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Your.
Character.
A NAME
Oh joy! More dead things!
I love the whole sheperd of the dead thing you got going for Zecora.
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What should Navarone's name be?
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That's a nickname.
I mean his "real" name is fucking ANONYMOUS. That is NOT a name.
I have to say, The book from Athena, the discussion about spirits get me extremely excited about the future arcs of this story and all the amazingly told interactions between Twily, Moonie Tara, Nav, Fleur... the list goes on is just downright phenomenal. You’re truly building an amazing world and I look forward to reading every chapter you release!
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Mate, the story is written in the form of a diary, anonymous is written in the place of an actual name.
Nav's name could very well be David, and it wouldn't change shit.
Welp, those mages are super going to die. I guess they dont believe in things having immunity to magic, even tho we have an example of it with navs ring.
Also RIP Nav. A chekov's gun in the form of a respawn tree book just got introduced. Wonder what will finally kill him and trigger the respawn once he learns how to do it.
Also I couldn't help but cackle laugh maniacally from the entire zecora interaction. Of course Nav would buy a house that's haunted
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Which one?
Navarone, Anonymous, Michael or whatever the hell the other one was?
Edit: those have been his name(s)
I got a feeling navs gonna learn more about celestias secret past. Wouldn't surprise me if alot of those who didn't agree with her committed quote on quote suicide off the edge of canterlot. Maybe even a prior student even. The alicorn amulet might have originally been made to combat a tyrannical celestia and luna. The corrupting effect might be a a feature to prevent someone from getting mind manipulated by celestia by putting the wearer into a manipulated state all ready. Just speculating thou. Like using a poison to fight a poison.
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Start the timer till horrible and agonizing death now.
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He has a name, get over it.
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I agree with this. I would buy this in a hardback book TBH.
Every single chapter makes my God Damned day. Thank you for a great read.
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The timer wont truly start until he learns how to do it, but yeah pretty much
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I'm going to name my next kid anonymous just to spite you.
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Bait
Or rather the 'Hopeless Hero'
I'm just smiling and thinking,"Yeah, more trauma; because Nav doesn't have enough already." Still though, this got me smiling. Good stuff man, good stuff. Also, at this point, I think Nav's life is just Murphy's playground.
Another solid chapter, though the ponies really do infuriate me at times. I don't think its that they are forcing Nav to do noble things, so much as their attitude about it. "We know what's best for you" really hasn't gone well for Nav in the past, and its frustrating to see these people who insist they know her, but ignore everything Nav's been through.
Outside of that gripe, everything was pretty awesome. Looking forward to the next one.
Man... Poor Navarone. If it weren't for the fact that Discord is trying to end the world I'm pretty sure he would have taken that long walk off a short cliff. I kinda feel like that Leave Britney Alone person... Honestly, I'm thinking of the words and it totally applies. "Leave Navarone alone! You're lucky he even preforms for you bastards!". Poor dude's just trying to put on a good show. Give 'em a break...
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According to Zecora, all of Canterlot is infested with 'em. We all should have seen this one coming tho; big stone castle of a house, up for sale for a while, no one else wanting it for some "odd" reason, and of course, the insane real estate mare (who might already be possessed or was). Knowing Nav', she'll somehow get dragged kicking and screaming (or stumble and swear a lot) into doing the heroic thing yet again and redeem all the ghosts in her estate.
Face is Nav', you're a hero. Even when you try not to be, actively trying not to be, you end up doing something heroic.
Makes me wonder if Discord isn't pulling strings in the background just to make Nav' more of a challenge...?
Well. Of course Nav's house is haunted. I'm not sure how we could have expected anything else. Huge manor house, constantly swaps hands, a chain of nasty occurrences leading to the demise of whoever got the hot potato, a giant stormcloud... yeah.
I wonder how many of the house's former owners (and victims) were carefully 'steered' to purchase it, by Celestia. And then I wonder how many of them were reawoken by Celestia's presence alone.
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It's been repeatedly mentioned that Navarone will never, ever reveal his true name willingly, via this diary or anything else. He wants it dead and buried for good. Me, I figure 'Adolf' or something insane like that. But because this is indeed his diary, albeit with some occasional musings of the Discordian type... we may never know. Does it really matter?
Beetlejuice! Beetlejuice! Beetlejuice!
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My geuss is that when she gets a soul, the trigger phrase from the prolog will still kill her body. this would allow Nav to then come back with zero ties to discord at all.
So I think what’s going to happen is that in one of the last arcs, Celestia is going to utter the phrase.
