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Navi can't get any privacy in life can he? Wouldn't be a problem if he got his own place to stay.
Wonder how Fluttershy will react to his journal.
1265113 I bet I know how she will react.
*looks at the journals and barely reads one*
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Personally I think he should have bin pissed because of the read journals. That was a serious violation of trust there. Now Nav is a parent and scared to screw up, just like every other person. What we have here is a recipe for future angst, pain and WTF moments.
1265388 I second this!
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That's entirely true, a HUGE blow of trust was taken, I hope at least that he trusts Rainbow a little less, not how he brushed off RAPE!!, THREE TIMES!!! But that's just me.
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That gif on that moment was awesomely placed, have a mustache
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I wouldn't say he just brushed it off. He explained within the story that he's still slightly going through shock and has a bad case of Post Dramatic Stress Disorder. He's basically numbed to those situations and his brain had no idea how to cope with the trauma, after a while it ended up just numbing and accepting it, somewhat. All I can tell you is that it was covered within the story if you looked underneath the underneath and looked for minor details.
And as he said to Fluttershy within this chapter:
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sym·pa·thy [sim-puh-thee] plural sym·pa·thies, adjective
noun
1. harmony of or agreement in feeling, as between persons or on the part of one person with respect to another.
2. the harmony of feeling naturally existing between persons of like tastes or opinion or of congenial dispositions.
3. the fact or power of sharing the feelings of another, especially in sorrow or trouble; fellow feeling, compassion, or commiseration.
4. sympathies,
a. feelings or impulses of compassion.
b. feelings of favor, support, or loyalty: It's hard to tell where your sympathies lie.
5. favorable or approving accord; favor or approval: He viewed the plan with sympathy and publicly backed it.
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em·pa·thy [em-puh-thee] noun
1. the intellectual identification with or vicarious experiencing of the feelings, thoughts, or attitudes of another.
2. the imaginative ascribing to an object, as a natural object or work of art, feelings or attitudes present in oneself: By means of empathy, a great painting becomes a mirror of the self.
Hey Clementi-- I mean Taya.
Poor Fluttershy
Quick question, why no romance tag? There is so fucking much of it, even if Nav doesn't feel any of it himself. A lot of it is directed to him though, so I feel it might be necessary.
So, did I miss something? It was hinted at that fluttershy had some form of crush on Nav, but I don't remember it becoming an obvious issue that needed to be discussed.
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Nav said before he left to go to Egypt that when he got back he and Fluttershy could talk. He doesn't want to date her for reasons.
Not much to say other than that there are references to a Navarone/Twilight thing here with the mommy/daddy thing XD
I'm just waiting for Nav to Blue Screen of Death. There's only so much one person can take, right? ...right?
And another serious blow to his trusting anypony is dealt, and ignored.
I know people who don't have emotions. Or try their best not to, it's hard to tell sometimes. Even they would have some sort of reaction at some point. Here, nothing. Ever.
The. Fuck.
2637005 It's not a question of whether or not they have emotions. There's people in this world who want to forgive because to them the alternative is far more painful. It's possible to become so jaded towards the feeling of disappointment and being let down that you kind of just ignore it in favor of grasping at whatever positive emotion you can find. It's tough to live like that, believe me, but at the same time that's really the only way a person like this can live without losing some measure of sanity.
I also want to say something on a more general level: After beginning the task of reading this entire story a second time I can't help but mention how beautiful the psychology is. What started out as a simple case of culture shock became rapidly developed trust issues that set the staged for total emotional isolation... and if it wasn't for his ring giving him a crutch to ease his fears and Flo giving him a voice of reason he probably would have have made Cupcakes looks like a foal's dream. Pretty damn sure Whatmustido could manage the task of writing it too with how realistic this story is. Now that I think about it... a story could be written based purely on Nav's emotional development throughout this story... and I for one would love to see it.
Honestly I think nav should have been VERY pissed at them for reading his journals. Maybe threaten them a bit like he did with spike. (Yes I remember he is very afriad of magic).
must.....stop......reading............need......to......sleep
............ill be back in 6 hours
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You didn't stop reading, did you?
I felt the feels for a second there... nearly got meh...
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I'm sorry, Navarone.exe has crashed.
