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lets see how nav or something else manages to fuck up the pageant
8536796 Not really no.
.........I hate the ponies.....I know Navi is getting friends and shit...but I honestly want him to kill the ponies hes been fucked over by....I know he's becoming Discorda replacement for lord of chaos but fuck.....I just hate these poines....Good story but I want these idiots to die via knife to the eye.
Edit:Not saying they are badly written or developed by you....I just want them to die because I disagree with them on how they go about their life and what they do.
2nd edit: Like if I was there and I've known what these ponies did I would happily burn the world cause of edgy shit and being cut off from all I've known.....But it really amazing how you wrote Navi to accept this word and gain connectionsome to it....sometimes the world forces these connectionsi on Navi but you write it so well.
Ha! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!
Another flawless chapter in the greatest story on this site.
Interesting plan. Honestly, right now I’m more curious to see the will-he-or-won’t-he-overthrow-Celestia plotline play out than the bigger issue with Discord.
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Yes, actually. Several studies have shown that the more outspokenly homophobic someone is, the more likely they are to be homosexual. For instance, homophobes often react with even more to gay porn than openly gay people do. They can deny it all they want, but they’re the reason more socially anti-gay regions lead the way in gay porn searches.
Wow. Possible open to dating and taking charge of her life... Navs starting to grow even more as a character. I’ve realy gota reread some of the beginning the changes over time are amazing.
I don’t know who you sold your soul to to get these chapters out so fast, but I approve
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Seems like nothing more than an attempt to defend homosexuality. Not that it needs defending in the first place, people should do what they please provided they are consenting adults. That said, it seems suspicious to say a person who clearly doesn't show a preference to one thing must clearly like it.
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And secondly, look up reactance. Thoughty2 had a video about it.
This has been bothering me for a while now:
Is Taya's name pronounced at the "ay" part like "tie" and "thai", or with the hard "a" like in "day" and "okay"?
Also, this was nice chapter, though I feel a little miffed that Navarone was once again pushed into a corner and had little choice but to accept his friends' "help" . I get that the scene was crafted as a plot device that not only gives more story for Navarone to progress through and grow as an individual while at the same time forcing Nav to confront their fear of trusting others and change to himself, but I'm still not happy with the fact that he was basically strong-armed into this decision using their friendship and trust as leverage. The scene itself is cleverly crafted and clearly well thought-out, but I'm a little butthurt about how they (Fleur, Kat, and Blossom) went about it.
Nav's friends are using the power of cute for evil.
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Well your profile name is appropriate.
Awww friendship moment. I am so hoping everything he has does not crash and burn horribly, but the bating with hope and happy ending is so strong, Murphy is drooling.
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I've been saying it as "Tay ah"
You can say it "Tee yah!" if you want, like it's a battle cry.
"Cadance can finally be useful!"
Made me laugh more than it should have.
so hes cell now?
Ohboy I knew she'd be fanangled into the pagent the moment she thought it up!
I'm surprised she and Twi only now clicked a relationship as a possibility.
Also hoping Aqua doesn't hold Twi's opinions on Nav against her too harshly.
A lot of buildup and recapping in this chapter. I was left hungry for more you sadistic bastard!
Why is everyone so obsessed with sec, anyways?
Like can you have ONE conversation without trying to instigate funtime?
I was honestly hoping he would've tried to escape before listening to their proposal. Like, as soon as the words were out, couch to the face, broken window, exciting chase, and heartfelt end.
This story is feelin pretty GAY, yo.
The things that were are what makes the things exist the way they are now, Fluer.
Also, still hate Fem Nav after all this time, but I love that he hates it too. Keeps me going to be honest. I still mentally picture him as a man even after all this time.
Which is why everyone forcing him to accept it pisses me off, but also enthralls me knowing how he actually feels about it. It really did enhance the story over all.
I hope (Spoilers because hopeful prediction) he goes to the pageant, something scary tries to kill him, and that feminine facade the three are trying to force upon him comes crumbling down from him defending himself. I hope whatever does it is able to knock out his guards, and cement his image as a, "Do not fuck with me" kind of guy. I hope he saves a noble that hated him in doing so, and that the "primal animal" reputation turns into the, "Noble Beast"
reputation.
OH FUCK! I just thought of a good twist to what Celestia has done, she used to be the shield of Equestria, while Luna was the sword? Navarone adopted the sword for a while, but his position as "lady of nature" can also be taken as "shield of the wild."
He could straight up take Celestia's old title, and do the exact opposite of what Celestia wanted to happen. HEHE, I can just picture her foaming at the mouth off-story/screen.
I am in love with you right now, you know. This story is one of the few reasons I still visit fimfiction, and I'm very happy to be visiting more often.
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Welcome to adult life. The sex you want, you aren’t getting, and the sex you’re getting, you don’t want.
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no, they are using the power of cute the way it was meant to be used
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If Nav is being turned into a total hodgepodge collection of random parts, how long before Kat slips and unlocks Navs fertility so hard that their womb turns into a Ditto, and theres an extra special suprise for the Gala Queen Crowning?
Hey Nav, you know that Griffon fertility festival? Congratulations, Youre a Platypus.
