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I was originally going to write most of the dinner party at the end, but I decided against it. I hate writing small talk and whatnot.
Wow, both Diaries of a Madman and The lost Element got an update today, these fics will never end
Huh, viewed it 11 seconds after it posted. I didnt know someone could explain one day in 18,000 words xD I expected Nav to atleast be on her way to Iceland by now, but nope. You managed to do so much in a day that it dragged on to nearly another 20,000 word chapter! Looking forward to the next update and the inevitable fuck-ups Nav will encounter in Iceland
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And now you get to torment us with the noodliest of noodle incidents >.>
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Another Calvin and Hobbes reader?
My vote for what the naga did. He and Kat had weird kinky snake sex. The furry bait has never been stronger!
Isn't this that fanfic that's holding a record or two for fanfiction length? Very cool to see it's still going!
No Nav... No... You're fucking/messing with his sister, you know instantly know what that meant...
*Read more of the chapter*
Ha! I knew it! Just makes it worse for you Nav! You were so much more better with Flo in you. You would have known instantly what was going on and made a bunch of funny lewd jokes about it
Very nice gun there, Mr Chekhov. Might be unloaded, but...
You never know.
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And that is one of the best parts of life.
i hope Nav gets 🌊Flo🌊 back. Because she is Awesome
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Lolz. I'm f reading both of them as well.
OK, the making Eva his daughter part got me to tear up a little.
So good job there . . . . you bastard.
A new chapter with over eighteen thousand words. What a great birthday present. Too bad I will not be able to read it tonight. But tomorrow...
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Sleep is for the weak!
It's been a while but how far back was Eva's introduction? All I can remember now is the everfree changeling with multiple personalities, I don't recall at all when she ended up in the empire. Also great chapter as usual, I never tire of this story
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Chapters eighty-one and eight-two.
Barrels.
Peanut Butter.
46.
What do all these things have in common?
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you know i was just thinking the same thing. Good thing i dont need to get to bed early tonight like usual.
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Strong and weak are artificial constructs. Or is that good and bad?
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You bought forty-six barrels of peanut butter?
Frickin' sweet! A new chapter to close out my birthday!
A chapter brimming with delicious references to chapters long past... yeessss...
But what 'bout that howling and crying though?
Fucking awesome chapter! Glad to see the moral dilemma with Flo playing out nicely. Can't wait for Iceland
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isn't the chase written by multiple people though?
Well Dee Doo, a chapter for you, fuck me up, with a duck, and fuck till my balls pucker up.
Predictions:
Spike gets laid by dragoness.
Nav gets laid by dragon.
Fire elemental bonds with spike.
Upon arriving to Tartus Nav will make several Assuie jokes.
Flow and Nav will have a chapter long discussion and thus character development will happen.
Author will make a small foreshadow for something that won't be picked up again for another 60+ chapters.
PAUSE.
Who's this bitch again?
UD: Got it. Continuing.
8386765 Those aren't predictions, those are the story structure.
Some of the best stories you'll ever have are the ones that happen while drunk. If you remember enough, that is.
Is that a reference, or am I just trying to connect nonexistent dots.
I agree with Celestia's point more than Cadence's, he even already has proof that she "fixed" his mind with representations of his psyche being "nurtured."
However I can't see him NOT having a water elemental in him, nor can I see one being with him that isn't Flo as all the other elementals would be too protective.
Maybe the next elemental will merely be a protective shell that protects against psychological and physical attacks, rather than preventing or influencing psychological damage.
Also, ghost presence still being relevant, and womanly, not to mention how strange Navarone has been acting even according to people who know him really well like Spike, even Celestia called him out on his changes being pretty extreme.
I am still a firm believer that once the ghost bitch gets re-deep sixed, he'll go back to being a masculine dude bro that despises dresses, and his token unhappiness will return. Considering Flo was also trying to make him accept the change, if I remember right anyway, her being gone too will help the progress of getting old Navarone back.
Also, Celestia saying she's considering abdicating the throne, and will do so if Navarone says so, is filling me with a sense of awesomeness towards Nav. Dude only needs to ask to be a king, and all the countries would run to be his ally too.
Hypothetically speaking, couldn't Nav setup a government to rule if Celestia abdicates, much like the griffons? I would think she'd travel with him and assist him in taking down Discord, and would even be a great excuse to actively train him. Same goes for Luna's redemption/punishment, helping to take down the being that made everything so fucked in the first place is a damn good direction to take.
I really want manly Nav back that hated being called Mom, and preferred Dad. Felt as much attachment to that character as Celestia- ....
As someone who doesn't love him, but heavily enjoys the personality of him.
Kinda hoping Nav gets pregnant in Iceland by another dragon. Oh i hope Nav runs into Kumani and has a massive bared clawed fight.
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There's one problem with that. It's already been stated ages ago in-story that, currently, he has no soul and, unless he accepts merging with her, he's helpless against Discord's puppetry. (I can't remember when, but, obviously, it was after he acquired her.)
(And we already know from both that part and the prologue (which Celestia can't remember) that he's effectively a piece of Discord without Discord's memories.)
The way things are going with Nav, eventually hes going to end up having the S.M.I.L.E squad, which includes the Ministry Of Change.
Im hoping that they very helpful female griffin got left with an extremely lasting impression of Navs groups helpfulness.
Just because the Naga wasnt avilable, dont mean some pussy couldve shown him a good time, even if she was a little mead.
