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And oh how it rustled my jimmies
Oh god, that bugger off comment that is almost always said.
He got over rape pretty fast... I would at least kicked rarity upside her head...
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There were a few good time skips around that time, and we didn't see what he did in the intervening time. It's safe to say that he started avoiding those two as much as he could without it being overly suspicious.
.....ah crap..I forget umm hey finfictinites (people who come to this site if there's an established name I'd like to know it) whats that syndrome were you bond with your kidnapper/rapist/other crimes that are intimate?? cause I think Nav has a mild form of that
why why WHY WHY!!! my head hurts from all the not caring going on about all the situations Nav's been in, its like no one gives a flying fuck about anything that happens even if its horrible or illegal
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Stockholm Syndrome. He admits to having that much later. And if you think it's bad now, just you wait.
1779970 probably brony. It does mean a fan of my little pony.
So Berry Punch's cutie mark is centered on gardening? Because if alcohol didn't exist, what else would strawberries and grapes represent. And I just thought about the implications an alcoholic cutie mark. You get them when you're young, main benefit of drinking is to lose stress... poor foals.
Why does that last sentence foreshadow all kinds of shit to me?
Wow, only one eighth through, and it's not even finished... This is going to be one long read. Yay!
With a lot of modern music I agree 100%
1780034 I can't believe im saying this but I hope Luna kidnapps him. (Then Stockholm syndrome) He-He-he-heh
2366972 I don't think its foreshadowing, but referencing the part in that old castle when he had hit Trixie's horn while aiming for her heart causing that magic explosion that turned him into a pony
High-fiveing rainbow dash is pretty neat!
Also... Why did Rarity even bother to complain about the cutie mark? He has enough stuff to blackmail Rarity with anyway!
He's too nice.
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Put's Kesha to shame... Wait... So does the sound of a dying cat.
If I went to equestria and a pony tried to (I think this happend last chapter, I haven't slept for days so whatever.) rape me, THERE WOULDN'T BE MEAT ON THEIR BONES AFTER I'M DONE WITH THEM! I'D TEAR THEIR VERY ORGANS OUT AND STRANGLE THEM WITH IT! NO FUCKIN' WANT IT NEED IT SPELL, IT WOULD HAVE A OPOSITE EFFECT ON SOMEONE THAT WANTED TO KILL HER ALREADY!
That is all, I still think he's being about... Two hundred times too nice to them after what happend.
Argh! I wonder how many chapters will pass before i read about the reason behind Rarity+Pinkie happy haapy rape time.
I know what pain is,
it's great to be alive,
but when I am feeling weak,
and when I am feeling down,
she is there to lift me up,
lift me up over this rock,
yes i love my sister, applejack.
-friendship is witchcraft, sweetie bot
(I think that's how it went.)
3003914 Pussy, eat them alive, its much more painful and they die slower. There is something called torture, if you want someone to suffer you torture them and then kill them slowly and painfully. Why am I grinning?
Try listening to this playlist while reading the chapters, Songs For Madman
I'm sorry, but if you just got raped by another species, you wouldn't ever EVER be that forgiving. I think that it would have been fine to make Pinkie and Rarity cry, this once. AT the very least, I think they should have gotten punished for it.
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Well as far as I can tell, Rarity was already kinda punished if you read this passage:
She took quite the beating from Nav's dash towards the door. And he pretty much kept ignoring her excuses, which is fair, like you said no apology would be worth forgiving her. This is now on Nav's permanent record for Rarity. Pinkie maybe a different case, since Rarity was the one who decided to convince Nav the hard way (you know want it, need it spell). While Pinkie was blessed with pleasure after the 'wild ride', Nave felt like his pride was about to crack, it was painfull and it was thanks to Rarity, which would mean she deserved the harshest punishment.
Conviction meter for rape would look like this:
lvl.1 lvl.2 lvl.3
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>| Decently guilty
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>|MAX FUCKING GUILTY
Also, Nav is cheating by telling CMC's their talents? I laughed so hard how he justified that, but I also agree with him and would have acted the same way.
Moreover all mares were kinda angry at him after, learning about that, but Rainbow Dash gave him a high five/hoof instead!
I just love the way Nav talks his way out of situations and how he generally follows certain thoughts to a conclusion, it always results into hilarity!
"You are a rodeo star, a dashing rogue, you made friends with two princesses, and young ponies apparently adore you. So why, then, are you incapable of following simple instructions?” If you get rid of the rodeo thing, you might want to change this.
Ah, Nav before all the emotional scarring... Good times, good times.
By the way, liked the other really dark raping better; gave more of a reason for Nav to be a lot more bitter towards Rarity and Pinkie in future chapters.
3432940 The rape is still there. Go back a chapter. Its not as dark, but rape is rape.
I'm almost 30 and I never knew that cat had a name
Please let pinkie and or rarity come up later to tell him to be a father. Hah! What bitch? You raped me dont come at me like I owe you shit. Ill raise the kids but fuck you.
3253478 Yeah, this really confuses me, rape is easily pushed aside as a minor mistake, but when cutie marks are found out early! That is the worst possible th- NO! GOD NO! NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
3993714 It wasn't pushed aside. It is just that no one wants to mention it. Both Pinkie and Rarity would have a destroyed reputation probably and Nav is too embarrassed. I mean who wants to talk about when they were seduced into fucking two of the elements of harmony? So I'm pretty sure if it was discovered shit would hit the fan.
