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Reading a couple paragraphs, coupled with the contents of the comments section of the last chapter, I know going in that there's either going to be M/M clop, or foalcon.
I am alright with either one, provided you are writing it.
EDIT: EEYUP SAW THAT ONE COMING.
AND I THINK THEY DID TOO xD
Although, now that you've actually done something nice and happy for Nav, I know something utterly fucked up is going to happen.
And all that Diamond Tiara build up you got going on...
Plants grow huge with a high CO2 concentration. High O2 will smother plants.
For a safer bet, say earth pony magic. It's a valid justification in Equestria, after all.
Wait, when was the air elemental freed?
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Easy fix. This is why I need more scientist proofers.
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DT build up, Spike build up, Cadance build up... It'll be interesting.
2681363 Oh christ, he is getting raped soon. BUT BY WHO!?
Aah, Nav making Rarity feel like shit is always so pleasant to read. My parents are farmers and I can attest to the fact that the work is indeed mind numbing! Yep, from the time I saw Braeburn's entrance I knew Nav was going to get him some, I just wonder how much people are going to start whining about the gay clop now? Heh, I'm hoping Nav changes his mind about celebrating with Cadance and Shining Armor and joins in the fun, she looks like she wouldn't mind seeing Shiny railed like that!
Soo water elementals speak Dutch and Air elementals speak hungarian... Polish for fires and German for earths?
I'm all for Cadance inviting Nav for some fun with Shiny. I'd especially like it if you brought the stones in. Maybe Cadance goes male, and she and Nav double-team Shiny.
heheheheheh.....that was hilarious....Well....I guess Nav is bi now... Oh well. Still, at least Cadance is finally out of his House...But what was Taya doing? Hmn....Interesting...very interesting.
Hey, it aint gay if it's not on Earth!
Yup still love the fact that I can jump the sex scenes.
This is what I'm here for.
I have 1363 pony fics on my kindle now. This one is my favorite. And much as it shames me to admit, I just squeed when I saw that this had updated.
Given your real origins, wouldn't Twilight and Discord be your real parents?
If Rarity is ever going to get Spike back she'll have to get really creative.
It was like a train wreck. I knew it was coming, but I couldn't turn away. . . but I still loved it.
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What have you done to me?
Oh my...
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I am not usually into m/m porn/clop, but wow..
That was one of the best sex scenes you have ever written.
Good job!
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Nothing you regret.
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Shh. There's no shame now, just dreams.
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Why skip it? What are you, straight?
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Taya was helping Twilight.
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At the museum, which is what she said.
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Eh, I'm out of practice. Once I get back into it they'll get worse again.
2681660 In her room? Also...FIRST COMMENT!
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Yes.
The answer to your question is yes.
2681670 .....NOOOOOOOOOOO I WAS FIRST TT.TT....I was firrrrrstt TT.TT
2681671 With his luck, it'll be all three at once.
Or Taya will somehow get involved. Somehow, I feel that Nav will eventually get raped by her, or if not raped then somehow hurt by her badly.
I predict it'll be consensual with Lovebutt, anything but with DT and... If it even happens with Spike, I doubt the little guy would ever want to ruin what he has going, so consensual.
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Oh god, I hope nothing comes from Taya. She's pretty much the only marginally good influence Nav has anymore, besides Flo...
I can see lovebutt roping him in somehow. Not really rape, but not completely consensual.
2681722 No, I imagine it'll be consensual. DT will blackmail him, probably.
Taya... Yeah, it would be awful...
BUT HAVE YOU READ THIS STORY? Something even slightly good is always overshadowed by the bad.
This chapter was hilarious awesome, totally bucked up, and awkward to the extreme.
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But... but I want to believe... Why can't my protagonists be happy, damnit?!
2681757 BECAUSE HE'S NAVARONE!
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Well, I'm blind. Thanks for clearing that up.
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Nice chapter! I skipped the gay scene because sex in the poop chute is kind of...eww to me. When is discord going to finally start his master plan? I hope it is soon because I love discord and his discord-ness.
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No, at the farm.
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Because happiness is overrated.
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Casuals. Also, his plan started the moment he recreated Navarone. Everything since has just been cogs in the machine.
Sigh, so much disappointment and broken dreams.
First of all, nice picture.
Second, Yay! New chapter.
Third, My mind is filled with '...' And I am not sure how to feel about it.
Fourth, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Nice to see a new update. Not too crazy about the new profile pic, I liked the old one better. How many more chapters until Nav goes on his trip?
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You'll know when I do. Looking at the list of shit I need to get done, I'd say at least two. Probably three or more.
2681959 ....DO NOT MENTION THAT STORY TO ME! I can't NOT hate Flim and Flam anymore....also...I meant what was she doing in the bedroom...at the house...before the farm....oh... I think I have an Idea now.
2682401 I feel it too.
2682162 Just be crazy...its how I deal...
Dude...This story. So much going on with so much to do. When I first started reading, it took me 3 chapters to get hooked and then... I read the next 81 chapters in 2 days completing my weekind. Don't stop bro, I love it. Do you have an idea for about how much longer you plan to go?
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Nope. I'll just keep writing until it's finished.
I'm glad to see Nav is getting slightly happier- and I know it's about to be crushed soon.
Some great lines this chapter. All in all, pretty good.
Honestly, I don't understand how people are complaining about the clop. Regular buttsex with not much else attached is tame compared to some of the fucked-up shit Nav has done in this damn fic.
Anyway, really good chapter, and I look forward to the next one. This fic is retardedly long, but also retardedly good. For the most part.
man I love this new spike, all he needs is his own place and he's a bonafied adult and can learn the ways of nav-fu, also rarity has to be the worst elament of generosity ever and she still hasent learned from her mistakes >.<
so thanks for writing this and hope you stay this awsome/
I've gotten very sick lately, a mix of damage to my lungs from getting caught in a burning building, and various illnesses made worse by poor diet and lifestyle. Anyway, today I've been bedridden, unable to move without vomiting and getting migraines, high fever, ect..ect...
An update to this story didn't cure me, but it did make me feel a little bit better.
Thanks author dude.
this whole chapter:
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I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
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It's hard to apologize when the person you're trying to apologize to isn't on speaking terms with you. And Spike becoming Nav isn't necessarily a good thing.
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If it ever does cure you, let me know. I'd love to find out my story has curative properties.
Great chapter, a lot of very funny bits and even a new character. Now we know what was really in the box at the museum. Only one problem I found, a small spelling error:
I usually stick to popping my knuckles, not sure what pupping them would do. Also Flo had a Vader moment.
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
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Fixed.
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Like gay clop that much, huh?
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I got a real soft or should I say hard spot for em, im a dude with an open mind with a ton of kinks
you fucking gay piece of shit you will burn in hell you bastard....
>INB4 i had a why boner.[/spolier]
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please do keep on this gay snuu snuu scene was funny as hell
I don't really like the gay parts of this story. I, quite frankly, don't enjoy clop at all, but the only parts I skip are the gay parts.
I don't have a problem with homosex, I just don't want to hear about it. Kinda like how you don't want to hear your grandma's sex stories.
It also irritates me that you made Rarity walk in on it. Just kill the slut off already.
For all of the further times that you have Nav fuck a dude, please, for the love of all that is pootis, use the gender stones. Heterosex doesn't really bother me, and lesbosex is borderline enjoyable regardless of the inter-species crap.
Aside from that, great chapter. I wanna see where this Diamond Tiara thing goes. It's pretty fucking hilarious so far.