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Ah yes, the great book of navarone has once again been updated by his prophet whatmustido.
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Man nigga you trippin'
Well things just Got even more interesting.
This is gonna be fun
every time this updates it makes my day. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
MORE SCRIPTURE! I BOW TO YOUR GREATNESS!
For real, this shit is hittin'. I am greatly excited for the next installment.
Discord seems to be all over the place. Get it? Cus like... forget it.
I expect the empty one to be either Death's, or Discord's.
I've been wanting to ask something for years. What's... what made you start writing this story? You began writing this book during season two. How did you come up with this storyline in a few days?
ugh. You tease.
I have a feeling the council of seven is going to lose at least six of its members, leading to all sorts of trouble for Navarone.
Happy New Year!
~KBO.
Everything about those mages practically screams 'there going to die or at least fail horribly'
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Now I'm curious, what would you do if all of your readers actually created a cult in your name (I don't know what you imagine, but when i think of a cult based around this story and Nav I imagine it being full of kinky sex)
I think it's cute Athena is so excited about seeing the other book person. Also, I have a feeling that a certain 3 mages are going to be fucked.
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Wait where does it say he came up with it in a few days? I remember reading a comment where he was still trying to decide what ending he wanted, that was a long time ago
oh also @whatmustido are you still letting us watch you write these in gdocs? I went through Navy bootcamp in September and missed a few
Aaaaarrrggghhh, waiting is the hard part. But the writing for the author is harder.
It would be typical if the large white book is an elephant or whale and Discord is its Mamood, and Navarone is Ahab?
Athena is the last human, hidden in her book to survive Discord, and Navarone did as he was created for, and delivered her?
25 bits for a year at prestigious uni, 4000 bits for a complete medical and construction rebuild, and you only get a couple carrots for a bit? thats some seriously expensive carrots?
And the book is inhabited by the God of Comedy, John Cleese.
Know what this calls for?
Explosive couches.
this story is what made me a brony I ran into it on fanfic.net ages ago way back on the chapter where nav first becomes aa changeling
I had a week off college and spent the whole week solid reading this story day in and out I can honestly say I have NEVER had story grip as tight as this one.
now I have several hundred fics under my belt and don't regret a thing...
even if I have to stealth the shit out of the whole brony thing.
(ABSURDLY uber god squad family and me being an atheist pony lover don't mix lol)
Motherfucking cliffhangers...
So here's a list of insane plot twists with the other book I came up with.
1) Anonymous is the dweller of that book, and navarone and Athena are about to meet him, Navarone for the second time.
2) The other book is Discord's plane that he goes to in order to not be bothered, except by those he wishes to taunt or turn into unrecognizable pawns.
3) Its Pepe-Kek, the Meme God's book. Nobody wants to leave because its the perfect escape.
4) Its the live action pocket dimension version of the kama sutra, and the reason nobody leaves is because its the greatest pleasure book ever.
5) Its where everything copied by the mirror pool goes to after they disappear, and nobody leaves because the copies won't let them.
6) Its a worm hole to the far future, where Discord destroyed everything, and Discord has been actively wiping them all out.
Anyone else got some crazy twists?
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Tch, be funnier if it was inhabited by George Carlin.
...
I have this awesome idea that at the end of the story (whether it ever gets finished or not, though it seems to be picking up/getting there a little) that Discord dies a perfect death after fixing/blessing everything or he becomes the spirit of harmony if you want it to be less sad. Basically,
he just... just... yeah.
Oh my god that cliffhanger is unfair!
Wonderfull chapter but now im starving for the next one!
Seriously thought this chapter was top notch
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Okay, yeah that would be epic if he could be written right. Especially an eternity bitching about how being a god sucks because religion sucks.
Huh, I wonder if you could trap discord in one of these books
This is exciting! The anticipation alone is delightful. So many possibilities.
The perfect start to the next chapter would be if the spirit in the other book was Carrie Fisher.
Kinda like George Carlin, but she doesn't have to write down her quips and memorize them over the course of several weeks, she just says them.
She comes into contact with another book like hers and the first thing on her mind is a dick measuring contest? Tsk, humans never change.
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He posts links to the Gdoc in these comments when he feels like it.
I hate cliffhanger.
