto-reader read
Athena's last words in this chapter are fucking haunting, If Navarone DOES end up dying, he's gonna come back to a bisected version of himself.
I mean, my goodness imagine anyone else's reaction to that as well.
Nav coming back to life to see their own disected body is almost as bad as Claire from Heros. Except she can do it to herself?
Celestias behaviour is still bugging the nuts outa me, unless Discords riding her.
Well then...... congratulations on having the longest story on here with nearly 3 MILLION WORDS, xD
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Aqua was in her head long enough to have found and disabled any contingency plans she had. Even a "making a plan and erasing my own memories" plan wouldn't get passed an elemental with plans for total control.
so i am going to guess its not going to work well? you used the seed right before this as a plot point. so they can kill this version off and loose really nothing when the new nav regrows. you have to use the seeds at some point :P
Lovely, simply lovely.
I await in anticipation. I hope Nav comes out alright.
Nav's Inner Demon: "You're a soulless puppet designed for a game. You don't have inner demons."
Nav: "... That's exactly what an Inner Demon would say!"
I put this on my read later list
But haha
I’m lying to myself
I’m never even gonna try to finish this
It begins...
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Glad to see that I wasn't the only one to think of that, lol.
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Yeah but Nav also now knows that the more regenerations they go through, the less they will be able to leave their eventual "grove"
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Hope you're right.
Now Twilight and Taya get to watch as the 2 humans butcher Nav and cut her limbs off with blood everywhere and Hera probably licking most of it up. It's going to be great.
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You could call it a plot point if you want, but Nav would have to be an idiot to not have a contingency plan for something so obviously dangerous.
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i think you are missing the point. its not navs anything. the the writers. the seeds are added in as a plot point. meaning they will have to be used at some point.
Wait, am i missing something? Didn't Discord say that Nav was Immortal unless he chose otherwise? Doesn't that mean that the seed clones are worthless now?
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Immortality takes on many forms and shapes.
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There is one thing you’re misunderstanding here: characterization isn’t plot. The readers know Nav is intelligent and prepares for failure. It would be out of character to not have a backup plan. The seeds have already been used multiple times and Nav hasn’t died yet. I’m not saying everything will turn out okay, I’m saying you shouldn’t pretend to know what’s going to happen.
Do you have any idea how many minor details are in this story for the sake of characterization? If every one of them led to something important, the word count would be in the tens of millions.
*Three hours of binge reading later along with all the comments* Weeze cough cough~ Aaaaah~ *Flops over in a stupor*
Nav never planted... Nav never... Hey... Nav never planted the seed....
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Yes, she did before cheering Taya up.