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Yeeeee boi!
JESUS you spit these out fast..
Jesus Christ, whole lot of shit just went down. Love that Discord came in and was basically like 'hey shitlord, yeah I made you, do something about that before I get bored of you'. Points to Twilight for actually being pretty chill about seeing Celestia get her shit pushed in.
Swiggity swole, Nav's comin for that soul.
This is the best story I've read in my lifetime! I'm glad you exist, man!
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and they still come out with high quality
Celestia is really just a very powerful and manipulative child.
Also, the night before Nav was like "hey wtf no that's dumb" about Kat and the sexing but now it's a welcome distraction..? Um.
still, want celly to die but I can see Nav's reason for not being too fast about it
You can’t just… laze about all day in your own filth., as appealing as you might find it.
Punctuation thing needs fixed.
I feel like you recently either got a lot of free time, motivation, or you sold your soul. The speed of chapter updates is appreciated though.
I think Celestia is going to need a foalsitter, but I'm not sure who could be the best...
Cadence... She already have Flurry (or is going to have) and have experience with stubborn fillies
Luna.... This time she will be the big sister and could take care of Celestia
Chrysalis.... Why not? She have her own empire and could laugh at Celestia
Navarone... To add more laugh to the situation
Man, I just love that little interaction with Navarone and Discord. Lol. Keep up the good work and keep pumpin' these out fast as fuck, boi.
My sides hit orbital velocity at this point.
❤
I can just imagine filly Celestia on the throne making angry baby noises at nobles while throwing random things at them
looks like Celestia Gonna go down Hard
I have asthma and this legitimately nearly killed me
my sides are halfway to equestrian by now and they took the scenic route
I don’t know why but Navarone felt very alucard from Hellsing Ultimate Abridged this chapter.
Celestia was a healers apprentice I'd laugh if it turned out Luna was a nobles daughter. Here she is acting all high and mighty over everyone and she's a commoner same with chrysalis. Luna parentage wasn't really spelled out. Navs right the only reason she's in power is because discord wanted it that way. Truthfully being part of the canterlot nobility and a monkey queen means the spider contract of peace probably extends to equestria since she's part of the ruling body ... it's a stretch and lawyers would be fighting over the wording of the contract for years. Hymn..... wonder if the monkies will send or did send a delegation to equestria. Good place for nav to get servants and guards. He could make up a excuse to why he's not being held by spiders anymore.
This chapter blew my mind. Absolutely damn phenomenal.
Keep this shit up man. You're doing something right
I think this might need to be changed or addressed in the chapter.
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It was.
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She'd finally be talking their language then.
I lostit at that exact moment. The quality of this story never stop to impress me. Keep up the great work, but don't burn yourself out.
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Ah, yes, you're right, i'm just blind
So the first half of the chapter i really liked. I enjoyed the world building immensely, and while it was surprising. it makes sense. So all of those are great. The second half of the chapter really fucked with the pacing. Which given the subject matter makes sense to have the pacing all over the place, since discord is in the picture. It felt like this was the beginning of a new Tolkien-esque novel with discord serving as the call to adventure. Ill withhold judgement on whether the section is good or not. but this is one of the low points for me. Its possible that the pacing was fucked up intentionally. And i do like slow-burn stories, so there is definitely bias.
We herd you liked to fiddle your old tune, so we put Discord in your miserycord.
Pity about the Cheer, at least Nav didnt decide to nuke the building from orbit as well. As the only way to be sure.
Bought fucking time something happened to Celestia, at this point I wouldn't be surprised if a very large majority of this stories fan base is rooting for her to be executed, especially with how she treats Nav.
This is by far my favorite chapter in a while!
I was intending to not comment, (yet,) but seriously, this keeps getting better, I love it.
i.imgur.com/LVAj8XE_d.jpg?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=medium
Every chapter only gets better! Id say compared to most other fics this is 20 percent cooler!
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That's always been a general feeling, but then again, we're reading someone's personal writings to which we're pleasantly reminded, "If you're reading this, go fuck yourself." Nav is writing what is felt to be actually important, from the detailed conversation with Athena to the the fact they had "dank" donuts. Because, really, would you want to forget donuts that good?
It's tricky to follow sometimes, but then when is a person easy to read?
God, I fucking love the antics that happened in this chapter. I will remember this one well.
Heh, the thing with Celestia was certainly an enjoyable twist. Trying to imagine her in her butthurt anger was fun.