Of course, I could be, and probably am, completely wrong
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Varietas
oh god it's professor fleur! Damn bikes....
I agree with nav here. Burn the place down, then blow up whatever didn't burn, salt the earth, and leave it barren. just because a haunting causes events to repeat doesn't mean you can't prevent those events from happening again without an exorcism.
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE don't redeem Celestia, she DESERVES TO DIE!
Hopefully Nav won't have flashbacks to the bunker. Which was honestly one of the scariest things I've ever read.
I wonder if its possible for a single entity to represent multiple powerful ideas.
We all had the theory that Nav is gonna replace Discord, but Athena says he can become nature, and he's soon going to be actively communing with the dead thanks to Zecora, making him a shoeing to be the next God of death as well, or at the very least, an heir to it.
Either way, looking forward to some ghosts being busted, and possibly seeing Nav turn into kind of a soul-o-mancer.
fuck, i'm really starting to dislike fleur.
anyway, thanks for another great chapter.
Zecora is going to make bits out of the pet tentacle slime sex dungeon? Or just keep it to herself?
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The fuck are you on about
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Rip Popsy
*sighs* you always make each chapters ending more exciting than the last..... it's killing me!
With Celly showing up to the party, which we can assume she knew about because of spying with the "I've teleported you, so I can see through your eyes" thing, I really have to wonder if/how aware Celly is of Nav's plan to depose/kill her. Nav has talked about it several times in the waking world, and even if she did still wear the cursed ring, Celly could still be keeping tabs through Nav's friends when she knows they are with Nav.
This was not... what I had expected. A pleasant change of pace.
...Was Celestia supposed to be a guy this whole time?
Rhapsody in Blue fits this partys' feel quite well. Especially Celestias' arrival.
So Nav is a masochist... kinda always assumed that he was a sadomasochist, but eh. It kind of fits.
Why do I get the feeling, that Nav will find Anonymous in the bunker? Alive that is. In some way, shape or form.
Can't do much, except point with both my hands and say: "Keep at it."... didn't you say this was 2/3s of the story a few chapters back?
...Hell Yeah.
Great chapter as always, thanks for writing something I enjoy to no end.
The early parts of this chapter seemed a lot like a recap episode. Like episode sixteen of Gurren Lagann. Which was great, because I had forgotten a lot of that stuff.
Each chapter seems to take place within the course of a single day, or maybe even only several hours. So it will probably be three or four chapters before we get to the party in Gryphus.
Before that, however, we have an exorcism to do and three mages to check up on.
~KBO.
Pelt's third appearance.
He has now achieved running gag status.
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Whatever the name happens to be it was supposed to be an "Original name" and something that he wasnt proud of. When he talks to himself in the time travel episode thats what he says.
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To be fair, from the prolog it seems that her actions, at least since Nav arrived in equestrian, have been from a corrupted mind. That said, I agree that she shouldn’t really be redeemed. I wouldn’t be against her dying, but also would be fine with her jus5 being banished or something along those lines.
But whatever happens with her, I’m sure Whatmustido will do a good job with it. I think we all trust he knows what he’s doing at this point.
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Just waiting for him to finally actually save the day in the final battle. That or ruin it.
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Yeah kinda been hoping for a Mr. House ala Fallout:NV style craziness with him but I highly doubt that is the direction hes taking that.
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yeah, i know, I trust this writer comp0letely, I just have that irrational fear that he will redeem her....so many writers make characters do horrible horrible shit and then they just get off the hook because the mc is a pussy
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Oh geez, I just LOVE when assholes like you come into a story, a hundred and sixty-eight chapters in no less, and just suddenly make demands on it because you disagree with something. Others here have already told you why your demands are just assholeish so I won't rehash, but in short, get over yourself.
Pelt? Surely he is not... *gasp of nostalgia*
The monster hunter?! From a hundred chapters ago?! He who has only appeared twice, now thrice, for a quick misunderstanding-gag cameo before promptly dipping out within a few paragraphs?!!
Ooohhh... the memories of reading this story over the years... oooooohhhhh...
My bet is the ghosts were all too entertained by all the individuals Nav kept bringing to bed.
If anime has taught me anything, polygamy is always the answer.
A real human being, and a real hero.
*Credits music for the movie Mr.bean plays.*
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Kinda partial to Kaine myself.
I do wonder if "Dr Anon" was also a construct made from fragments of kaine, rather than the orginal Nav was made from. Maybe he's (re)created each time Discord awakens to torment him further.
Seeing Nav and Flo's relationship in shambles is just heartrending.
Wow... Your writing always inspires emotional reflection . You are one of the greatest authors of our time