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That was sad. What he had to do. A whole lot of grey in this world. Ponies, as far as you have shown us, live in a rather idyllic setting not having to worry about the harsher side of life and this human gets to see the worse of it in their own world. Celestia was right his life sucks.
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Well, I've never read any fanfictions at all, so I don't know what tropes are overused. I just tried using common sense.
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It gets worse. Quite a lot worse.
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Kind of makes me curious of what Discord is going to come away with when all this is over. Unless this is what he wants to happen to himself.
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You're quite fast with your answers; I just wanted to amend my earlier post, because I remembered one wherein that didn't happen. Angel was actually quite a courageous little defender in that story. It's just that, sometimes it's jarring how easy all the anons et al can scare him- it doesn't seem to fit the character.
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He doesn't stay scared. He's just really shocked that someone's answered his bullying. He isn't used to something that picks him up, shakes him around, and then threatens to eat him. He attempts to get revenge later.
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You assume Discord even cares about his little toy.
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Ohohoh, now that's in character!
so bangin a naga is like putting your member in snow in the middle of december [falls out of chair laughing]
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Makes sense, if you think about it. Naga are cold-blooded, so they would probably be cooler inside. Dragons are really hot inside.
If they like warmth... Now I wanna see a drunk Naga. Off of something that wouldn't kill them preferably.
He forgot to mention to the ponies that it can be used as a disinfectent and a pain reliever.
well that's going to make an interesting cider season!
Well then, the mothers and children were a nice touch, i can see him remembering this for awhile
Another error .-.
fought FOR yesterday
Im pretty sure he didn't fight blind fish XD
Must... Read... MOAR!
I'm sad ;( I have a down vote. Think it was something I said?
Him stationed up there, raining fiery death into the fray with his crossbow, made me think of the crossbow-wielding angelic hero from the DotA-clone "Demi Gods". About how it worked in that game, too; blast the dozens of enemy creeps from out of reach while your own guys mop up anything you miss.
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No, no, people are just douchebags...(P.S. How the hell do I see you in the comments of all good stories on this website?)
2982224 Magic.
1679061 ... I have a creeping fear i'll be seeing some dragon sex soon.
The giant cave with the pond was a very nice touch. Somebody should make a fanart of this, it's quite awesome when you imagine everything.
Killing fish people who have done nothing to you, then sexing up the others' and all to save the family of your rapist, who is a friend of your original inter-dimensional kidnapper… Join us next week on Fimficiton for more fun adventures in the magical land of Equestria.
i was suposed to be studying for my finals....one of wih is in a couple more hours.....yet i somehow ended readig this all night for like 6 hours straight....and i had a boner.....about a snake
3004773 Mwhahaha. We both know what happens.
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así es la vida!
Also man that chapter felt like an RPG game.
I heard "Journey Soundtrack (Austin Wintory) - 05. Threshold" the whole time in the background when he was in the naga cave.
3133602 I seriously had no idea when I wrote that comment.
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Nigga you what.
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No.
3345807 Science disagrees in later chapters.
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THX FOR SPOILING IT FAGGOT.
3549190 what did he spoil?
3345793 I REALLY want to see your conversation with Volt that you, or someone else, deleted.
Dipped the tips in the alcohol ensured they’d burn easier and longer.
Shouldn't there be something else with it?Like "I dipped". Starting the sentence with dipped doesn't seem right.
3265401 might wanna cover up those spoilers. As minor they may be.
Nice. 'Night of the long knives' very nice indeed.
Yea... you kinda lose your ability to complain about being raped, or being used for the pleasure of another, when you become a cold-blooded murderer. And yes, I'm glad, author, that you inserted that bit about his distinction between killing a non-sapient being for food, and killing a sapient being in war.
1196468 Hey. I know this is late, but I was rereading the story, for the third time, and I found this.
That sentence just kind of feels a bit derpy, Yeah?
This is why I stuck around so long. I'll give navarone some props guy thinks rather tactically. Though I'm glad he is more of a normal guy lets all the crazy shit drive him mad easier.
Enough to tranquilize a horse!
In a fair fight/in fair fights
But putting a certain tone on it, or maybe me just looking at this too long, would make this sound right albeit strange.
3046031 Yeah, I really fucking wish I could draw, I would make fanart of this fic so hard >.>
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Glad to see I'm not the only one here XD
Chapter 14
Chapter 20
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Might can isn't a mistake, it's a southernism. There's a lot of those.
I would laugh, if after the seven years and affairs like what happened this chapter, Nav is going to be overrun with claims for child support
Is this..."A fish is fine too"?
War and battle.
Nightly feasts like Valhalla.
Women, tranquility, boasting and wonderous art.
I don't know about you, but if I were Naverone, I would have hit that deal harder then Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash...and cupcakes.
7573735 okay so nav at this point is still innocentish this is like what Kat said to him he would help the person in danger no matter what so that's why he helped pinkie but as to why he flirted with Luna umm I have no clue
7573735 Not sure what you mean by Nihilism, Discord is the god of chaos, even Athena makes an appearance. And there's plenty of ghosts and spirits, suggesting there is an underworld. If we assume that Cain's god is either dead or goes by a different name (maybe Zeus?), then it still makes sense. As for helping pinkie, I think it was the chapter after the rape that said it best. She is the Pepe Le Pew to his Penelope Pussycat. The only way to deal with her is to follow the madness.
7782186 isnt it also safe to assume that the "underworld" that you mentioned is possibly Tartarus as the actual show has referenced many times?
And this story just earned itself a massive thumbs down. If Nav had gone to any effort to get confirmation from the Pies that the other naga were actually violent enough to justify this... If he had any second thoughts that maybe the group he was working with were the violent ones... Or more violent ones... If he had gone to any lengths to actually justify this slaughter... But he didn't.
This is how it came across:
"Hale might varrior! Ve'd like you to kill some untermench for us! They're horrible unt evil unt stuff unt totally deserve to be liquidated!"
"Are you sure about that?"
"Totally! Vould I lie to you? Please ignore ze hostages whose lives I'm totally not threatening."
"Sounds ligit. How do I identify them?"
"They're vearing little yellow stars..."
It begs belief that Navaroe himself brings up the Night of Broken Glass, which was a slaughter of civilians based upon vicious hateful lies, and fail to see its obvious application to what he just did. There is a rather large gap between hard men making hard choices, and stupid men following stupid orders because they lack the intelligence to realise they might have been lied to. And unfortunately, due to a stunning lack of back story and basic narrative in this chapter, Nav comes down firmly on the wrong side of that gap.
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I think you may be forgetting that nav is discord