3993714 Most rapes are by people who know what they are doing is wrong but don't care, in this case it was a cultural misunderstanding mixed with some very unusual circumstances, so he's not entirely sure how to react to them now, apart from just forgetting it ever happened and acting normal, but his opinion of them is permanently muddied and he will probably hold this against them at some point in the story when it's appropriate, and hopefully get back at them.
Rape isn't something that when it happens, you just immediately tell someone about it, especially if it's your friends that did it, for many people it's something they never like to think about again, and these circumstances are very unusual so Nav is in a very weird spot on how to react to this situation.
That doesn't mean I'm condoning rape, I would just see myself doing nothing like Nav if this happened to me and I don't expect the story to arbitrarily punish them just because 'RAPE IS BAD!!!' I just hope later he can use this to get revenge, or at least make something go his way.
TL'DR
This is a very unusual case of rape, he's just doing what many people would probably do in his shoes, nothing.
oh, did you have to?
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I'm pretty sure you've put it about as best as it can be put.
Hmmm... this is just me but this chapter is a bit of a let down. I mean there was this situation with Nav, Pinkie, and Rarity that really had to be resolved right away (or in the least to be capitalized on for next chapters). He didnt exactly forgave them right? And neither pinkie nor rarity did enough (or suffered enough) to warrant a tolerant attitude from Navarone.
Hopefully this issue (Navarone's rape) gets the resolution it deserves in later chapters... be it one way or another with Navarone guilt tripping this two cunts until they hurt.
Hey! I resent...! Shit, I guess we're all here for it aren't we.
This story is making me think that everypony can be really annoying and a pain in the ass.
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Well, yeah. So can everybody. But being a pessimistic loner in a place like Equestria is just an invitation for the ponies to constantly try to cheer you up. Nav has yet to realize that.
Ok. I'm starting to see how Navarone (or rather, Cain) is the avatar of Discord: he's tampering with things that ought not to be tampered with. Mandy never smiles. Ranma NEVER gets rid of his curse. And the Cutie Mark Crusaders DON'T get their Cutie Marks unless they TRULY learn what they must do!... lol, I'm just kidding, I also found it annoying. I only wonder what they do about Babs Seed.
“Everypony, I have called you here today to discuss the Category X Facepalm hurricane that is about to strike Cloudsdale”
“Catergory X!? Are you sure?”
“Yes. Mach, did you find a cause for this?”
“Yes, apparently the storm was generated due to this quote”
Seriously Rarity, when you... Hurt someone, you have to give them some time. Not just force your apologies on them... Dumb poni.
“Uh sir...”
“What is it Dash?”
“Scanners are picking up seismic activity from a massive Shitstorm volcano”
“Great, it's probably due to when Twi finds out about what happened to Nav”
“Sir, what is our recommended action?”
“...”
“Sir?”
*crack*
“EVERYPONI ON THE HYPE TRAIN FOR BIONICLE 2015!!! TOOT TOOT!!!”
*multiple cracking*
“TOOT TOOT MUTHERBUCKER!!!”
Hey Nav
Eh yeah?
Do you hear that?
Uh no?
Well my friend, that is the sound of over eight million bronies preparing to kill you. My self included
Wait!? What!?
*in the darkest tone ever* Don't diss Derpy
*beheading noises*
what were they so made about he just helped them get there cutie mark
I just looooove how Nav forgives the people who raped him only a few days after.
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If I lived in this story's version of equestria, I would have ended up killing or beating the shit out of most characters.
Why is every mare he knows on a first-name basis interested in him?
Heh, Nav, probably not the smartest thing to say to a master herbal alchemist. They probably don't have Ecstasy, per se, in that world, but Zecora could probably brew him up something equally strong and nasty, and she might do just that if she thought he really wanted it. Though she'd have common sense enough to be worried about poisoning him.
That makes the Promiscuous Pinkie Pie having casual sex hypothesis less likely than the seriously-attracted-to-Nav hypothesis. Being Pinkie, she doesn't get that this is a very bad way to make him like her back.
Which, again, makes me wonder "why?"
That's the only one I disagree with -- I think Apple Bloom's talent has something to do with biochemical engineering and construction, given the things she's been shown to be good at in canon -- construction and potion-making. In other words, she's likely to become a life support engineer or chemical industrial engineer. Equestria is right at the cusp of generating a massive chemical industry -- they already have elaborate dyes and explosives, the two big drivers of such in the real 19th century.
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Well, there aren't exactly a lot of (available) stallions in Ponyville. More possible spoilers, I guess: Fluttershy's attracted to the idea of an 'Other'. Something that isn't a pony or any other sapient race, so she doesn't feel incredibly nervous around it. Something that's as much of an outsider as she considers herself. Bitches be trippin'.
What if I could modify your bone structure to let you stand and balance like a human, and then change you forelegs to have hand like things at the ends? Would you consider it then?
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And be some kind of horrifying abomination? Why the hell would you want that? Your senses and shit would still be hella fucked and you'd be in a body that wasn't your own. I can't imagine why anyone would want that.
5341789 I agree with you, whatmustido. I would never give up being the Master Race.
4917137 . . . Well, I'm a pessimistic loner on Earth, and no one bothers me.
5341789 I think you mean who WOULDN'T want to be an abomination? Freak everyone out with your appearance to the point of making them avoid proximity of you so you never have to wait in lines and have elbow room in crowd. Having abnormal abilities to aid you in life. Anyone willing to be in a relationship with you is either loves you for who you are or has some freak fetish. You might even be able to squeeze out a movie deal or write a book about yourself being a monster with a heart of gold in a society that shuns you for your appearance. Nowadays, the only way people'll take notice of you is if you have a gimmick anyway.
6031434 You'll see... You'll ALL see!
donno if this song works for the situation