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A romance story is a love story. A story about two people love eachother. When the main character isn't feeling any love.... It doesn't count.
2446809 I bet you 200$ that at least 80% of the population would be broken after less than half of what he went through.
He has gone through so much already even developed PTSD and Paranoia. I hope he won't start hearing any strange sounds in his head, if something terrible were to happen... you know like... drums?
Nasty things those drums... they beat down all of your sanity and won't stop sounding...yes drums they are everywhere... can you hear them? The drums?
The neverending drums?
...*tap tap tap tap**tap tap tap tap**tap tap tap tap**tap tap tap tap*
Since you have posted your rewrites I've been rereading the entire story. This chapter will need some major reworking now that you have edited out/changed the z story, the sky rodeo (thanks for getting rid of that by the way) and the Trixie fight.
I think your rewrites have made a much better story, but they have left you a lot of clean up work too.
Keep up the good work.
I like how you made the original chapters fake entries.
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Yeah, that was wonderfully meta and outstandingly clever.
3552757 And since he did that it makes me wonder, who is reading it? When are they reading it? Are Nav and Celestia dead if we are reading the entries or did Celestia commission them to be read one more time before she destroys another piece of Equestria's dark history?
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I felt my heart give out when Taya asked if she could call Navi dad. Literally.
I mind was so over-come with adboriblness and feels that everything stopped for a moment. It is truly incredible when someone is able to make that happen through writing. I cannot wait to read what happens next and how much your already-amazing abilities have improved.
“They’re nopony more loyal than me!” Rainbow Dash yelled, seeming to slide into a combat ready stance.
I think you mean to say :There's nopony
Also, love the references to the original chapters!
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I don't like taya. she is kind of annoying and if I was forced to take care of a kid I diffidently wouldn't have liked that
I'm kind enough to bring you what Navarone should have said.
Or something like that :P
This chapter confuses me, one second they're at the party, the next second it's suddenly a few days later? wat.
Never in my life have I seen a retcon explained in-universe... At least not in a way this bluntly put. You sir, are a genius.
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3664761 Hopefully if someone is reading this. They've learned at least some genetics.
1. It's incredible how forgiving Nav is. (Kat for rape, Luna for attempt at brainwashing and murder, Rarity/Pinkie for their little rape thingy, ...) I think that so far, out of the Mane 6, only Fluttershy never did anything cruel to him/betray his trust... also maybe Twilight, not sure.
2. It's awefultastic how Nav became a dumpster for mental illnesses.
Also there are places to take care of mad people in Equestria, remember the barking pony in that one episode when Rainbow is at the hospital?
3. 30 chapters down. Oh my god...100 MORE?! YOU SADIST, YOU! SADIST I SAY!
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Throwing someone into an asylum isn't the same as helping them get better. That chick was completely fucked in the head, not affected by PTSD.
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I'm a bibliophile. I shunned friends for books and at my worst I read 3-4 novels a day.
And this story made me cry. I'm used to reading it public. It takes a lot to get that reaction out of me.
3966302 yes he is. I hate him for it.
By the fucking way, no love scandal?! That was one of the best parts, damnit! :-(
Omg when she said "can I call you dad?" I almost dreaming cried it was so cute! ;)
Wow I'm trying to edit my last comment to change "dreaming cried" to freaking cried, but every time I try my app shuts down. -.-
Awww, this is so sad! Fluttershy is losing her innocence, Nav is worrying a lot about becoming a father, etc.
Ok, I can live without the sky rodeo, but I'll miss the 'Z' arc...
Now that 'Z' never happend, what will...make twilight think/see Nav after she drink the hate potion? Or, will she drink it at all? How is Nav going to become part tree without that tea?
...thanks for making me curious again, A-hole...
PS.: Great rewrite! Now pinkie and rarity doesn't look like agrecive raping b***es!!!
Oh god, this story is going to be the death of me! It's too good!
Remove the 'to'?
3278083 I hear them... That's why I'm locked in my parents basement never to come out.
Nothing ever looks the same... The visions... The sounds... My sanity... Long gone... My only outlet...
...ponies...
So pinkie,rarity,twilight, and rainbow have 1 strike so far
Note: strikes are how many times they screwed up
thats such a sad state of mind to be in