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Fuckin A', 5 minutes since it uploads and I'm already reading this.
are you attempting to torture your readers? cause if you are, well done
It's good
Very well-written. Nice job making Cadance awkward and still having it fit with her personality that you've showed before.
Overall, six out of five.
Wait, hold on. You're updating pretty fing slowly -- make that five out of ten.
Oh, well. No extra credit for you.
4323478 Ah. Thanks for clarifying.
You know you are being really mean by making these feel so short! so in other words don't make it so good so it seems shorter (hehe this is joke don't take offence) But really these chapter are so good. This is my favourite story on fimfic.
Cadance is really great in this chapter.
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-Missy
Nav, you dumbass...
Molesting Molestia in stage is a recipe for disaster.
Delightful. Can't wait for the shit the hit the fan again though.
Lets see if Nav likes anal. I know I wouldn't.
'Mazing this.
~Adjier
Good ol' RPG tropes, I'm sure. Dark Souls!
god fucking dammit no Nav being Gatsu, I guess.
Damn it are you trying to make me feel guilty? I can barely write 8k words in two months while you churn out almost 20k in less than half that!
gud chapter tho
...I want this.
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A vibrating buttplug? You can get them online.
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Is that guilt going to make you write more?
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Dark Souls, actually. And who said Nav wasn't going to be Gatts? Reggie said he didn't know if the armor had any properties since he's magically resistant and can't tell anything about that.
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They all think that at first.
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It's the kind of disaster Nav wants.
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Excellent.
You know, the solution for Nav being a girl is very easy, he simply go back in time, when the stones were functional, change back to male, and then return to the present, it'll take a little bit of planning, but for the most part, i'ts perfectly plausible; he returned millions of years before, a couples of months or even a year would be a piece of cake.
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no
maybe
Kind of wondering if Reggie is going to crash the Gala or something.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
4323496 He actually melted out of it.
In other news, holy crap baskets this is getting hilarious. Also, is it seriously that hard to change a pony's gender or does it just not cross Nav's mind to ask? I kinda forget if alicorn amulet trixie managed a gender swap...
4323747 No. And I'm not sure you'll guess exactly what at this rate.
I have this small shred of hope Lunas mental state is being influenced by discord.
This one felt relaxing, perverted beyond belief and yet innocent at the same time. Good job.
4323747 I knew it was from Dark Souls!
When he said stay away from lightning I instantly thought of Gwyn. P
Did we really just read through half a chapter that was nothing but a slumber party?
Well you sell it really well, we can only guess what that says about us...
Loved this chapter, definitely got a Dark Souls feel from the part about lightning with dragons, come to think of it I remember reading your thing on pastebin about muling, so thanks for that too, haha
Public foreplay, eh? Well, I guess we needed to step it up since the public assassination.
thanks for the update!!
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Twilight faked a gender-swap of Applejack to one-up Alicorn Amulet Trixie.
Sweet chapter!
4323962 It is, it's kind of implied in the 1st chapter
4324382 really? Its been a vary long time, but thank you for the reminder. I'll have to do a reread, during the summer when i don't have professors hanging over my head. I'd rather not think a being who took it upon herself to watch over her subjects dreams rapes her lover for fun.
Stealing time from my DayZ... Quite the chuckle worthy chapter no less.
4324110 My point exactly. All of twi's stuff was faked in that 2nd part, but trixie's spells were real so did trixie do any gender bending or was it just twi? and of course once twi learns magic she can do some real gender bending
You know, I like the way this is going, but I have another way to mess with Nav's head- introduce another human to the story. Fresh off earth, and pretty naive. Let's see how he reacts to that.
Of course, if you want to completely disregard this suggestion and carry on as you were doing, that's fine too. Either way, keep it up!
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>so short
This chapter was longer than most stories on this bloody site.
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Changing a pony's gender with real magic isn't that difficult. However, Nav isn't a pony and no one that knows real magic knows how his reproductive system works or how his body is supposed to work. If you know anatomy, you can change the gender. But if you don't know the anatomy, you're useless. Essentially, he's fucked. And no, Alicorn Amulet Trixie didn't manage a gender swap.
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I had a pretty serious mental debate about whether or not to include the slumber party. Asked a few people and some figured I might as well. I liked the end product, so I kept it.