I FUCKING HATE CLIFFHANGERS.
😭😭😭😭😭😭
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I like to think that there's more mages downstairs waiting to take their places; there will always be a Council of Seven.
The other book that hasn't yielded any secrets is far more interesting. If only Athena wasn't so excited to hop right in with Nav' as her meat shield, heh.
Is it weird that I feel like I have some sixth sense about when this story is updated?
I have my fingers crossed that it's the Egyptian God of Knowledge, Thoth. Those groups of deities were so much more chill than the Greeks or the Romans.
This feels like the most brutal cliffhanger so far just because of how excited Athena is to meet new book people. I'm excited for more book people too
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"Most of the gods that you know of were the same entities across various cultures. There were generally gods of war, love, knowledge, power, death, crafting, nature, and more." Thoth and Athena might be the same goddess I think Athena had a spell to change her gender, it probably didn't work on nav because of discord influence, though.
Did anyone ever figure out what was actually going on here, or did this just get left with about twenty seven cannons? Because last time i was here people were talking about how some part, which never got specified, was somehow unreliable. And did we ever get around to actual reasonable self preservation in the form of the MC ridding existance of anything that would harm him?
I guess Discord really wanted Nav to taste the rainbow...
In the other book is Biggie Cheese
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It's called "Notifications".
Oh, shit, they are going to meet Elvis!
Its great,
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Indeed. However, I want to look into the 'Empty Book'. I don't think it's actually empty, because if it was, there wouldn't be a book and world there anymore. Something is there I bet. Waiting. Watching.
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Has nav met death? I've forgotten
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Uh... I don't remember the exact chapter, but it was: when he was in Zebrica and took the drug, that made him hallucinate and tell fortunes to whomever he saw. In the shamans home, he met death, who told Navarone of his possible origins.
So I’ve been wondering. If Nav goes to the googleplex, is there any chance for there to be more human spirits, and if there is, could one of them be the spirit of the original anonymous? If so, would that work as an alternative soul to bind to, possibly with less changes to Nav's self?
Also, did we ever learn why the love potion way back when reacted the way it did, or was that just left unanswered?
Finally, how much of Luna's craziness/brokenness is just remnants of what discord did to her in the prolog?
I haven’t slept in about 30 hours, so I’m sorry if these are stupid questions with obvious answers.
Nav and Twilight are the best power couple. They're so fluffy! (Yes, even Nav. Well, at least one of Nav's wings is.)
Athena reminds me of the elementals in that last bit. 'My human, I saw her first' and all that. Can't blame her for being ornery around those mages, too: the three oldest, in particular, seem to have discarded any vestige of politeness or social graces in their decrepitude. And they call Twilight a rude, inconsiderate filly. Hmpfh. Doctor Anonymous would smack them all upside the head.
Can't wait to see what's next! A world where nobody's ever escaped, with a god(dess) who's, from observations of all the other results of humanity, quite, quite mad. Apocrypha was great, so this should be interesting indeed.
Thanks for the update!
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I was expecting Nav to go to Tartarus first because of the googleplex ghost problem. I guess the googleplex isn't going to be haunted? There's no way, really, for Nav to get Doc Anon's ghost for himself - either it's haunted and Nav can't enter or it's not haunted and there's no ghost to get. The only alternative was Nav goes to Tartarus first and already has a soul when he goes to the bunker. So far, there's been no way to influence ghosts whatsoever so showing up and expecting Doc Anon's ghost to save the day should = automatic failure - they all want to kill Nav.
I got the implication that humanity went extinct in the end due to lack of genetic diversity. We know there were survivors, so it sounds like the googleplexers were among them, left the bunker and died elsewhere. Or they did not die horribly enough to haunt the place.
The love poison immunity is implied to be Discord's magic.
Luna was broken during the empire building phase, long before the prologue. Discord's interference in the prologue set her up to fall for Nav.
I had a thought... Kat is cursed by the key. If she touches things with one hand they're permanently open, if she touches them with the other they're permanently locked... What if she touches something with both hands at the same time?
Twilight is going to show up all of those mages before too long. And Taya isn't a slouch either.
I am curious about the other book. It could be Zeus, or it could be Hades. I'm also curious about the empty book. Something tells me that one's whole story has not been told yet.