Hymn... looks like nav has two more places to check. I mean he specifically targeted two areas with curses there must be something he wanted destroyed very badly. Can't wait for the bunker chapters. Maybe run into some non pissed off ghosts or it would be interesting if he found some cryogenicly frozen people there.
Im about to reread this bitch just to keep myself entertained untill the next chapter comes out
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I legit forgot that this was an actual diary.
I just love the zero amount of fucks Discord is giving right now.
I really hope that Nav succeeds in getting a soul, even if it changes them. Learning magic and becoming Nature would also be huge, because the path that Nav could end up taking would lead to them becoming Discord. Maybe if Nav became the new Discord the world would become better, but that would have to rely on Nav ending their journey being a better person than Discord.
It's also really concerning that Nav is having so much trouble just being a person. Hopefully if they get a soul they can become the person that the world needs to end Discord.
Thinking about it, it would also be really good to give Nav more of Ava's personality. Ava seemed like a noble and righteous person who loved and looked after others. If Ava becomes the dominant personality for Nav, with Nav's knowledge and experience and Ava's drive as an actually person I can definitely see them leading the world into a better place from which they can get rid of Discord.
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personally the whole nav is discord seems really obvious with the similar mismatching wings and dragon tail, he prob tries to become nature and drinks from the spring and becomes discord or something but that almost seems too obvious so idk, i still hope for a good ending where nav is still nav but actually happy and living life as a nobody with a few friends
Excellent chapter.
Fortunately I started taking notes a while back to try and keep up with all the loose threads, such as 'Red' who I honestly thought was going to be a Fire Elemental.
Though I am curious. Magic is critical for life on Earth, so wouldn't that mean that Discord would follow whatever life left the planet? Or at the very least still be able to sense it to some degree?
Also despite all the evil and the whole 'killing a solid chunk of humanity' aspect, this Discord still seems like he'd be fun to chill with for a couple hours, assuming he didn't decide to turn you into a fish or something.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15imlItuUVXPnm7UsDTOGJbaMRYSufK2Y8JqOp729fak/edit?usp=sharing
My theories and all the notable or useful information I thought I could gather about Discord. Enjoy. Please tell me if I missed something either here or on the Docs
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I'd give credit to the idea of Nav getting his old soul back, since Discord talked to him as if he were still calling himself anonymous, even though he accepted his identity as Navarone.
Considering how far ahead Discord looks, that could be taken as a foreshadow of him regaining himself in some way.
Anyway, great chapter, loved the Celestia bit, can't wait to see how Twilight explains the ordeal, and how Equestria operates with Celestia being in the condition she's in.
I do have one question to the author, though....
Why doesn't Nav just have the collective of Canterlots nobles cast "deceit's end" upon him, so he can just tell them what he is and what his goals are, as well as his relations? Wouldn't that quell the rumors about his reputation much quicker and effectively than playing polite mind games?
*Edit*
Also, you are popping these out faster than a rape slave on speed pops out babies.
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Silly person, why use logic. Probably something something don't want his privacy invaded, everyone needs secrets, something like that. Or just a general state of distrust. He also can't assimilate power too quickly ESPECIALLY since Celestia is sketch af against him
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Well, at this point, she STRAIGHT UP thinks he's Discord in disguise. Like anything he does even if remotely against her will be seen as an attack now. Might as well not give a shit at that point in that case.
And, um.... I kind of want to see him collectively shit on everyone's plans for him to be liked, by taking an even quicker path with less faked personality. Destroys rumors, destroys any plans his "friends" had for him, and serves the purpose of him not needing to pretend to be someone he isn't.
Two and a half week re-read. Not bad. This is a nice updating schedule you have too. A couple chapters a month is a great change of pace from a few chapters per year.
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She can do a lot still probably. Who knows she still has nobles on her side and most of the public
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Again, she seems so set in thinking he's Discord's agent that she's likely gonna use whatever resource she can to be rid of him anyway.
Hey guys, as we are approaching Tartarus, Prophecy discussion and theories. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1szjk20bW4768Mbi_vTwP3qefCczm3GzX6Id07tU07ZE/edit?usp=sharing
They're pretty garbage considering nobody knows anything yet, but who knows
Feel free to comment
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But can she? Honestly no idea what is going to happen. Is she going to stay that way? Limits her power and gives Navarone a time to setup, in a plot convenient way