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I've already had a poll about that. The answer was overwhelmingly no.
4324566 Oh. Too bad.
Does that cloak just so happen to be a warders cloak?
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No, warder cloaks are useful. Nav's is just annoying.
4324770 HA! Don't let Lan hear that. I just started on the third book. Read the other two in about a month. Still can't put my finger on who Nav acts like though. Only one i can think of is Geofram Bornhald when he wondered why When he picks his fingernails with his knife people get scared
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My point was that, as I remember it, Twilight won that particular exchange with her fake gender-swap because Trixie could "only" age or de-age ponies but couldn't actually gender-swap them.
Celestia sent Luna.
I thought the lightning and dragons thing was from Journey Of Graves. Given he took out a legendary with one shot. That took two minutes to charge up.
A whole chapter of nothing dangerous happeneg, but the news that the Gala is in a few days? Im wondering just what in Equestria sort of warfare and destruction is going to happen there, given Cadences butt plug and Celestia maybe going horngasm boom?
Yaay, an Spider spitwadding the nobles to the walls.
And, thats the last we see of old sour Crabapple Jelly? Aw, well, Nav did say he has certain limits to even his perversions.
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Never heard of it.
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Some of Nav is based off Mat, though it'll take a little while to notice. The books pick up as you go on until you get to around 7-9, when they slow down. Then they pick up again.
Hello everyone. Our Gracious Author here has allowed me to work on a audio project of mine that is making this into an Audio dub. If anybody is interested here is the link for the character auditions. http://www.behindthevoiceactors.com/members/sonicfools1234/casting-call/Diaries-of-a-Madman-Discords-Return/ I know some characters aren't there but these are all of the major characters that have a lot of lines in multiple chapters, or at least a big role. So have fun if you are interested.
4324444 I can save you the re read, it's just the part after discord makes the deal with celestia, he says:
"I drove a pony nearly mad from loneliness.
I pushed the winds to severely injure a griffin when she collided with the ground.
I forced some filthy monsters to begin a migration.
I whispered into the mind of a unicorn, driving him across the lands in search of monsters that didn’t exist.
I drove a king mad.
I made a mugger go too far but step back from the abyss when it was almost too late.
I whispered jealous thoughts into the mind of a mare.
I drove narcissism so deeply into the mind of a pony that he would be broken if his body was harmed.
I gave an ancient dragon nightmares.
I drove a serpent mad from loneliness. "
I kind of assume he nearly drove luna mad from loneliness
4325329 thank you for thar. Yea i see it now. Unfortunate. Lets hope she can be cured, as well as nav. What will the ending bare for us?
This story is sily magical. It does all the right thigs and in my opigion is the best story on fimfiction.
I only hope that when it ends you go into a career writing. I will buye very book
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So in essence, the only one who can change his gender is Athena, since her knowledge about humans is probably omni.
I remember she said she can't, but I feel like that's a lie.... Especially with what you just said.
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Nav's body is fucked, remember? His anatomy is completely broken, so it's impossible for Athena to turn him back. She doesn't know what his insides are like. No one knows what his insides are like.
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Oh shit, thats right.... oh wait, Athena is the god of knowledge, and with some study she could probably do it anyway. She has books that are probably memorized everywhere about every type of organ; plant or other, and has been using true magic for as long as Discord i'm sure. I still think Athena can do it, she just wants to take advantage of Nav's body first. I mean, fuck, she can probably do all the x-rays and stuff that humans can do with true magic alone.
She probably even has all the medical records of Nav written down by the scientists at Google on hand too. Oh, and they would know since they studied him so closely. I mean, she did have Luna's diary if I remember correctly, as well as the unwritten history of Equestria.
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She probably could given enough time and study, but she doesn't care enough to. She has absolutely no motivation to help him. And Nav doesn't have any organs, remember? His internal body is so fucked up that it's not even human anymore. She would have to figure out how to change his gender with the muck inside his body, which would be harder than just changing testes to ovaries.
That history was at some point written down, but it fell out of favor eventually and Celestia had it all redone. Luna's diary was written down. Most of Nav's internal stuff probably wasn't really written down anywhere, just put onto a computer. Even if she did have it somewhere, she'd have to figure out where. She lives in an entire world populated by books. Finding it would be like finding the unholy spawn between Carmen Sandiago and Waldo.