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What is Navi scared of the most...commitment. That is both sad and hilarious at the same time.
This party is gonna be entertaining.
Heh, I spy with my little eye a simpson's reference. Otherwise great chapter, thought I don't get the point of adding any kind of clop anymore because I'm pretty sure nav has done it all by this point, and any new sex scenes would just be a repeat. In-fact! I don't know why you added clop scenes in the first place. I'll get off my soap box now.
Another day, another complaint :D
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Chapter eight--the first chapter with clop--has six hundred and fifty views. The two chapters on either side of it have 360 and 375. I have clop because of my audience. Sex is what they want to read, so my first sex scene was hardcore rape, designed to make the person reading it feel terrible or pissed off. I like to think that set the stage for what kind of story this was going to be.
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Oh right, we talked about this... because it's what the "people" on this site want to see...
Noticed some errors.
I slipped the key into a pocket.
“ I'm a trained assassin,” Kat answered.
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Those were some pretty serious fuck-ups. I should have caught them. Oh well. I blame Bizzles. They're fixed now, either way.
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That and I like writing it. I have a dragon fetish.
Shits gonna get freaky aint it? Should be a fun ride.
You're like my hero.
It appears that almost all the species want Nav. The Pinkie punishment, that could seriously screw up Navs plans. Everything is just getting funnier with random gender swaps. I think its fair to say that almost everyone has some dragon fetish. I have a good guess about the proposition from Shiny and Cadance.
1398009 first who the fuck is Bizzles? second, awww yeah! scalies are awesome!
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Bizzles is one of the people that proofreads my story. He's also the person among our group of friends that always gets the blame for everything, especially things he has no control over. Car breaks down? Blame Bizzles. Erectile dysfunction? Bizzles. Aliens take over the planet? It's all Bizzles's fault. He is like Spike to Navarone.
1398352 ah. hes like my friend Ben
Sad to say but the journey ends here for me. I wanted to stop at the point Luna used the gender changing stones and raped Nav. But I read on. And the assumption that Cadance raped Shining Amor the same way *shudder*
Lunas Heat cycle was disturbing, very much so. Again I read on.
Now Pinkie stole the stones and wants to use them for "fun" on Nav and hes ok with it? I´am not that naive to belive he won´t change his personallity in the time spent in Equestria, but this isn´t the same story anymore.
Its "Navarone the punchingball who will go with anything" and not about a Human that trys to have a live in a different world.
Still I wish you well for the future and hope you get many readers.
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Cadance didn't rape Shiny. It was something he was willing to try. He just didn't like it and didn't want to try it again.
Luna's heat was supposed to be disturbing.
I suggest giving it two more chapters, but I understand perfectly if you don't want to. Nav has changed; he has learned that it's easier to go with the flow and get revenge later rather than risking more and getting it immediately. He's about to emotionally torture the hell out of Pinkie and Celestia. That said, I do understand stopping.
My god you have made my day! And now I wait for the next few chapters....patiently waiting....with my popcorn and soda.
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An hour and forty-five minutes.
1403078 This story is like a movie, it keeps getting better and better with so many twists!
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YOU CAN'T BLAME ME FOR EVERYTHING!
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Fuck you I can't. I'll blame you for whatever I want. It's not my fault that you're guilty of everything evil.
So... Her first plan didn't work, so she's taking it to extremes?
This was interesting...
heh heh
Trollpinkie to the rescue!
Nope! Your in for a very FUN week.
Well it wont be fun for you but itll be funny as hell for us
1398352 So he is Dinkleberg?
1478846 DINKLEBERG!
I faintly remember him taking his ring off before juggling the gender stones... I take it his ring doesn't actually block their effects?
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It doesn't block their effects, no.
What color is Kumani?
-_- goddamn gender stones. Always ruining my goddamn clop . I can't wait till he destorys them.
2803416 I don't know.. There was a "male" and a "female" involved, so my brain was convinced it was fine.
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I can't wait to be a gramma- Ah here we go. Sir your grammar is terrible.
Destorys? That's clearly not a word.
A space on both sides of a full-stop...
-_-? Seriously get cho-self some grammar, boy.
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Even my pet Dinosaurs death?
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Dragons are awesome, oh and...
I too have a dragon fetish, kinda, I just think dragons are awesome even without the sex bits, and when you throw those into the equation it sometimes is pretty much a fetish, and other times is just the same as without sex. Depends on the sex thrown in, if dragon is female I love it. Especially if dragon is anthro.
It's nice to see Nav finally getting less rapey partners. Also: Pinkies punishment is fucking hilarious.
2748039 There's a picture of her later in the story, but she's pretty gray if I remember correctly.
Edit: Nvmd, that's just a fitting picture.
I imagine her red and gray though.
...
Go read "The Stone One's" and look for the chapter with a dragon picture, can't remember which one but that's kinda how I see Kumani except slightly different.
3044159 good job with that concealment. Dragons are pretty cool though. And some have epic mustaches.
And in my mind I'm just reminded of Bruce lee, enter the dragon. And charlemane?! I love it!
3044159 DRAGON FETISHES, GO!
“This can make anyone tell the truth.” I concentrated. “What did you do to me during the march?”
I noticed the other varitations of this were capitalized, but when Nav said it, it wasn't. Example :
Kumani looked over to me. “What happened during the March?”
Kat gulped. “If this is about what happened during the March… you can do anything to me! Anything you want! Just don’t kill me!”
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Fixed.
2665245 if it did,wouldn't both paties(IE:the stones and ring) both be constantly putting out energy,and it would not disperse because of both parties counteracting each other,and thus creating an infinite energy source?
4275264 different magic, like with flo, she is using magic that works with the ring on
Navarone is going to be during a meeting and just suddenly a Female. Fucking Pinkie, man.
Why do I sense it's going to be JUST that?
this is like a Corruption of Champions crossover
I have a question for whatmustido if you wouldn't mind. About how big do you envision the gender changing stones?
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About the size of marbles. Smooth, but not spherical.
dam i'm liking this story and yes dragons are simply awesome (with or without sex involved)
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I'm really not trying to be difficult, but… marbles come in a lot if sizes. Elaborate please?
5941529 you know those gumball machines that dispense bouncy balls for 50¢? A little smaller than that.
4275264 I think the only person with an inkling of how magic works in this verse is whatmustido. I don't know what you're basing your assumption on, but I think it's unfounded.
>Her eyes lost concentrated.
Bit of a fuck up here