I have re-read this story a couple of times, and when I look back on your first chapter and compare it to current chapters, you can tell that you have come far in the way you write your chapters.
Keep up the good work.
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Hell, to continue that, here's what I was able to remember and piece together about the relationship between Nav and Discord:
Prologue:
Chapter Sixty-Four:
Chapter Seventy-Two:
Chapter Seventy-Three:
Chapter One Hundred and Thirty-Six:
From these, I can only conclude the following:
1. We know from these snips that Navarone is a piece of Discord that doesn't know what he is.
2. Given these snips, the memories match the appearance, so Navarone is apparently "Cain".
3. Discord was either created by or born of Cain, but Navarone's past self is fighting Discord.
4. Our hero hates his name enough that he apparently likes to come up with aliases.
My hypothesis is as follows:
1. Discord either is Navarone's potential future self or was spawned from him somehow, and both Cain and Discord, like Anonymous, are tacky aliases.
2. Given that Discord knows how to be in multiple places at once and how to create flesh golems, Navarone's alternative self in the past may have already been subsumed into Discord and what Navarone met may just have been another flesh golem.
3. The memories extracted in the past were the mechanism by which Navarone damned humanity. (I'm not sure which chapter, but I remember it being stated that Nav and/or the man he became were responsible for humanity's extinction.)
Now, I can't reliably guess at how Discord came to be, but, given that Nav influenced Flo just as Flo influenced Nav, I'm starting to wonder if Discord is a case of one fucked-up human's self-loathing personality somehow imprinting onto a force of nature that, until then, hadn't been sapient.
Either way, given that just one millionth of Discord's experiences nearly drove Luna mad during the prologue, I doubt anything Nav could experience would allow him to wrest control from the main Discord personality... so I can only assume that the epic, heroic final triumph will have to involve merging with the girl's soul and, in doing so, becoming a second Discord-entity whose mind has been given the chance to heal.
Speaking of which, it occurs to me that the path Luna has travelled in the story might be due partly to the echoes of seeing that millionth of Discord's experiences. As he narrated, "Her glimpse into my mind was lost, and with it the reason for tears. Her mind would be haunted for a while, but she wouldn’t know why."
Also, reading back over those bits, I'm left with one thing I'd forgotten about by the time I read chapters 74 and beyond:
...which means that, if humans are to ever come back, it'll have to be Nav that saves them, either by the past Nav exercising his genetic engineering chops to adapt themselves to the environment or by the future Nav exercising newly-acquired Discord powers to make the world hospitable.
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That's not necessarily a Flo thing. I mean, he knew the two of them did weird shit together, but he wasn't expecting her to literally tie him up and leave him somewhere while buzzing.
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Don't worry, that's just Pinkie.
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None of these are going to happen just to spite you.
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It's not a reference. Just a griffin that likes fucking his boyfriend in the air while he's completely helpless.
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Dude what the fuck
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Nav could probably try to set up a government if Celestia abdicated, but he probably wouldn't be the only one trying to get a piece of the pony pie, so to say. Celestia would have to make sure a new system was ready to go before she bailed.
With Taya being my favorite not-Nav character, I do have to say the token "That adoption was a bit sudden and soon and without asking anyone, don't ya think?"
Also
were the path I chose*, or is the path I choose*.
That's the only one for today.
And I find your lack of reply to Ssokolow's huge wave of predictions that make a fair bit of sense to be fairly disturbing.
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Eva asked Nav. Who else would she need to ask? And it was sudden, but she didn't really have many other chances in the near future.
Also, fixed.
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Haha I meant sudden for Nav.
Basically I'm saying my reaction is the same as Taya's was.
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Nav doesn't need permission to call anyone else his daughter. Taya is an important part of his life, but she doesn't get to run it.
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Think about it at least, at least do the fight scenw between Nav and Kumani.
Missing "of".
Apostrophe should be a close quotation mark.
Missing "that".
The new format kind of threw me for a moment, but I compensated easily. I think my favorite part was when Navarone made Shining Armor cum.
Next chapter Here Be Dragons.
~KBO.
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Nav is at least four times Kumani's size as a dragon. It wouldn't be a fight. It would be a stomp.
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Fixed.
Fixed.
Not a mistake, just worded poorly.
What new format?
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I know it would be EPIC! She could do like Erin from Attack on Titan, just punts Kumani.
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The non-indented, full justification and spaces between the paragraphs format.
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That's because fimfic went full retard. You can change the formatting to read it properly if you so desire, but it still fucks up in a few places.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tWgpCmni6kJAoAX2gy-qPr0STT-F8IU0sKWBFn7Vmyc/edit
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His predictions are horseshit,
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because they're all predicated on the idea that "Anonymous" is the Cain who first evoked Discord. Discord had already been evoked long before Anonymous' time, since Merlin and friends were fighting him 1500 years prior. It should have been obvious that the Cain trapped in Discord's mind as punishment for evoking him is the biblical Cain.
Logically, Anonymous is "the only being I ever truly despised" and unconnected to the biblical Cain. Navarone enters the story with Anonymous' image, a purposeful selection of memories assembled by Discord, and tweaked to perform his function as the puppet. Navarone is unconnected to the biblical Cain by anything but name. whatmustido has written over and over the Navarone is a puppet, golem, automaton, etc. The most you could claim is that Navarone is a work of art and reflects Discord in that way. And yet these comment threads are chock full of people who insist that Navarone and Discord are the same being.
And, whatmustido almost never replies to speculation regardless of its accuracy so no reply means exactly nothing.