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Suddenly giant spider! Oh what fun we have.
I take it this has been the first time in a very long time Chrys has been truthful to someone else about her desires. She's still a manipulative monster, but she wishes she wasn't.
Epic
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Assuming she's telling the truth and not just trying to manipulate him.
Once more I'll whine about Discord: Discord's OP status makes me grind my teeth together, and cry myself to sleep at night
Otherwise... pretty sweet; however, you did get my hopes up with the 'crack', I was thinking some sweet human tech like one of those godlike firearms that we humans posses.
Nav got a new toy. A sword on an alter in the middle of a petrified forest. Common sense would tell you to not touch it. Apparently Chrysalis did not learn that lesson. Is it magical or enchanted in any way? Does it have any important or interesting history? Will it play an important role in the future? If answering any of those questions would be giving spoilers, then by all means do not answer. Good chapter as always.
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Chrys is really not as genre savvy as she claims to be.
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Well she is surrounded by creatures that are literally bred to follow orders without question. The lack of common sense is probably rubbing off on her. And she is limited to whatever literature she can get. So she probably doesn't know the many cliches that exist. Noticed how she knew a variant of the King Arthur story?
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You'll find some things out next chapter about that sword.
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She's smart, but she's not that smart.
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Chrysalis can get as many books as she wants. All she has to do is send a changeling off to fetch a few from any town. The problem is finding time to read them.
Ah, reading a new story from you always brings a smile on my face, for this is such a good read!
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!
Underground petrified forest, sword in the stone, enter giant spider... poor Nav, always getting the raw end if the deal. I have to agree with romaniumium in the whole absurdly OP discord thing, that just doesn't do it for me. I like Nav, I have grown attached to him in some ways and it pains me to think that he is just a construct of discord's imagination. Taya is also one of my favorite characters, she must be going through quite the mental turmoil having to deal with the knowledge that Nav is just an illusion.
hmm i know there was a name for these giant spiders cant remember what it is tho...
tarterus is next?
first off
That is the best damn thing that has ever come from discord, you smart son of a bitch! i love those platypusies
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No need to elaborate...
Damn arachnids, ruin everything great
This kind of thing is why history will remember you as a literary hero.
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platypusies? BESTIALITY ALERT! Friggin platypus rapists...
2151662 how about giant 8 legged freaks of nope nope nope fuck this I'm out
'What is this, fucking Skyrim?'
'Gigantic spider'
:3
VS giant spider needs boss battle music:
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Tere's a gun that makes a crack sound when it hits?
3122064 Well put good sir.
Typo? Anyways, I love Discord but your version is so... so... OP I guess?
Calling it: a final battle between Nav and Discord, Nav having ascended to Godhood or some "omg wtf is going on" shit like that.
Chapter 52 search for
do you mean off/on, off and on, off or on? any of those three would probably be better.
My money is on the fact that he will see a pony give birth at some point in this book.
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For him to see it, I'd have to see it so I can describe it. And dear god, I don't ever want to see that.
Never in my life have I ever despised someone ( fiction or non) as much as I do Discord. He is a gutless, arrogant, heartless piece of shit and deserves to burn in the deepest caverns of hell several times over in unrelenting agony. This fucker should have his ass kicked back into whatever shithole of insanity he crawled out of. He is a bane and a curse to any life form he comes into contact with. When he dies, he better fucking suffer.
Amazing character development whatmustido. I am thoroughly enjoying this story and can't wait for more.
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Billions of years of isolation and lonelyness would do that to something, morally superior or otherwise.
I've only just read this, so I have no idea what happens in the later chapters, but I really hope Nav kills/ badly injures discord.
5439005 John De Lancie is awesome though.
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Sounds like someone needs a little...perspective.
-Prologue
I know this comment is old, but I couldn't help myself.
“BOO MOTHERFUCKER!” He jumped so high I thought he would hit the roof. By the time he recovered, I already had the knives at his throat.
Oh sweet Celestia I laughed until I was barely breathing.
Also nice touch with the skyrim reference
6053298 I'm not sold on that one. He can be a prick, although if he respects you and you don't bug his weird coffee thing he's pretty chill.
giant spider is Araxxi.
5884651 You probably already know this because this comment is so old, but on the off chance you don't, Nav is a fraction of Discord. Read the prologue.
I smell anElemental.
Hehehehe, rereading is great.
Dang...I always love a good channeling origin story, but this is just twisted.
I would just love to try my hand at remaking the chaos he caused, but I don't know too much about chaos in the violent sense.
I could make some pretty thrilling stuff happen though!
Yeah, he's got more guts than me. I'd nope the hell out at "giant spider".
Why is it always spiders, man? *shiver*
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It's almost time....
Huh, Ants doing a Raid.
Do I spot a pun here, gg whatmustido gg.
God this part made me laugh alot
I'm not sure about this one. Did you actually mean shape distances?
at hiding things
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Shit's unfucked, fam.
Did you do a THEM! reference with those ants?
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Never heard of it.
aww :(
HAHAHA smart
Interesting, I would like to know that story
aww fuck, getting denied by your own daughter when asking for a peace treaty.
This chapter was great. Loved the backstory that we were given. Adds more detail to the story and the alicorns. So I'm assuming Twilight will never become an Alicorn?
Awww shit. We gon' meet Flo!
It's surprising how much you pick up reading a story for the second time. Little things.
I am sorely disappointed, no one even mentioned eight legged freaks! I mean COME ON!
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Yeah, holy shit, i'm on my second full reading, coming from chapter 200.
I'm picking up SO MUCH it's not even funny.
I'm even using some of this material to make a D&D world setting loosely based on MLP, adding some material from some other fanfics and a healthy dose of my own imagination
Fucking shelob go back to Mordor.