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Oh my fuck, how is this so long!? 0_____0
Nav is going to have sex with a spider. It must be done.
Holy shit, University Days and this updated at the same time?!
My God, it really is Christmas!
I didn't see any mistakes. Then again I am also exhausted, so your mistakes were probably overlooked. ... Whatever.
I guess congratulations are in order for your 100th dislike?
now to wait for who know how long. damn cliffhanger.
Nav really need to do a spider.
The one time I actually try to go to bed before 4....
Awesome as always!
“Yeah. Soft and squishy. Went me to bend over for you?”
*Want
i remember seeing one other error, but forgot where...
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Uh, did you miss most of his chapters?
As far as I am concerned, whatmustido is Jesus. A very fast wrighting Jesus
I don't know how you manage to write this much on your posting schedule, but good work as always. :)
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Hehe, actually I haven't even started reading it yet... But it has more than 100 chapters and over a million words, so... nuff said.
Should've just went with the spider...
Oh this is a nice setup. When they said teh webs vibrated, who was listening on the other end as they talked. Or was the entrance crew the sucker trap giving the assasination ream? What about cute little spidy, will he be yet another raisen, or end up raisin on board?
Well, that was a crazy chapter, we need more of these. That spider boy is gonna be some kind of help, and Nav is gonna be somehow convinced to keep him.
-Missy
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You will be a happy whatever gender you are
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That's just Nav for you.
Present situation excluded, obviously.
Wow, Nav was such a fucking dick to that kid i mean i understand he has arachnophobia but it is a child slave with no home, family or future Nav is such a fucking dick.
he said, looking down.” You have an extra mark here but that is all I see.
I totes want to see them gain a spider companion now
>Spider’s don’t have pain receptors
y u apostrofee ;_;
>fuck spiders
Sure!
I can't wait for Nav to use his gun on those spiders. Also, lots of explosives :)
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=XjTv9OwhCTo]
Challenge them to Twister. Turns out spiders get tangled up real easily.
Mistakes? I see 1 or 2 in there (like mild noticeable ones) but if I read this another time or so, I think it is still well written and amazing.
oh jesus I was so frieghtened when the gueens daughter made a move.
I thought you were going to go for it.
and I was scared I wouldn't skip over it.
ONE MILLION WORDS!?!?!
T he Master of cliffhangers has struck again!
Great work as always.
As usual, great chapter and just in time for Christmas. In my top five list of presents for sure.
And I gotta say, as much as I hayed Kat in the beginning, I really do relish the few times she's been utilized lately. I'm glad we're seeing a bit more of her, plus she just sounds adorable. And sexy >_>
Great, now I'm a furry.
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I have to. Profit forgive me.
That's what she said.
Happy now, Frohd?
also great chapter man, can't wait for more.
It's bad enough you're handing elementals out like Oprah.. Dont starting handing out orphans too..One warning or I'll beat you near death with a bag of Luna's century old dildo's.
Never before have I ever felt this sexually confused,
so yeah... thanks for that.
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A spider woman scorned...on the plus side spider armour upgrades
Kill all spiders
decided to comment before reading best xmas gift ever XD
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Fixed
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Dude, I update fairly quickly when I'm not spending hours rewriting everything instead of attempting to write. Usually around a week or so on average.
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Why would Nav risk his entire ship for a brat that he doesn't know or care about? Kidnap is a serious crime and stealing a slave is just as bad. Might be enough to piss the spiders off permanently.
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Why didn't you point them out?
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Athena sends her golems out to get all the books they can find. But if Nav starts writing the same thing thousands of times, she'd probably just tell him to fuck himself. Also, I have no idea what this would even accomplish.
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Happy to help.
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She might not have been on deck... Also, Nav's a fucking dick.
Wow a good chapter! i can't wait for the next chapter. Hope to see it soon.
Dragonfox
I want the spider to sneak on board. He was soooo cute!
The real question here is: did EqC(our whatever the abbreviation is) accept your glorious story?
I have witnessed a Xmas miracle. Love this story; so happy it updated.
Good
Said the spider to the fly...
BAM! featured again. Not surprised though, this is the best story I've read in a long time. right up there with the wheel of time series.
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No word yet.
awwww now i have to wait to see how it goes!!! that bitch of a spider must have ratted them out because nav refused to do as she asked..... dang..... and i will loose internet soon!! now i will have to go to the library to read the next chapter when it comes out. unless i get to start a job soon....
3683983 i think kat is going to sneak him on..... he and Taya will be best friend...
oh and he will not have a name so Nav will name him Peter Parker..... just because....
...
I feel ever so compelled to ask whether there is human x pony shipping or not...
And I guess whether it's explicit or something you can ignore out-of-hoof or not.
A story with this many words has to be dealt with more seriously, after all.
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>Dude, I update fairly quickly when I'm not spending hours rewriting everything instead of attempting to write. Usually around a week or so on average.
I do believe that is what he was saying; he was amazed that you managed to write so as much as you do in such a short period of time.
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I wouldn't hold my breath. They take all human related stories and burn them on sight.
And yes, I know you know that.
And in a completely unrelated note, I see that you got yourself a basic system of writing. On the sense of, you are not alone as you do, and, the basic sequences of paragraphs and explanations are used on each, even if none notice. Taking much more space over the apparitions of dialogue in general.
But I have no issue to that. I have read this story before the rewrites so I would need to re-read the whole thing to call it true. But as a 'veteran' reader of this story, I can say that this was your system. And after the rewrites you took them out of it since you had a fresh up on the style of writing.
So basically, you just found a mode of writing that works, and I envy you for that, but again the story it's in is driven more by the baggage it carries over the plot it has. Which can drive all sick to a point. Which hopefully, will not occur.
Just speaking out my mind as a pathetic author to a developed one.
Luck whatmustido, have a nice holiday.