Ahh, Nav the Salazzle, but Spike needs a large horde to lay so he doesnt get his by jealousy again? Or can Kat lock and unlock intangible concepts as well as mere doors and blood vessels?
So, the pageant is going to be when Nav turns back into a man, right? Seems like the crowning moment of when she finally fully accepts being a woman and openly shows it for the entire world to see is when she would get fucked over and changed back. Since she cant have nice things, after all.
(Not that i care either way what gender she is, it just seems like the kind of way she would get boned.)
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there are so many things wrong with this comment.
You know what would be amazing?
Nav suddenly turning back into a guy by the end of the pageant, as they're about to crown her as the winner
Character Development via Sledgehammer
Twilight is obviously ok with a open relationship. God even smiles was invited in for some bedroom fun together. The fact is if any of her friends wanted a piece of nav she'd probably be ok with getting a piece of them in return. Muhahaha. By now the only ones who haven't slept with nav outta her friends are AJ and fluttershy. Aj tried under the influence of the passion fruit so i don't think that counts since she didn't succeed. If twilight studies those she might be able to develope a spell to make nav fertile without the weird hybridization effect. When i read those fimfiction with hybrid pony human children i cringe ... to me there so ugly but thats my opinion. Anthros ok but pony body parts plus human face ...eewwwwww. It sorta sucks for fluttershy considering she faced down a drigonec? from mauling nav along with a manticore and put a beat down on a stupid unicorn trying to kill nav. Hell all her animals running away were nav inderectly and celestia directly fault. She's owed some loving.
You know, a reason I never particularly liked this fic was because the MC is pretty much forced into situations he doesn’t want or like, while the ones forcing him know perfectly well and ignore any and all protests. It’s one of the things I hate the most.
I hope we get to see the newspaper interviews in the next chapter, and I REALLY hope this amazing writing pace you have holds out!
I really hope blossom takes part in the pageant as a vampony.
Ouch. That must be a hard blow to Taya and his one/four changeling daughter(s)
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Taya already knew he never wanted kids. They've talked about it more than once.
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Well fuck, there's so many words in this story that I can't remember that conversation
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One of the conversations they had about it was in chapter sixty-eight.
Nav’s Inner Demon: “You’re a magical construct created for a game. You don’t have inner demons.”
Nav: “... That’s something only an inner demon would say!”
I'm laughing so hard.
Hahahahha, even the ponies know it!
Wait, really? Also I want to see Twilight's reaction so bad.
If anyone didn't actually expect this I'll be disappointed in them.
I feel like this is foreshadowing.
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Dear God, you are so right.
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It will make it all the more glorious when everything around her burns and dies, right in front of him most likely.
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Fuckin Christ I'm glad someone agrees
I've never much liked FemNav, and I've always pictured him/her as a dude bro, but it doesn't bother me as much.
What does bother me is the getting forced into situations he doesn't like part. That shits just complete bs, but it makes sense cause of the Unity plotline to stop Discord n all that. Act the right part by doing this to make sure everyone else acts right, ya dig?
Basically, fuck ponies sometimes. Y'all bitches be trippin
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Damn, beat me to it!
Cutie Dream is giving that creepy vibe kinda feeling.
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To be fair, I've said it almost every chapter that came out for a while about how much I hated it, but then I said I'll stop complaining because the author has a goal in mind with it, and then I came up with ways to accept it, which was how he hated it as much as me.
Now its become a hatred of how everyone treats him because of it, at first they didn't react, but now they're trying to get him to accept it more and more. Navarone got them to accept homosexuality, but they still can't accept the idea that what they are doesn't define WHO they are, despite that?
Its like they take only a single piece of the stuff he does as lessons, and its kind of infuriating. It DOES serve as a positive though, because it hits them twice as hard when the lessons smack them upside their stupid faces. Just like how my spoiler prediction down there hopes it will. There's just something so satisfying about people who think they know how things work getting their minds fucked, especially when it conflicts with the opinions of someone who has arguably more experience in understanding people.
OH! That leads me to another rant, I love how Navarone just accepts that Fluer has more experience in manipulating and understanding nobles, yet he himself is never surprised, and even understands the consequences of what he does involving the nobles and the news.
The whispers Fluer referenced was something he noticed not a few chapters back, and the fear they have of him he was more than aware of, he's actively used it as a tool in fact. Don't know why he made himself seem to not know about it in this chapter though....
He has even come up with the majority of ideas that would assist his reputation and already put plans in motion to repair it, and the one thing he didn't think of was something he would absolutely loathe to do.
I think Nav actually has more of an ability to control what the masses think than Fluer does, he just doesn't apply the ability because he has no respect for the talent, and merely understands its usefulness, which is why he's so appreciative of Fluer and willing to let her handle it.
I don't have anything insightful to say about this chapter, but I've been going through a lot of personal turmoil in this chapter really help with my spirits. Thank you for this chapter.
FFfffffffffuuuuuuuuuuukkkkkkkk I cant wait for old nav to come back
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That's not really how character arcs work, usually.
Griffin festival coming up... check
Twilight accompanying Nav... check
Weird fucking incident resulting in Navi's left hand to turn into a griffon's talon... ch-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c---......