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Me: *Sees update* *Heavy Breathing begins*
Been waiting for so long. I'll be reading if anyone needs me.
All is lost.
Cool, update took a while, but meh. People do stuff.
Even though this chapter was of average length by your standards in terms of word count, it felt more on the short side. Still good, like the complications with Celestia.
Whoops.
....the...mirror....pool.....oh shit
This is the biggest story I ever saw... And it's incomplete... Can anyone tell me the good things about this story? I'm a bit scarred to start reading it completely in the dark without knowing anything about it
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Filled with dark themes, sexual themes, dark sexual themes (including but not limited to rape), cynical humor, and lots of other fun.
Whoo! Nice chapter.
And here begins the Pinkie Apocalypse?
Oh hell yes. They found the mirror pool! One of the most unethical things in MLP (besides the brainwashing happiness). Create life to just snuff it out is murder but eh, it's a little girls show, subtle murder is their specialty... Right?
And thus, the second apocalypse begins.
I almost lost hope, But here it is.
...oh god dont let this be a mind fuck.
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That was the reply to Cadance's question.
wohoo, thank you whatmustido another chapter
4683725 The rephrase made it clearer. Thanks.
The king has returned...
HAAAAAAAAA HHENYAAAA OWIBABAAAAAa
That freaking ending. Nav is going to have a field day with this. I hope the next chapters will come a little easier on you, it's hard writing downtime. (I would however say that you did a great job on this chapter)
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Compared to many other stories on this site 'DoaM' handles adult themes, human in equestria and characters really well.
You get a sense of reading a huge epic instead of glossing over a fanfiction, characters, situations are well defined (Only strange thing is changelings losing and gaining sense of smell sometimes.)
So, is Navi gonna mirror-pool as well?
"Behold, the army of winged nympho-sluts!"
Navarone's hell has only just begun
4683605 Do it anyway, it's almost a rite of passage around here.
4683829 ....Suddenly he has infinite copies of his equipment,and the ability to have selfcest.
Nav is having so much, fun, its a pity that sooner or later he ends up dealing with too many Pinkies in unwanted candy orgies and Twilight and her tentacle monster are nowhere near.
I wonder just how many Minotaur Stud Golems Celestia will order, for, Royal use?
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Oho! Could it be, that Chrissy decided to meet with our hero(ine?) again?
Hey, you aren't dead, that's good. And an update, also good.
4683570 My thoughts exactly
Oh god to the nope....
Oh, and still hate female Nav.
Gotta put that in there every single chapter for the next 100 or so chapters.
Oh no multi-nav
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If you like the style of this chapter you will like the story. Trust me once your done you will wonder how you got through that many words that quick
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I so wish that the author would fix those stones so that we could get male nab back. I agree; the amount of angst in these chapters is too damn high.
To the author: let the stones be "recharging naturally" and get fixed soon. Or let the genderswap wear off.
Welp, we're doomed. The Pink Horde is coming.
Initial thoughts: hell yes! Another chapter.
Positives: bucking everything!
Negatives: I'm sorry what? There are none!
Overview: MOAR please!
So... Nav has sex with Celestia, as a mare? I thought he hating having sex as a pony, because it's so unnatural to him and because all the shitty experiences associated with it. He should at least still be a little traumatized from that night with Luna, I can't really believe he'd agree to it without forcing Celestia to turn him human again.
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Sometimes you have to tolerate things for those you care about having sex with.
I really hope the Pinkies don't end up the same way they did in the show. Aerie could set up a subterranean Pinkie Kingdom instead.
Besides, the world could stand to have a few more of these.
Ahh, the mirror pool. Familiar territory, HO!
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This story is too damn good not to read. I guarantee that you will someday loo back on your life, wonder what is missing, and realize that it was Diaries of a Madman. It's been worth every second of my time to read and re-read this story.
The sex scene with Celestia seems reminiscent of the sex scene where Nav lost his female virginity to male Luna, but less bad.
And he thought the bunker of ghosts was bad poor nav
4684579 lol I like the way you said that
4683605 It starts getting really good after he gets his wings
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Dude I tried, he's not willing to change Nav's gender cause it's important to the plot....
Fucking *gag* by the way.
I honestly wonder how him having boobs and a vagina could possibly be important and not disgusting.
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Ignoring my extreme hate of that, great chapter WhatMustIDo, love the metal golems.
Ohhh, dear. I suspect poor Nav's going to really, really want his rifle before too long.
okay, Flo is OP for a lot of different reasons, but this?:
Holy hell, i want a build in relationship adviser...
Aaaargh angsty Nav, angsty Nav!
Also aaaargh Mirror Pool, Mirror Pool!
Not good!
Lovin the golem tho, that's cool.
If Nav enters that pool...
Let the Eternal Orgy begin!
This will be ugly.
Neat
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Why is everything you say so quoteable?